The Shadow Man First Kill I ran through the fore..

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The Shadow Man First Kill I ran through the forest watching tree by tree I knew he was here watching me hunting thinking on how to kill me still thinking I had a fighting chance I ran faster and faster and faster then lighting flashed and I saw him he had red demonic eyes and a bandaged hand that had an axe in it he had long jet black hair and wore a ragged white tank top splattered with blood I stood their paralyzed by fear he walked closer yo me the threw his ax at me it struck me in the should I screamed in pain then fell in shock the shadow man came over me and said "you can't escape the shadow no one can" with a sly grin on his face the took the axe out if my should still in shock and loss of blood I could barely speak then he took his axe and struck me in the head......

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Hello this is the author tanner please post comments I hope u liked it

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Interesting concept. I like the way of how you described the event. I think you nee to work on punctuation though. The whole post appeared to be one massive sentence. Keep writing

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It's an interesting idea, but I'll give you one piece of advice: Periods. They can be your best friends during a story. Other than that, it's great!

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