Eternal Rehab What are you to me now that you ar..

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Eternal Rehab What are you to me now that you are gone? My longing for you has not been tamed, Though #life keeps moving on You were the bird that taught me how to fly- Yet brought the storm that broke my wings, My teacher of passion, desire and love- And how terribly loss can sting... You were the clown who turned my tears to smiles, Then quietly left the show... The one that turned the rain to sun, Yet stole my every rainbow. You were the match that lit my flame- The spark that caused the fire to start, The pyre which burned my endless love The train that crashed my helpless heart... You had all the right prescriptions, Yet never found the cure And so my reckless 'You' addiction Will always leave me wanting more. ©All Rights Reserved Fly10 2013

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Great write Leighðððð

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@Stablish Thank you my friend ð Hope life is good with you, & enjoying your work again ð

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That's an amazing poem ðððââââ

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That's a beautiful poem!

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Wonderful poem just curious how do I get a copy right

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@Friend_To_Animals Just do it yourself - the little Â© symbol is in Emoticons app, but doesn't matter if you don't have that - just add the wording anyway (ie your username, All Rights Reserved etc...) ð

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@shivali Much appreciated ð

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@glen Aww thanks for that ð And for the coffee! I'll safe it until morning though, as god knows what I'd end up writing if I'm tripping on all that caffeine!ððð

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Truly beautiful....a real piece of poetry IMO ððð

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Beautifull write Leigh,love it ðâ¤ð

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@patdolan83 @gazplend Thanks both - really appreciated ððð

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Love the pattern of good then bad in each stanza. Brilliantly written and it has reminded me that half-rhymes are ok once in a while!

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Brilliant write, very polished. I shall take note of how you write, if you don't mind' and learn along the way.. Hopefully! â¨â¨ð

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"Then quietly left the Show" simply piercing!

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@sleepydragon Thank you for that lovely comment - I'm flattered! I think we all learn so much from other writers on here. I haven't been able to catch up as much as I'd like recently, but look forward to reading your work when I can ððð

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@steampunkwriter2 Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece ð (and I liked that line too ð)

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Amazing talent

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Looks like I've missed quite a few of yours. A talent very missed.

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Wow

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Brilliant

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You really are a talented poet my lovely xxðððððð¸â¨

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The line that I fell in love with was about the clown. It was cheesy when you said the tears line, but then you added "quietly left the show" and it elevated the verse to an unbelievable level. You're a great artist. Thank you so much for sharing. ðâ¤ï¸

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@Lye Thank you for your commentâºï¸This was written at a time when my heart was still very rawðI'm glad you liked it. Leigh x

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Stablish

Leigh

Glen

choco

â­Shay ð

Leigh

Leigh

Leigh

Patrick

Gary ð¬ð§

Leigh

Nom

Diana âðâð

Longwalker

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Harold Schotel

EddieC

Zelia

Richard Withey

Jimmy

Fen

Leigh

âShay ð

Gary ð¬ð§

Diana âðâð