This Hole I drown myself in a sea of sin The ti..

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This Hole I drown myself in a sea of sin The tide pulls me in and I let it win Can barely see through my flooded eyes Will anyone notice through my disguise? I’m chasing this dragon but not to kill She’s the only one that knows how I feel I admire her braveness, she’s never afraid So I inhale the smoke from her burning flame But this hole inside, it does not heal Do all I can to suppress how I feel This hole deep down is dark and cold And holds the secrets of a story untold A painful feeling that won’t go away Don’t want to live to see another day When my body has no more smoke inside No choice but to face what I’m trying to hide All this confusion and pent up aggression These are my thoughts when facing #depression ##poetsin

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@Chelo90 I really like this :') Very nicely written.

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Wow! This is wonderful.you definitely have a way with words.

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This is some great stuff! I can't wait to read more of your work!

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@Chelo90 the illness no one sees. Super write. Welcome to the fold.

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You've nailed the feeling so well. I feel you.

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A captured feeling of emptiness told, and words that express emotions so bold. You might feel alone, empty, and cold, but a heart can still find love to hold.

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@Chelo90 fantabulous! Love it ðððð

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@Chelo90 Excellent!!

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This emotion is perfectly captured in this poem. Well done!

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Strong words to capture such a feeling.. stay strong

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Amazing!

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Well said Sammie. Great Opuss. @sammielee46

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Lordy, you blew me away with the vehemence of your emotion. Lovely, lovely writing.

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Love it ð

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Ben blye

Soulhearts

Elisha

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sadhna

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Grace H.

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