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Hi I'm Sara and I make stories. I like animes so much. I'm weird. I find myself feeling better by just writing stories and drawing.I'm Asian, don't judge! I'm very emotional so if there's any emotional stories out there, I'm welcome to check it out!

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перевести   10 лет назад

Gone (part 2/3) (Minseok PoV) The next day I arrived back here,my care home. I sat in the waiting room, waiting to have my piano lesson. I could hear someone playing the piano. I glance through the glass wall and could see a girl..She was being hit by my instructor. She then opens her hand and several candy falls to the floor. She falls to her knees and place her palm flat on the ground. Her hands scrambling to find the candy. I turn around to my assistant. "Can she not see?" I ask him. He doesn't say anything but put his index finger to his lips. I smile. (Yuri PoV) I feel the keys on the piano. I think I found it. No. Wrong one. I could feel the temper my instructor is having. He picks up the stick and whacks me. I can't say anything. Hurriedly, I play the next note. Wrong one again. One more whack is placed on my back. I couldn't play no more,my hands opening and my candy falling out. My instructor leaves throwing the stick on the floor. Shaking, my hands try to navigate my candy. Where is it? I give up and sit back on the chair, my hand trying to find the right notes (Minseok PoV) Sneakily, I run to her. I sit next to her,causing her to shuffle up unexpectedly. I find the notes straight away and play the song I recognised she was playing. After I finish it I run to the back of the piano, knowing her instructor would hear the song and come to see. (Yuri PoV) His playing was beautiful. He sounds professional. The song comes to an end and he runs to the back of the piano. Why wa-... Oh...So the instructor would come to check? He's smart..I could hear someone coming. I can tell he was looking to see if I played it..I smile secretly as he goes off. (Minseok PoV) He's gone. I pop my head above the piano and check if the coast is clear. I get up and sit beside her. There's a candy jar. I open it and take one out and feed it to her. She opens her moth and I put it in slowly. Her lips touch my finger. She smiles brightly

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Wherever you are I hope you come back to finish your story. It is really good. I like that it is so easy to read and actually very well done. Come back ☺️☺️☺️🌟🌟🌟
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    Gone (Part 1/3) (Yuri's PoV) I arrive at my so called care home. I step out of the car and take small steps through the gates and then towards the door further down. It feels like I'm walking on gravel. Judging by the light I can see through my eyelids, it must be sunny. Am I inside yet? (Minseok PoV) My eyes feel tired as my hand continues to press the keys on the piano. I play a piece which makes me comfortable. I catch my gaze on a girl through the window. Who is she? Is she new? My head rises up to see her better. A cream-ish coat which ended just above her knee. She was wearing a blue collared dre- My thoughts were crushed as my piano instructor slammed a stick on the piano. He was tall, who always wore a formal suit and wore a spectacle that had circle lenses. He had a moustache which was trimmed perfectly and a beard that was arranged neatly. I need to find her after. (Yuri's PoV) I enter the front door and an assistant leads me to the waiting room. I place my rucksack on my lap as I wait patiently. I could hear someone playing the piano. It was beautiful. Delicate. Peaceful. The piano piece comes to an end. My assistant then leads me to a corridor which then he leaves and I'm left to go by myself. As I walk forward I feel a sense of warm pass me. I carry on walking as I smile. Did he notice me? (Minseok PoV) As my piano piece finishes I get up and head to the dining room with my assistant. My assistant was quite old, he was very nice. I walk through a corridor which led to the dining room. My heart beats faster. The pain making my flinch. I take out my pills from a small container and swallow one. I then notice the girl,from before. My body carries on walking and my head turns around following her figure. I then turn around and as my assistant. Did she not realise I was here?

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      перевести   10 лет назад

