Note Hey people so I have some updates for you guys. First I'm gonna try to continue My Best Friends Crush but it's gonna be under a different name. So I need help with picking a name. But I do have a name in mind: The Super 6 and it's adventures. Second I need help with the prom story. Like want kind of dresses should the girls wear and how should the guys tuxes look? That kind of stuff. That's it. Bye

My Best Friends Crush Characters: Sean Carol Danny Shannon Setting: The Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor Scene 16 Carol's P. O. V I woke up to the sun shining in my room. Still tired I got up and trudged downstairs. Miley was still sleeping and mom and dad were on a 2 week vacation/business trip. Suddenly my phone belted out "Really Don't Care" by Demi Lovato. I answered the phone and heard Shannon's bright bouncy voice. "Hey hey my BFF" she almost screamed. "What is it"? I answered groggy. "My date with Sean is at 70pm and I wanna look like a goddess" she stated like a drama queen. "I'll come to your house around 4:30" I told her. After that I closed my phone and slumped down on the couch to earn some extra sleep. After my nap I got dressed in the outfit I'm gonna wear tonight. Then I drove to her house. Miley is at a sleepover for the next 3 days so I didn't have worry about her. Shannon in an instant rushed to my room. Once we were up there I walked to the closet and started flipping through her shirts. While I was flipping I started to talk about Sean and his style for girls. "Well I heard that he goes for girls who wear things that are nice but not overdoing it." she told me. I nodded my head then my eyes darted to a blue and pink butterfly t-shirt. Then I walked to her pant closet. "Do you want a skirt or pants?" I asked. Shannon thought for a second then said "I'll take a skirt". She said. I walked to her skirts and started going through them. My eyes laid on a pink sequined ankle-length skirt. I held up the skirt and Shannon immediately nodded. Then I left so Shannon could change. By the time she was done it was close to 60. Me and Shannon drove back to my house to wait for Danny and Sean to pick us up. Around 6:45 I saw Danny's maroon car pull up. I walked to the front door and rushed him inside. "Shannon this my boyfriend Danny. Although I told you that at the party at my place." I told her before I smacked my lips into Danny's. Danny responded in an instant. I could stayed like that forever. But the moment got lost when Sean entered. "Please no PDA until after the date". Sean said staring at us. I rolled my eyes at him. "Well shall we be off"? he asked as he held out his hand. Sean kept staring at Shannon until I snapped my fingers near his face. Then the four of us walked out to the car. Sean's P.O.V When Bella told me I was to hang out with Shannon I wasn't expecting this. She truly is amazing. Carol is cool also but she's got Danny. Carol P.O.V Once we arrived at The Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor we all sat down while Danny got our orders. Soon he arrived back with one large sundae and two medium cones. After he placed them down he took his seat next to me. Shannon looked at me weird. "Aren't you guys getting separate sundaes?" she asked me. I shook my head. Shannon gave me a "whatcha talking about look". "Me and Danny always get one large sundae and share". I told her. After a while I saw Sean getting closer and closer to Shannon. Surprisingly Shannon didn't try to squirm out of his way. I thought to my self "boyfriend for my friend achievement complete". At around 8:30 the four of us hopped in Danny's car. Danny dropped Sean and Shannon at the movie theater because they wanted to see the new Charlotte Road movie. As me and Danny we're gonna head back to my house. Soon Danny pulled up in the driveway. Once we were inside I pulled him onto the couch for our movie marathon. After about 3 movies I started to get tired. So I got a blanket and put it on us. Soon I fell asleep on Danny's shoulder. Danny's POV After we dropped off Sean and Shannon it was me and Carol's movie night. During the beginning of Percy Jackson Sea of Monsters Carol started to get tired. I wasn't surprised that she was asleep by the time Percy had met Tyson. After she fell asleep I turned off the T.V. I propped my body on some pillows. I don't how but Carol's soft breathing lulled me to sleep. Sean's POV The movie ended around 110. And I had the best time. Even though you're not supposed to talk during a movie Shannon and I just kept talking. I was surprised that Shannon was friends with Carol. No offense but it just seems that Carol and Shannon are complete opposites. The two of us walked out still laughing. Shannon found her moms red Chevy. Me and Shannon hopped into the backseat. Her mom started asking me questions about me and my dad's car business. After her mom dropped me at my house I kept think about Shannon. I smell romance brewing Comment like read my other stuff Author In The Making is out

