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LuciusDei
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Little Kestrel On, little Kestrel, away you fly; Catch the wind and soar on high. Flit along on wings of song, Beyond the bounds of mortal rule. Let no evil do you wrong, Nor persons seek to ridicule. With swiftest sight, and ears so keen, Evade the chains that you descry. Heed no jester, king or queen, Go, brave Kestrel, away you fly.

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EddieC
This is lovely and I like the simple format rhyme structure. 💚
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Lauren
Love this! 👍👏❤
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Moriah
I second what @eddie12309 said!! This is beautiful!! I am completely blown away! 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
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LuciusDei
Thanks for the lovely feedback, folks. I should explain a little about this poem. It is a short nursery rhyme from my novel-in-progress. It was told to my protagonist, Kestrel Daystar, by his mother.
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☁☀ Caroline
Really lovely 💛👍
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Jimmy
Excellent ! I love kestrels. 😊👏👍
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