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Chapter1 So here is how my story began. I was just getting home from school and had a wonderful day so far I lived with my mom Cassie and dog Alex he was big for a dog and always seemed to know what you were saying, so anyway I said hey to my mom and asked her if she was ok if my friend Kimberly to come over. She said yes like always and returned to the tv show she was watching and I went upstairs and called Kim. "So can I come over ." She said and I said yes and she said she would be here on five." So what's up," she said. I said I felt weird all day but everything had been perfect and the tingly feeling was getting stronger every time something went good and we talked and we started to talk and we got to the subject of how often this was happening and they seemed to be getting closer together. It started in first grade but never had thing been so good and it seemed it was getting stronger and more often and I was starting to be able to focus it into certain things like good grades getting the guy I liked to ask me out to prom and it was working.

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Annelotte G

Try editing this with a question mark (try to figure out for yourself where 😉) and a few periods and commas. And maybe take away the "so anyway". Then possibly tag me in the comments so I can read the result. 😊I'm really liking the basic idea of this and how casually written it is though. 😊☕👍👏👏
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Annelotte G

Since you've only posted this on Opuss: Welcome to Opuss, hope you stay and have a nice time! 😊😘
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