Okay, I really need you guys to help me out here and offer opinions. I kind of liked how this last piece was starting out, but no one has been responding to it, so I need the brutal truth, should I continue it? I know I started it out a bit slow, but I would work on improving the plot progression (I'm really bad at that guys, if you haven't noticed...). Just comment your opinion? Any tips or constructive criticism is much appreciated. Thanks! -Maura (ChristineXPhantom) <3
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some dumb kid.
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