Opusia Logo
  • الصفحة الرئيسية
    • بحث المؤلفين فقط
  • زائر
    • تسجيل الدخول
    • التسجيل
    • وضع اليوم
Alberta Georges Cover Image
User Image
اسحب لتعديل الصورة
Alberta Georges Profile Picture
Alberta Georges

21. Learning to create. Never been good at it but I always try to conquer my weaknesses.

  • المعلومات العامة
  • 4 المشاركات
  • أنثى
  • 01-01-70
  • يسكن في المملكة المتحدة

الصور

لا يوجد منشورات
  • الجدول الزمني
  • الصور
  • الفيديو
    • متابَعون
    • متابِعون
Alberta Georges profile picture
Alberta Georges
ترجم   منذ 9 سنوات

Ghost He was a giant. Intimidating to all who crossed his path. His eyes were old but not from age. He'd seen the world but not like others had. Nothing bothered him anymore, even the loneliness had ceased but he had become a ghost. In his world he was now invisible. The target caught his eye through his scope. No one got away from him, not now, not since the complete destruction of all he ever cared about. He'd lost everything that day, but he couldn't think about that now. He had orders, and work was all that was left. He was calm, inhaling as the wind blew from the east. He grimaced and sighed, it wasn't the right time again. His body was seizing. Twenty four hours of only shifting slightly for necessities will do that to someone, but he had orders. He would complete his mission. His body groaned, every bone ached. He had been out of the fight for a long time. His orders came anonymously but he knew not to question given orders. He had always done as he was told, he was a soldier; a man bound by honour, by rules. He wondered if he'd ever be able to lead a civilian #life, or is that what he even wanted? His ears pricked at the sound of distant steps. He'd learned to be vigilant and to expect everything. It was time to move on, the mission could continue at another location.

إعجاب
  • إعجاب
  • حب
  • هههه
  • رائع
  • حزين
  • غاضب
علق
شارك
avatar

Alberta Georges

I wrote this as part of an assignment and recieved some feedback that wasn't constructive but just nasty and unhelpful. If anyone has any advice, constructive criticism would be nice. Thank you.
  • إعجاب
  • حب
  • هههه
  • رائع
  • حزين
  • غاضب
· 0 · 1450056688

حذف التعليق

هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

avatar

Cataract / Stevo Owens

I have some feedback for you - you should write another chapter as this
  • إعجاب
  • حب
  • هههه
  • رائع
  • حزين
  • غاضب
· 0 · 1450116358

حذف التعليق

هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

avatar

Cataract / Stevo Owens

@justtryingsomethingnew (oops) deserves further reading. Don't listen to the negatives who just want to screw with your head. Go
  • إعجاب
  • حب
  • هههه
  • رائع
  • حزين
  • غاضب
· 0 · 1450116430

حذف التعليق

هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

  • 00:00
     
    Alberta Georges profile picture
    Alberta Georges
    ترجم   منذ 9 سنوات

    Hoping To Inspire Soon... I have recently been working on a start to what I hope will eventually become a novel. After i have finished writing Part2 to the Prologue, I am going to post it on here.... I just hope people will appreciate my first attempt at the start of a novel. Thankyou everyone! And can I just say, the creativeness on this site is incredible and I admire you all.

    إعجاب
    • إعجاب
    • حب
    • هههه
    • رائع
    • حزين
    • غاضب
    علق
    شارك
    • 00:00
       
      Alberta Georges profile picture
      Alberta Georges
      ترجم   منذ 10 سنوات

      The Class Clown To look is to see a mask. A child cauing havoc, mischief at first glance. The one who likes to cause problems, The one who likes to use his fists at first chance. He's just an angry, young boy. Volatile. Dangerous. 'Not worth the effort when there's plenty of children that want to learn...' I've heard those words a thousand times, It makes my stomach turn. He's misunderstood and judged, By the people who are supposed to lend a helping hand. He is the class clown to those who don't know him, But I think it's time we rose up and helped people understand. It may be for the attention, But not the kind most people assume. At home, he's battered, bruised but alone. There's things he does, things he sees. He's from a typical broken home. The mask he wears in the classroom Protects from the fears he faces each day. He's cried. He's screamed. He's broken many things. But nobody... Nobody sees him that way.

