Fallout Part One Of
My father was always a paranoid man. It got worse as he got older. He kept getting me to taste his drinks before he drank it, thoroughly convinced I was trying to poison him. With no wife and only a son his mind slowly started to distort with the world. The news told him what to believe and he did. He was a patriotic conservative through and through. A nutty, old nationalist - ha; we could have done with less of them. He was a bit racist as well. Not on the scale of abuse or anything like that, but, nevertheless, it was one of those conventions that was beaten into him and he had never managed to remove the habit from his mind. All in all he was my imperfect dad.
But anyway, he was paranoid. He saw the news about terrorists blowing up more and more stuff and he felt he was at risk. Of course he did. The advances in technology made the events seem too close, too personal. So, being a rich, nutty, nationalist he bought himself a deep, nuclear bunker in his garden. He went on the Internet, he googled "best foods for a nuclear winter" and went out and bought the whole lot a hundred times over. I remember coming home finding a digger in the garden, two hundred cans of tinned fruit or meat or whatever it was, and I found my dad in his armchair with a cigar watching the news, again, and when he saw me he said "You'll thank me when them lot come with bombs for us" I rolled my eyes as though Mario Balotelli had just proposed his solution for the recession. I thought nothing of it. Let him be at peace, that's all I thought, that's all I wanted. But peace at that time was rare.
It's not all I thought of. I did think for several minutes, and even interrogated one of the workers, on whether there was a company dedicated to this crap. I mean of course there had to be but, come on, business could hardly have been booming. I asked him and he had said that they installed one bunker a day minimum. He placed huge emphasis on the technical skill it required. I'm sure it does require skill but it felt as though he was pressing me for an extension on the state of art bunker. He was a pretty humourless guy. I was so tempted to press him on several issues but I thought better of it. I mean, I wouldn't want him to 'accidentally misplace' a part. But I did want to rip into him about the morality of this man letting old nuts spend hundred of thousands of pounds on a useless bunker, but, a business is a business, and a worker is fish on a hook.
These were the thoughts that jumped in and out of my mind as I sat in that bunker. I cast my cynical eye over every move I ever made and every character I ever met to keep my sanity.
There was bitter irony in how my dad isn't here with me. I mocked this bunker with every ounce of sarcasm in my body till I went blue and yet here I am and here he isn't. He had gone shopping. He was probably sprinting home when it hit. I wish he was here. His stories would have been so much more intriguing than mine. After all I was sixteen and probably half of that time was spent not making my own story but following virtual ones or following other people's stories. I never wrote a book like him. I never played sport as well as him. But I bet he hadn't completed fallout three and new Vegas several times over. I smiled at that. It was a sad smile.
If you've read up to here I would sincerely like to thank you.
Any feedback is good feedback and if anyone wants to share ideas of where the story should go from here I would be happy to talk about them. Any comment will get a reply
From here, the story will begin to bring in other characters (lots of them) and, if you couldn't tell from the opening, the story will follow this character - who's name I haven't decided, maybe I won't give him a name? - predominantly as he describes his journey through through the remains of civilisation.
Again, I beg for feedback, this is sort of my first writing piece that was written purely by choice and I am new to the non-analytical side of English.
Nicola
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