      Handsome Next Door "Wake up you!" I immediately spring up to see it was only my mother. I sigh and let my body fall back to the bed. "Get up! I need you to do something for me!" She slaps me on my arm. "Owww! What do you want!" I say as she opens the curtains. My eyes close shut as the light blinds me. "There's someone moving in next door. I need you to go over there and give them the food I made them downstairs." She says in a more calm voice. I ignore her as my consciousness slowly disappears. "Get up now! Hurry and get changed!" She slaps my arm again but I don't move. "I heard the people next door are quite handsome you know.." She smirks. I suddenly spring back to #life and my eyes open. My mothers smirk got bigger as she walks out. Did she say handsome? I start imagining how they would look. Hmm...Tall? Muscular? Cute? Kind? I scream excitement at myself and then get up and get ready. As I walk downstairs I smell something delicious. "Did you make this for me as breakfast?" I was getting happy. "What? No this is for the neighbours of course! Why would I make you this!" My mothers says and then turns away. My smile goes grumpy again. But what makes my smile better is that I remember the handsome people next door. This is going to be my....Er....2nd time to try talk to a guy. It's been how long?...14 years since I talked to a guy. I'm 26 now... I sigh remembering that thought. " hurry up and go before they get hungry!" She shoves me out if the house and closes the door with a slam. "Geez....Don't need to be harsh.." I walk to there house door and ring the door bell. I can hear some footsteps that makes me really nervous until the door swings open and 4 gorgeous looking young guys standing in front of me. Why can't I talk. "Er....Hello?" Says the guy standing at the front. He has a light shade of brown for his hair, he seems quite tall and his eyes are so brown. My mouths drops open and doesn't seem to close. He waits for an answer and to break the awkwardness the guy at the back pushes through. "Oh look...Its food!" He grabs the box and walks to the back. The other guys follow him and the guy closes the door. He opens it again. "Err....Thank you for the food. Bye" He shuts the door again. Woah....I have never, ever...seen someone so good looking like that before.. (I'm so sorry for not being on! Im trying to write stories while getting the chance to go on. I will try write more stories but I won't guarantee I will be able to because I have exams coming up. Bye!)

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      Yup! But I might be on and off
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      Ya! Wait, what?! *grabs glass of water. Drinks. Spits*
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        Sorry But This Is The Last Recently I recieved my glasses...And that made it difficult to use the IPad. My stepdad said I only needed glasses because I always look to closely at the screen..So he got me a laptop. This means I can never use my iPad again...So..I won't be able to write..Im sorry for this...

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        Hi Sarah, sorry to hear that. We are already working on Opuss website. I recommend you follow us on Facebook/Opuss and Twitter/OpussApp so you don't miss it All the best
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        I'm so sorry that you can't use the IPad anymore, I will miss you, we all will.
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          The Day I Found Love ( Part 11 ) The bell rang for us to go to our next lesson. "What do you have now?" Jessica asked me. "Um I have DT. What about you?" I asked back. "Same as you. Can I follow you..I don't really know where it is..." She said looking down. I nodded and then started walking followed by Jessica. We reached the building and we walked to the DT room. "Here it is." I said stopping at the room. "Ohh....thanks" she said "The teacher should arrive soon." I said back. After a while, the teacher arrived. She opened the door and we all came in sitting in our seats. Jessica sat beside me. Then I saw Seth. He looked around the room and saw me. He then walked over and sat down opposite me. After Annabelle came followed my Rick. "Hey again." Said Seth. I blushed and looked away. Rick then sat down next to Seth. "Are you guys going out or what?...your like literally flirting in open space!" Rick asked. "No!" I said.Yes" Seth said.Me and Seth said in a union. We then both stared at each other. "Yes" I said. "No" said Seth. I sighed and Rick started laughing. "I knew it! You guys are..Don't worry I won't tell anyone. I blushed and tried to hide it. I felt someone tapping me. It was Jessica. "Is it true?" She said half laughing and half trying to straight face. And then I had a flashback of what happened. I felt a shiver run down my spine. We then stopped talking because the teacher started tapping on the table so she could get our attention. "Okay today we will work on our project. So get on with it." She then sat down and went on the computer. Annabelle then took out her plan. "So here is the plan. We are going to make a waterproof backpack. It's going to have a medium sized umbrella that sticks out the top to stop rain from getting the user wet. Then we are going to have several pockets." Annabelle put down her plan and went to the material table. "This is Jessica..she's new here..." I said to stop the awkward silence. Rick and Seth looked at her. Jessica waved at them and smiled whilst looking at Rick. "Am I dreaming or is that boy so perfect?" She whispered into my ear. "Nope...your not dreaming..he's like the most populist boy here...like every girl likes him." I whispered back "Including you?" I hear another person whisper from behind. It was Seth. I jumped as he said that. "No obviously...." He then laughed and sat back down. Annabelle came back with a bunch of material. She threw it on the table and sat down. Rick then put something back in his pocket...I think he was using his phone. He looked up and saw Jessica...." Holy f- I mean...um hello..." Rick said holding his hand out at Jessica. I looked at Jessica, her face red. Jessica would actually suit with Rick. I mean she has like long wavy brown hair. Rick has brown hair too. She shook his hand. "Hello.." She said smiling.

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