My Best Friends Crush Characters: Carol Shannon Lala's ex-entourage member Bella Setting: Carol's house Scene 15 It's 2:30pm and I'm waiting for Shannon to get here so we can discuss about getting a boyfriend or as she calls "a male friend that she has a connection with". The minute she got her I dragged her to my room. Turns out Shannon has really specific standards. And I mean really specific. I'd tell you but then I wouldn't stop. I asked her if she has her eyes on anyone. "Well I do but it's never gonna happen." she told me. I stared at her. "Who is he?" I asked her. Shannon started to blush. "I think I might be attracted to Sean Admunsen". Sean Admunsen's father owns a billon dollar car dealership. I told her honestly "well it's not impossible but I think we might need a love expert." Shannon just stared at me. I grabbed my cell and dialed Bella's number. She picked up in no time flat. "Oh My God" she gushed We haven't talked in years". I couldn't argue on that count. Me and Bella go far back but not as far as Mia. "I have a favor to ask" I told her. Bella sounded interested. "More info please". I knew that if she heard about a crush then she's in. "It's about a crush." I told her. "OMG! Who is it?" She gushed. It's about Shannon. Come here ASAP I told her. After 30 minutes Bella came jumping into my room. She sat on the floor next to Shannon. "So who's the guy?" Shannon's face turned as red as a tomato. "Sean Admusen". Shannon told her. Bella looked a her then me, back to Shannon then me. She did that for about 5 minutes. Suddenly Bella's face lit up like a disco ball. "I have the best ever!!!!!!!!" Bella gushed. "What is it?" I asked. "Shannon and Sean should go to the Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor"! I looked at Bella and nodded. "Bella you are a genius!" She smiled at herself. "How about next Saturday?" Bella asked Shannon. I guess Shannon must've been dozing off because she didn't answer. "Huh?" she asked. "Bella asked if Saturday at the Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor would be good for a chance to hang out with Sean" I explained. "Sounds absolutely amazing" Shannon said. Bella looked at both of us with giant smiles. "Well I'll tell Sean about Saturday and I'll call Shannon when I get the news" Bella told me. Bella's P. O. V I found Sean at the food court with is best friend Conner. I grabbed Sean by the arm and pulled him into the nearest store. Sean rubbed his arm in agony. "Yo" he said offensively. "What was that for?" I looked at him and started talk. "Do you wanna date?" Sean looked at me with one eyebrow up. "Yeah I guess" he shrugged. "Well I have an offer you can't resist." Sean nodded. "I'm listening" he told me. "You Shannon Dunlap Saturday Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor." Sean shrugged "sounds good." I nodded my head. "I'll give her a call so you guys can arrange times. I'll also give you Shannon and Carol's numbers." I gave him the paper with their numbers. Back at Bella's house. Time to call I thought as I dialed Shannon's number. Her cell went to voicemail after 3 rings. "hey Shannon it's Bella, Sean said yes and he should be calling you so you two can make plans" then I hung up. Carol's P. O. V After Bella left I called Danny. "Why not" I moaned into the phone. "The Sweet Surprise Ice Cream Parlor is not a way I would spend a Saturday afternoon." I rolled my eyes when he said that. Danny can sometimes be super picky. "It's only day and afterwords you can do whatever you want ok." Danny seemed pleased after that. "Ok I'll do it." I smiled when I heard that. "Thanks Danny. You won't regret doing this". After that I hung up. This one was a little plain but I couldn't think of anything else. I'm gonna do 20 scenes. Scene 16 will be Shannon's date, scene 17 will be the first day of school as seniors, scene 18 will be New Years party, scene 19 will be senior prom and scene 20 will be graduation. Want more? Put the number of scenes in the comments.

