first paragraph of my story WHEN NIGHTMARES BECOME REALITY. October 31st... Twilight has come around fast today.I can still hear the screams as my neighbours were being eaten alive by the creatures that have overtaken my town. My hands are still shaking from the fear. My sister hasn't spoken since it began. She remains in the corner of our living room, staring at the floor like a porcelain doll that had been thrown on the floor. I hear scratching and snarling from outside. I hope they leave soon before my parents begin to wake in the upstairs bathroom.......... ( what you think?) I will post more follow me