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Traduzir   13 anos atrás

The story of Jack Johnson part 3 Final part Jack quickly closed the door and ran down stairs. he heard the man behind him say 'I'm gonna eat you alive!!' Jack was almost at the front door! but the door closed in front of him. the jack turned around and he saw the man standing in front of him. the man smashed jack right in his face and jack was unconscious. when jack woke up he was strapped with his hands and feet. he heard the man was coming. the man set aahh your awake good. first I wanted to eat you alive but I have changed my mind I'm not so hungry any more.I know something better for you. jack was so full of fear that he felt his whole body was shaking.jack said with a sad scared voice please let me go I can give you everything you want please please let me go. the man said yes you gonna give me two things thats al I want. what what do you want set jack? the man said I want you in that coffin that lies next to you and after I buried you alive I want to hear you scream!! scream!! like a pig!! jack set screamed please nooo!!! Let me go please !!! please let me go!!! the man placed jack in the coffin and closed the coffin and dragged it outside. jack screamed for his #life so maybe someone would here him but no body came. the man placed jack in to grave and buried him he laughed while he was doing it and set yes!!! scream pig scream!!!. jack kept screaming please let me go. jack was so full of panic and fear that he past out. when he woke up it was all dark and jack cried.. weeks later the police searched for jack and searched the house. the man was gone and they never found the man or the body of Jack Johnson... the end...?

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    Traduzir   13 anos atrás

    The story of jack Johnson part 2 That night it was going to be a full#moonso jack went to the graveyard. When he arrived he looked around him, he saw some tree's and some old gravestones and a path covered with leaves. at the end of that path he saw a great old house. Jack walked to that house and suddenly he heard something behind him.he looked around him but nothing was there. jack looked in the camera and set hey Brian for a second there I thought I heard something whooohhh I am so scared now. Jack kept talking to his camera.hey Brian I have some news for you this graveyard is not scary its boring, jack opened the door of the old house. he saw some stairs and a long hallway. he walked up the stairs and he saw a door he opened the door jack suddenly paralyzed!!. he saw a creature bending over something, when jack looked close he saw it was a dead body!!! that creature was eating a dead body!!. the creature turned around and looked jack right in the eyes. jack could see his face now it looked like a bald dead man with grey skin. the man set your next!! part 3 coming soon if you like it. tips and suggestions are always welcome.

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      Traduzir   13 anos atrás

      The story of Jack Johnson. Part 1 Jack was always the cool guy in school. Jack had short black hair and he always wearied the coolest clothes. Jack always wanted to proof him self that he was the best in everything and that he had no fear of anything...that could have been is biggest mistake.. one day a goofy looking guy challenged him. that Goofy looking guy was Brian, Brian said to Jack if your so cool and your not afraid of anything go to the old graveyard out of town with a full Moon. jack knew the stories of that graveyard but like I a said jack wasn't scared of anything. jack said with a smile and if I return? then I give you fifty euro,s and I make your homework for a whole month. jack said fine I go to that old graveyard. Brian said ohh and yes I almost forgot you must go there alone no friends aloud and you must record everything with a camera so I can see you have been there. jack said ok and walked away and laughed.

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      Kahad

      It was faboulous Tim I can't write a story like that
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      Tim

      @kahaf are you serious? or is it sarcasm?
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        Traduzir   13 anos atrás

        Nightmare yesterday I had a terrible dream. in that dream I was in a kind of prison with a lot of scientists and no I wasn't one of those scientists, I was a prisoner. I can't remember the whole dream but what I do remember is this: A man with brown hair and a mustache brought me to my cell I think he was sixty years old. we walked through a small hall way with white walls and white doors with one window in each door so you could look trough it. when we arrived at my cell door I saw a very scary looking girl in front of my cell, she had mud on her face and blood on her clothes,she looked like she hated the whole world. I said to the man please let me go!! the man said maybe I let you go and maybe I don't... the man closed the cell door in front of me . I still felt that girl looking to me i didn't look because my body full of Fear, my hand where shaking.. I closed my eyes and said to my self please let this be a dream. I opened my eyes and I was still in my cell, But there was something different now all the lights where out. so I thought to my self there was something with the electricity and maybe the doors are unlocked now. I opened my cell door and exactly at that moment I felt a finger touching my hand, I closed the door and I knew it was the scary crazy looking girl. I pushed at the door so she can't get it open. I didn't want to look through the window because I just know she would stand there. I opened my eyes and I was awake!!!! I was in my own house again!!! I was so happy at that time!! the end.... for now...

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        Gretel🐶

        Creepy, I'm good at waking up before the worst happens in my nightmares
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        Tim

        really its 4 AM in the morning here and i can't sleep because I'm afraid I wil have that same dream again
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        Teddy

        Now there's a good start to an idea! Use it to create a short story, but not on the first person. That is, write a story about what was happening and why, but don't say 'I'. By the way your English is very good
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          Traduzir   13 anos atrás

          I want to be a writer my name is Tim, I am 18 years old and I want to be a writer. I want to write but there are a some problems: first problem is I don't really know how this app works and what it exactly do, second I am not so good at writing (specially in english) and third I have really know idea what i should write about. if someone can give me some advice I would really appreciate it.

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          Dragons?
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          Are you good at cooking?...
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          Teddy

          Joking (sort of).. Just keep writing and you'll either improve or get bored 👍
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