My Best Friends Crush Characters: shannon31 or Shannon, Carol, Jordan, Danny, Mia Setting: Willowtin lakeside pier and Carol's house Scene 14 Today is Independence Day!!!!!! (at least in the story) My plans for the day are to hang with my peeps at my house. Afterword we're heading down to the pier to watch the fireworks. My friends came here around 120. I told them to bring swimsuits because I got an inflatable water slide, a slip-and-slide, and an aboveground pool. Yeah my parents spoil me and Miley. The first thing I did was drag Danny in the pool. It only took me 2 minutes to get him in pool. The minute my friends got here I jumped in pool. Jordan ran to the water slide and Mia dashed for the slip-and-slide. Danny mostly stayed on an inner tube. Then once I got Mia in with me I got the idea to tip Danny over. But I guess he must've seen me and Mia so he kept moving around the pool. Finally he turned around and told me "Babe if your trying to flip me over you gotta do a lot better than that." Suddenly I saw Jordan on the same side of the pool then the next I knew I saw Danny in the pool. "Nice Jordan". I told him and gave him a high-five. Around 3:30 Miley came out and told me I had to come inside because I had someone was here and needed me. I was confused but I climbed out, dried off then I went to the door. I answered the door and found a girl about my age with black shoulder-length hair with blue eyes. I looked at her. "Can I help you?" I asked her. The girl then answered "I'm Shannon Dunlap. We met in 5th grade". Suddenly I remembered "Oh I remember you were the girl who got voted "Most Valuable Honor Student". Shannon nodded "yeah that reward made no sense". she answered. "Well my friends are outside. Let's head out there. I walked back out to the pool and jumped back in. "So babe who's your friend"? I then explained about Shannon and how I know her. After that Shannon asked "who are the two guys and why did one of them call you babe?" I suddenly slapped myself on my forehead. "I forgot, I didn't tell you about the boys here. The one trying to get back into the inner tube is Danny". I pointed out as he made sluggish attempts to get into the inner tube. "Hey! This isn't as easy as it looks. "And the one on the water slide is Jordan, Mia's boyfriend." Shannon nodded as I slid back into the pool. Around 60 was when my mom made us eat before we head to the pier so we can get a good spot. My mom isn't as good at cooking as Jackie but she's better than my dad. Dad is so bad at cooking that he almost burnt the house trying to defrost some chicken legs. Tonight is burgers and hotdogs and sundaes for dessert. I wanted to get back in the pool but it's after 70 is when the good spots are gone. My mom left to one of her friend's house so we can have glow sticks. At 6:30 we left for the pier. After we got there we all hopped into my dad's pick-up truck. Then around 8:30 the fireworks started. These usually last about 2 hours. About 10 minutes into the fireworks Danny wrapped his arm around my shoulders. Even though the fireworks were loud I could my dad whispering to my mom. He isn't thrilled that I'm dating. It's not that my dad doesn't like Danny he just can't get over that I'm growing up. Before Miley came I was the one everyone couldn't get enough. When I was younger I was a 100% girly-girl so it's not surprising that mom and dad don't want me to get older. But I guess that's normal for parents wishing that their kids never grow up. I noticed that throughout the fireworks Shannon looked sad whenever one of our boyfriends wrapped his hand around us. Tomorrow all of us are gonna get Shannon a boyfriend. Before I knew it the fireworks were going rapid fire meaning that they were soon ending. During the rapid fire Danny pulled me in for a kiss that lasted from the rapid fire to the giant firework. The giant one goes off to show that the fireworks are over. Then my dad drove us back to my house. Everyone is sleeping over at my house for the night cause well it's past 10:30. Happy late Independence Day everyone!!!!!! shannon31 can you please give me more info about you so I can put a good description of you in future stories. I have 2 jobs for you guys. First I need to find out all of the names I have used for the the ex-entourage members. And can you guys give me ideas for more scenes and tell me how much you want

