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The First Wizard: Prologue Comment on this so that I can either: a) improve it, or scrap it/ continue it. Oh, and please tell the truth. Thank you. Apes ruled the planet. Humans did not exist yet. Yet. And as the first ape showed signs of becoming human, a new age started to dawn. At that time, the world was innocent of evil. The first species of new #life for a very long time had recently come to be. The earth was once again hospitable after the meteor had stricken the earth and wiped out the dinosaurs. As the new way of #life arrived in a bundle, the apes had to adapt, if not, they would die. Survival of the fittest. So the first humanoid creature had been born. Soon the earth forgot about the apes and focused on the human race. They carried wooden clubs and hunted for food. This wasn't new, of course, but they did it slightly differently. Together. They were already showing signs of becoming the predators of the planet. The cavemen slept in caves and were very good with tools. But they were still fairly primitive and basic. More like animals really. Next, the cavemen developed more intelligence and sophisticated languages, rather than 'ook' or 'gluk.' They then moved on and made houses and weaponry and eventually figured out how to make a decent fire. They then started farming animals before moving on to industrialisation. Then they hit oil. The human race inevitably used up nearly all these resources and near their end, the Human Scientific Community discussed sending a drill to another planets for resources. They then made a big white building and stopped all oil being distributed around the world and stored it for their exploits, leaving the rest of the world half starved and having very little success. And then a baby was born.

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