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Lisa's Adventures Along The Deep Tunnel(part 1) Once upon a time there was a girl called Lisa. She was the youngest in her family, her Father was called George followed by his wife Annabelle (Anna for short). After giving birth to three baby's known as two boys and one girl who was Lisa. Her brothers where called Daniel and Darren. They didn't really like their sister. Her hair was short which wasn't so long it was up to about her shoulders, she wanted her hair to be long but couldn't because her Mum always used to say "Lisa you can't have your hair long because every Wednesday When you have your swimming lessons at school its hard to get the hair into the swimming hat" she repeated it almost every day but she never listened when ever she goes to bed she says in her dreams "When I'm older I'll have my hair as long as I want " but as she grew older and older it never happened it just got cut again and again to thee exact same length but 2 or 3 years later on one day before school everything had changed... "Lisa Time To Get Out Of Bed" her mother shouted "time for school"as she shouted from downstairs "ok, one minute". Annabelle was downstairs making breakfast her brothers were still fast a-sleep they couldn't be bothered to get up for school Lisa was so tired that she couldn't stand up properly so as she crawled up to her wardrobe and said " Hmm...... what should I wear hmmm aha I'll wear that new shirt that my mum bought for me and my cardigan I think I'll wear black tights with YES I'll wear my new boots that I bought yesterday"so as Lisa was getting dressed her brothers were still sleeping who knows what sort of dream they were in. You wanna know? You sure? Ok then,they were dreaming of Chloe, I see you ask who Chloe is? Well she is the top one in the school, everyone knows her. Her dad is rich.(To be continued)

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