My Best Friends Crush Tell me which version is better. Carol P. O. V Characters: Carol Mia Danny Mr. and Mrs. Haze Jordan Setting: The Willow Hotel Mia and Carol's houses Scene 13 I woke up in a white hotel bed with Danny next to me. The TV was still on and my head pounded with the events of last night. I woke up Danny who was not happy that he was awaken. But I think when he saw my blue eyes and smile across my face Danny suddenly wasn't upset that I woke him up. The minute he woke up was "what happened at the party last night?" When he said that my brain flooded with memories of that night. If you don't know what I'm talking about then I'll fill you in. So the hotel was having a Christmas party. Then one of the workers who was really Lala (Danny's ex-girlfriend) trapped me in the boiler room. Her plan was to trick Danny into falling in love with her so he would dump me. Luckily Danny realized that she was acting weird so he cornered her and revealed her disguise. Then Lala's entourage came to Danny's defense and told Lala off. Lala then left soon though he found me then we enjoyed the night. I think though Danny was referring to what happened after the party. So I filled him in with the news. "Well after the party we came back here and I think we started to make out". Danny stared at me in confusion. "Then how did we end up in the same bed?" I shrugged my shoulders. We were still wearing the clothes that we worn at the party so that was a good sign. Danny slid out of the bed. After he got out of bed I hopped into the shower. Danny returned from his car with some new clothes for me and him. As I got dressed Danny slid into the shower. I pulled on the black distressed loose jeans and the green American Pride t-shirt. After Danny got out of the shower we walked out to his car. After a 2 hour drive we arrived and Mia's mom and dad's house. Both of us walked in and where greeted by Mrs. and Mr. Haze. I don't call Mia's parents by first name. Although I call Mrs. Haze Jackie. Her real name is Jacqueline. Mr. Haze's real name is Steve. Jordan was at the bottom of the stairs calling Mia's name. "Mia"! he shouted "it's been 2 hours come on"! Mia replied "I'm coming". Mia then soon walked down the stairs in a red sequined Christmas dress with white fluff at the bottom and near the ends of the selves. I suddenly remembered that dress. It was mine but then Mia needed it for a pageant so I gave it to her. We both swore that we would never toss the dress out even if we had no purpose for it. The dress was a symbol of our friendship. Jordan walked up her and planted a big kiss on her cheek. Danny groaned but I giggled like a schoolgirl. Mia always told me how she and Jordan kiss regularly. Mr. Haze immediately separated the two lovebirds. "Alright everybody let's eat dinner." Jackie called out. Before Jackie got married she was in training to be come a pro chef. Mia told me that while she was training Jackie met Mr. Haze. One day Jackie realized that she loved him more than cooking. So Jackie quit and started to live with him. So I wasn't surprised that Jackie cooked dinner. She even serves it like a professional chef does. Jackie walked in and served the food. "Tonight since it's special today. It's glazed turkey with creamed carrots and mashed potatoes." After dinner all of us gathered by the fire and we played a game called Trivia Bust. We did teams of guys and girls. The guys got 36 and the girls got 41 so that proves that girls know there stuff. Then me and Danny went home because we were doing gifts the next day. Danny soon dropped me off at my house. The next day......…........ I woke up the next morning at 6:30. My parents wake up me and my younger sister Miley early so we can open presents and eat breakfast. Me and Miley got everything we wanted but I really wanted a necklace from that jewelry store Mia goes to. Around noon Jordan Danny and Mia came over. Mia loved her new charms and Jordan loved his ornament kit so much he opened it and already made 4 of the 10 ornaments that they came with. Around 5 pm all of us ate dinner. We all started to play with our new presents. Then Danny did something really strange. He pulled me into my bedroom and plopped me on my bed. Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a medium-sized box. I started at the name printed on the box. I put my hand over my mouth and gasped. "Danny how did you even afford this?" I asked him. "I saved up every cent of my allowance." I opened the box and almost freaked. The necklace had a string of hearts that lead to a larger heart. I looked at the engraving on the heart. It said "Carol my lovely beauty girl who lives in my heart". When I finished reading I was speechless. Then I gave Danny his football jersey. After Danny almost passing out we hugged then headed downstairs. Sorry this took so long. I'll try to do them faster and shannon31 I'll get you in a scene soon