Darkness & Despair I feel blind, engulfed by dar..

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Darkness & Despair I feel blind, engulfed by darkness and isolation. The only thing I can feel is the cracked concrete ground. My senses are slow, and my movements haphazard. The only sense I can work is smell. Slowly, I siphon the petrichor from my surroundings, forcing my nose to tingle. And as I'm looming through the silence, I suddenly see two bright red eyes, illuminating my own drowsing ones in their reflection.

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Only wrote this due to boredom. Took a few minutes, I will work on it in the future.

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@ryskew For a quick effort, it's very good!! ^_^

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I just realised a big mistake saying smell was the only working sense! Haha, I'm going to blame the fact I wrote it at 1am.

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Nice use of petrichor, if I had a list of favourite words that would be up at the top!

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Same! As well as Sololoquy - I LOVE that word.

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