      إعجاب
      • إعجاب
      • حب
      • هههه
      • رائع
      • حزين
      • غاضب
      علق
      شارك
      • 00:00
         
        Alberta Georges profile picture
        Alberta Georges
        ترجم   منذ 10 سنوات

        Who Am I? People stare. Looking like me isn't anything absurd, But standing at the front of a class, 5ft 2, piercings and tattoos, It isn't really heard Of. Mothering became a priority. At just a teen I realised #life was about to change. With another to take care of, I was released from my parents' chains. Beaten, broken and bruised, Through Dante's Nine Circles of Hell. Escaping and fighting to keep sane But never quite clawing back out of the shell. Dark. Dank. Cold. There was a prince. A prince that had rode through Hell himself. Tearing at the sins I had committed, He beat them down with strength and stealth. I had survived. I had people around me but had never felt so alone. He swept me up and never looked back. To a sanctuary. A safe haven. Our home. In my own head There is a constant battle between the dark and light, But standing here in front on thirty eager minds I thrive. And I know that my #life is an endless but exciting fight.

        إعجاب
        • إعجاب
        • حب
        • هههه
        • رائع
        • حزين
        • غاضب
        علق
        شارك
        avatar

        Brian Beisigl

        Welcome to Opuss.. 👍
        • إعجاب
        • حب
        • هههه
        • رائع
        • حزين
        • غاضب
        · 0 · 1448346460

        حذف التعليق

        هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

        avatar

        Alberta Georges

        Thank you.
        • إعجاب
        • حب
        • هههه
        • رائع
        • حزين
        • غاضب
        · 0 · 1448358774

        حذف التعليق

        هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

        avatar

        Honza

        Welcome to Opuss ) @justtryingsomethingnew
        • إعجاب
        • حب
        • هههه
        • رائع
        • حزين
        • غاضب
        · 0 · 1448362664

        حذف التعليق

        هل أنت متاكد من حذف هذا التعليق ؟

        • 00:00
           
          تحميل المزيد من المنشورات
          • المزيد
          • المزيد
          • المزيد
          • متابَعون 5

          • marie-fale
            someone
            Brian Beis
            Lucius Lan
            Lee
          • المزيد
          • متابِعون 7

          • KendallðŸŒ
            marie-fale
            Tikira
            Cataract /
            Lauren Sba
            Brian Beis
            Lucius Lan
          اللغة
          • English
          • Arabic
          • Dutch
          • French
          • German
          • Italian
          • Portuguese
          • Russian
          • Spanish
          • Turkish

          © 2025 Opusia

          • حول
          • إتصل بنا
          • أكثر
            • سياسة الخصوصية
            • شروط الاستخدام

          الغاء الصداقه

          هل أنت متأكد أنك تريد غير صديق؟

          الإبلاغ عن هذا المستخدم

          مهم!

          هل تريد بالتأكيد إزالة هذا العضو من عائلتك؟

          لقد نقزت Justtryingsomethingnew

          تمت إضافة عضو جديد بنجاح إلى قائمة عائلتك!

          اقتصاص الصورة الرمزية الخاصة بك

          avatar

          © 2025 Opusia

          اللغة
          • English
          • Arabic
          • Dutch
          • French
          • German
          • Italian
          • Portuguese
          • Russian
          • Spanish
          • Turkish
          • الصفحة الرئيسية
          • حول
          • إتصل بنا
          • سياسة الخصوصية
          • شروط الاستخدام

          تم الإبلاغ عن التعليق بنجاح.

          تمت إضافة المشاركة بنجاح إلى المخطط الزمني!

          لقد بلغت الحد المسموح به لعدد من الأصدقاء!

          خطأ في حجم الملف: يتجاوز الملف الحد المسموح به (6 MB) ولا يمكن تحميله.

          تعذر تحميل ملف: نوع الملف هذا غير متوافق.

          لقد اكتشفنا بعض محتوى البالغين على الصورة التي قمت بتحميلها ، وبالتالي فقد رفضنا عملية التحميل.

          تم إرسال المنشور الخاص بك ، سنراجع المحتوى الخاص بك قريبًا.

          لتحميل الصور ومقاطع الفيديو والملفات الصوتية ، يجب الترقية إلى عضو محترف. لترقية الى مزايا أكثر

          تعديل العرض

          0%