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Love Story (chapter One) On a sunny day a girl called Summer was getting ready to go to school Summer was 15 years old She loved school because her mam abused her dad go a divorce and her brother was a alcoholic. School was like a holiday it was her last day at school for the six weeks holiday she didn't know what she was going to do so she talked to her best friend spencer (girl) Spencer said "Ill call you everyday...I promise." So soon the day ended Summer walked home wondering what she was going to do for six weeks she walked in the house and just went to bed ..... TO BE CONTIUED

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Minimacgirl16
Hope you like it so far xx
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It's good and I will read the next chapter just try to make them longer and remember to use commas and grammer IT'S really good thought I Like the ideas !!
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The idea are ok, but you really need to use punuation I can't understand it.
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Minimacgirl16
@CaseyLaa I don't like you any more and who are you my English teacher
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@minimacgirl16 No @CaseyLaa isn't your English teacher, she is just giving you advice like most Opussians do. It's how we help each other.
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It's a cute idea... But there really should be more punctuation. Good luck with the rest^_^
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