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My Crazy #life ((Fiction)) Once upon a time, Oh Nevermind it's not one of those kind of stories. Well, where should I begin? I'll start from the beginning. Okay, *One Year Ago* I was just a regular girl. I should introduce myself. I'm Kaylee Payne. You have NEVER heard of me. But my Brother is Liam Payne. Ya, One Direction. Ya. Seems like it would be a good thing but No. I'm 17 now, Chesnut brown,long hair. I'm 5'11" and Skinny, But not TOO skinny. Well, Nothing is normal around here, but the boys are like brothers to me. ((Do you want me to continue?))

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Kenna Simon
Yes!!!!!!
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Beth
Yes!!!
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🎩A Mad One🎩
It's a very original idea with an unoriginal charecter and opening. Try to spice things up a bit; add some flaws, some quirks, something interesting that makes this charecter stand out! Because right now, she's sounding like a typical Jane Doe, and that is poison to a story! Try writing in a different style; more descripton maybe? Overall, it was OK, but i'm expecting better in the future
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LoveIsComplicated 💔
@madhatter agree I like it but I mean one direction? Interesting read but yes add more description make it stand out from anything ever read before.
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Taylor
Okay thanks. I'll work on that. And it's a fanfic.so that's why 1D is involved. I have many ideas but I get writers block. @madhatter
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Taylor
@loveiscomlicated ^
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🎩A Mad One🎩
Then do my 100 topics challenge
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🎩A Mad One🎩
And, just so you know, Opuss likes original things. This is a fanfiction, and just so you know, there's no catagory for it :/
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Taylor
@madhatter @madhatter
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Taylor
I'll try the topics.
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sara-/\
Yes please !! 😉
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LoveIsComplicated 💔
@YouShouldKnow no problem hope the feedback helps.
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HaNnAh!!!XoX<3
Yes!!!!
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MysticallPixie
@YouShouldKnow please continue!!! 🐳
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