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I write books either based off of what might happen on the news or life.

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перевести   12 лет назад

The Game: Part Two Of The Woods His arrow still pointed at me, I'm still handcuffed to the water pipe in the metal shop. He was looking at me and he said, "lets play a little game, what I want you to do for me is I want you to think about how you will get out of those cuffs and to think about how to find me in the woods, if you get out of the cuffs and find me in twelve hours I won't kill you" then he leaves. I take out my bobby pin and try to pick the lock, and guess what, it worked. I am trying to get out of the building, it takes me an hour to get out, then I go to the woods. I look around trying to find him, was he lying to me? Is he somewhere else? He specifically told me to find him in the woods. What kind of stupid game is this? I'm thinking of where else he would be, and here we go again he hits me with his last arrow, then I start running, I trip and then everything goes black. A couple hours later I wake up in the same spot I tripped, and I think "crap, he's gone" well now what do I do? I go to my house and something wrong, it's quiet, too quiet. So I go downstairs and my parents are tied up and their mouths are taped up, then I hurry up in my fathers room and grab his shotgun, and go back downstairs. I look around to see if he could be here, he probably is. I look around the corner and he scares me he pinned me down on the floor, I kick him off and I point the shotgun at him, and no shells, I grab I knife and stab him in the stomach, lending me enough time to untie my parents. My mother calls the police and me and my father tie him up and tape his mouth until the police gets here. When the police officers finally get here they come in and ask a few questions. They asked a few questions like, "do you know the guy?" Or like "have you seen him before?" And "do you think he had a reason for this?" Of course he had a reason for all of this crap I didn't want to get into, it's pathetic the whole thing that happened is pathetic. The next morning I am tired because I didn't sleep at all, was I asleep? I go in my parents room and they are asleep, then I go downstairs and it looks like nothing happened. Was it all a dream? The end.

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Very fast. I lost where I was a few times and it was a bit confusing. Next time try spacing it out and adding more detail if possible. Great story and very gripping.
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    Graduation Speech: Twilight When we were five our parents asked us what we wanted to some said astronaut, or in my case princess. When we were ten they asked again some said journalist or in my case a gold mentalist. Now they want a serious answer, how about this, who the hell knows, this isn't the time to make fast and hard decisions, this is the time to make mistakes, like party, fall in love, a lot, change your mind and change it again.

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      The Woods I was standing there, I didn't want him to see me, then the dead branches beneath my feet crunched and cracked, then I was hoping I wasn't gone. Running trying not to hit a tree or trip he was just standing there holding his bow and arrow, trying to get a good shot of me. He pulled back the arrow, and shot, I was hit right in the leg, trying not to let the excruciating pain get the best of me. Then he pulled back another, hit me again in the other leg. I tripped, trying to get up, and him coming toward me, and I forced myself to get up, pulled the arrows out of my leg, and ran. I ran until I couldn't anymore, but he caught up to me and he pulled back his last arrow and said with a scratched voice. "You have five hours to get out of here or I will haunt you forever, and if you tell anyone about me you're a goner, you hear me!" I don't say anything, I just run. When I was out of town I stop and I wonder if he would come back for me, if so I better get myself out of this place before my time has come. I take my truck out of state, I think I am in Iowa. I get a hotel room waiting to see if he had followed me, probably but I can't worry about that, I have to worry about surviving. I fell asleep, then I found myself in some sort of metal shop handcuffed to a water pipe, my heart beating so fast, I couldn't hear my self think. The tall man that had the bow and arrow, still had his last arrow, he grabbed his bow pulled his last and finale arrow, but he didn't let it go. I was hoping to god that this wouldn't be how I end my #life, not now. He just stood there with his arrow pointed at me, and I'm wondering what his next move is going to be. To Be Continued.

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        48 Hours Your eyes are open, you don't want to watch your parents getting murdered, the only thing you want is to get the hell out of there. His piercing eyes are staring at me, and all I know is that I'm next. I was sitting on the floor, and suddenly I get up and run, he was following me, but he is speed walking, and I think " are you stupid? " you think you could actually catch me? The next thing I know I'm past out in the woods, and I'm tied to a tree trying to break the rope. I am freaking out trying to figure out what's going on and then a voice recorder turns on saying " you have 48 hours to get out of that rope and if you aren't I'm coming for you, have fun " then the voice recorder stops and I am freaking out, scared out of my mind trying to figure out how to survive. I try to cut the rope by moving it up and down to have the tree cut it, but nothing. I don't want to get killed, at least not yet. I suddenly remember, I have a pocket knife my father gave me just in case, and I think thank god! I finally get out of the rope and I tell myself, "run, run far and don't come back, don't stop running, GO!" I run and run and don't stop. I find myself at the police station out of town and tell them every little detail about his face and the killing of my parents and they say "it's all in your head, you just need to go to bed" "he said he was coming after me and he said he would find me, I'm the one, he's after me, I'm next!" I exclaimed. "We will do the best we can, we can investigate your house and investigate your dead parents, we will do the best we can, do you have school tomorrow, if so you should find your friends or make new ones and see if you can stay with them for a while, now can we get your address and phone number?" The police man said in a calm and gentle voice. "My address is 568 Sacramento street in san diego,and my number is 681-489-1220" I say. I spend the night at the police station, and they dropped me off at school, I mean might as well go to school while I have twenty fours left to live, right? I go to my first class, biology. The teacher gave me a new partner, of course it's a guy. Then he gently says "hi, my name is Jacob, but you can call me Jake" he says softly. "Hi, my name is Bethany, but you can call me Beth" I say back shyly. After biology , Jake and I started to hang out, and at lunch, and after school. " hey, um can I ask you a question?" I ask "Sure go ahead" jake replies. "Can I stay with you for a while? Because my parents were recently murdered and I had to watch, and the criminal is coming for me next" "Of course you can why would I say no" he says getting closer to me leaning for a kiss, I lean to, our lips met and the world stops moving, I think to myself , is he the one? " come on let's go to my place" he says. We get back to jakes house and I get a call from the police station, the call only lasted a few minutes. "What did the police say?" Jake asks. "They said that there definitely is a murderer and that he is after me, they said that the best thing to do is to stay with you" I say leaning for another kiss. It's funny how I get a boyfriend the last day of my #life. It's night time now and I'm freaking scared and I don't know what's going to happen next, suddenly the door bell rings, my heart stops and I turn to jake. "Go while you have the chance, he obviously wants me, and I certainly don't want you to be next, you're to important to me, I love you" I give him my last kiss while I'm still alive. "No I'm going to die with you by my side" he says. "Fine but I am at least calling the cops so if he is coming for you then you have a chance to survive" I reply. I call the cops and they are on there way as fast as they can. Jake and I run upstairs and hide in the closet, we are as quiet as ever, then suddenly the front door slams down, the murderer has come. He walks around downstairs and then upstairs, we heard the police officers pull in and ran threw the door. They ran upstairs and tackled the murderer and took him away. "Thank you" I say to the police officers, while hugging jake. "You're certainly welcome" the officer says while taking the criminal out to there car. After an hour we settle back in to jakes house to where were comfortable again. THE END

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