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Translate   13 years ago

Phoenix Fiery rage so beautiful Yet so sad The creature tortured Bye chains not seen Not to touch Not to love Not to be This is me

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    Translate   13 years ago

    The Shadow Man First Kill I ran through the forest watching tree by tree I knew he was here watching me hunting thinking on how to kill me still thinking I had a fighting chance I ran faster and faster and faster then lighting flashed and I saw him he had red demonic eyes and a bandaged hand that had an axe in it he had long jet black hair and wore a ragged white tank top splattered with blood I stood their paralyzed by fear he walked closer yo me the threw his ax at me it struck me in the should I screamed in pain then fell in shock the shadow man came over me and said "you can't escape the shadow no one can" with a sly grin on his face the took the axe out if my should still in shock and loss of blood I could barely speak then he took his axe and struck me in the head......

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    Tanner Mierow

    Hello this is the author tanner please post comments I hope u liked it
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    blindsilence

    Interesting concept. I like the way of how you described the event. I think you nee to work on punctuation though. The whole post appeared to be one massive sentence. Keep writing
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    Renata

    It's an interesting idea, but I'll give you one piece of advice: Periods. They can be your best friends during a story. Other than that, it's great!
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