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Thisplaceisdark

Novice Writer who enjoys writing short stories, poems and is working on a novel

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Translate   9 years ago

Only For A Day Only for a day you took my breath away only for a day i looked into your eyes only for a day you stole my heart only for a day is when i fell in love only for a day i knew i wasnt enough only for a day thats when you took my love away only for the day that it all ends and your gone only that day was i hurt only that day you pushed me out only that day you said i dont love you anymore only that day the razor hit my skin only that day the pills were seeping in only that day i was drowning in my blood only that day i knew it wasnt love only that day was the day i died it was that day that you couldnt say goodbye

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    Deep Inside My Soul V1 would you see inside the darkness of my mind would you feel the blackened drumbeat of my heart im rotting inside the corners of my mind would you see deep CH deep inside my soul i cant let you go the thoughts never end i wish i could pretend that my feelings dont make me drown even though im crashing down deep inside my soul im no longer whole Ch V2 when its cold & dark and all you can feel is your broken heart tearing you apart from the deapths of your soul, your like a ghost haunting all you do is wanting you cant turn of your murderous mind because you know on the inside you want to die CH V3 you cant shake this murderous feeling inside, you want to take a knife and die, you slit open your throat choking on the blood pouring from your cut, your laying there in a puddle of read, even though your #life is over your blackened soul isnt dead

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      Kiss The Dead V1 when the razor hits your skin you feel the adrenline as the blood oozes out of your wounds but you cant hear a sound, and you cant feel anything but the beat of your heart stop CH As i take my last breath in this pool of red they are rushing me to the hospital bed i can hear the voices surrounding me telling them i wont surive they said "shes gonna have to kiss the dead" CH V2 the pain is numbing and im cercoming to the feeling of nothing the days are endless and the nights are sleepless, time doesnt begin nor does it end the neverending feeling of lonliness the darkness is creeping in & theres no way out CH V3 the voices have taken over the only piece of you that was left, the razor hits you over & over again the pain is oozing out it the darkness of the blood the world around you is becoming black again, and thats when you know its the end & its time to say goodbye and Kiss the dead

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        The Evil Darkness V1 When I woke up this morning I felt the darkness, the demons creeping in, they were messing with mind telling me to die & cut my battered bruised skin Ch As I look in the mirror I can see the cracks, the cracks that are showing theres no way back my #life is been taken by the evil darkness there is no heaven nor hell or no in-between my demons inside they’ve taken over me theres no way i can change or say sorry V2 It's too late to say goodbye and too late to say sorry I’m sorry to say theres no semicolon here this is the end of my story I'm not the author im just the blurb I'm sorry that my story was depressive & not superb CH V3 My dead body is been burnt I can't feel the fire my ashes are resting its my final desire I want to be scattered in the place I wish to lie, because atleast then I know my soul has travelled even though it was my

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          Translate   9 years ago

          Flatline The knife was sharp The cut was deep The blood was thick But i wasnt weak The sirens rang My family cried The doctors made Sure that I would survive The machiene beeped And the line was flat Death was calling and That was that

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