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I'm Brittney first time writing but I love to read so I thought it'd be cool to write one.

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перевести   12 лет назад

Fighting For Love Chapter Three When I woke up,I looked at my phone and saw I had a text from Luis it said "Morning mi nova (:" I laughed out loud and texted back "Morning and I'm not your nova yet (;" I got up toke a shower and changed into my new lace skeleton sweater with my skinny jeans and went down stairs to find my mom still at home even though its twelve in the afternoon when she should be at work. I ask "why aren't you at work" she looks at me with an annoyed look and says "they didn't need me today so I'm staying home so I can get ready for my date" I hate that my mom tells me this thinking I'm going to tell my dad to make him mad but my mom doesn't know my dad has a girlfriend for the past year. I smile at her and say "good for you have fun" then I go into my living room to watch tv when I get a text from Luis that says "You will be soon chica (;" I smile and text "Whennnn (;" I turn the channel to watch sponge bob watch is my favorite show and I love sponge bob so much I have a tattoo if him on my right rib every one thought I was crazy for getting it. I didn't really care I wanted it and my mom didn't care so I got it and two more tattoos one is "I love you" in my dads handwriting I love my dad more the my mom sometimes I know that's horrible but she's horrible and the second one is fighter on my left wrist above my scars and it reminds me that I'm fighting to stop cutting obviously not working but all three of my tats mean a lot to me. Luis doesn't know about thembecause its easier to explain in person. Luis texts me back and says "Soon chica very soon (;" I laugh and text back "Awww okayy (;" I can't wait to go to the museum with him in two hours I can't seat still Luis texts backs and says "Haha I can't wait to see you in two hours!! Is it creepy that I know how long I have to wait to see your beautiful face (:" My smile on my face is so big I can feel my cheeks starting to hurt but I love how he makes my feel so I can live with the pain. I text back and say "No I think it's cute just like you (:" I send the text when my mom comes in and says "I'm going now remember to lock up and feed Thor and Kira before you leave thank you" she kisses me on the cheek and then walks out the door I hear her car start and then her cars pulls out of the drive way. * * * I'm shaking because I'm so excited Luis texted me and told me he was gonna be at my house in ten minutes. I gave Thor and Kira their dinner knowing that both me and my mom won't be home till later, I hear a car pull into the drive way I look at the window and see a blue mustang and in the drivers seat is Luis. I almost scream from excitement but I don't thank god,he gets out of his car and rings the doorbell I don't open the door right away I wait a minute the open it. Luis is wearing a plan blue shirt under a lather jacket that makes him look so hott and he has a beanie on I wouldn't image him in one but he looks hott. When I opened the door and he looked at me and smile and said "Hii chica" I replied with a smile and said "hey you" I winked at him and then Thor barked at him then ran over to him and licked his whole face Luis was laughing I was laughing too he's so cute. Then Thor finely stops and goes to lay down in the living room were sponge bob is still playing I'm kind of embarrassed but Luis laughs and saids "I love sponge bob" my mouth falls open and I laugh and say "yeah I'm kind of crazy about sponge bob" he looks a me puzzled then I say "i have a tattoo of sponge bob of my ribs" my face gets red then Luis says "why are you embarrasses chica??" I said "I'll show you" I left up my sweeter up to my ribs and Luis smiles and touches my skin were my tattoo is he looks up at me and says "I think it looks cute on you chica" Luis looks in to my eyes and I look in his, he grabs my hand and moves closer he puts his hand on the back of my neck and pulls me closer to him. I start to get butterfly's but I don't care because I'm so close to Luis and I feel save I'm so close to him are lips are almost touching mine but I'm not gonna make the first move. Luis looks down at my lips the back into my eyes then he bites his lips I just want him to kiss me Luis whispers something but I can't hair him so I move closer so we're hugging he moves his hands so there on my back just above my jeans and I wrap my hands around his neck I whisper in is ear "what'd you say" I wait for the answer but he moves so we're face to face again and bends down and kisses my lightly on the lips but I want a little more so I put my hand on the back of his neck and I push his hand lightly towards me to let him know to keep going. Thor barks and I jump scared Luis laughs then kisses me on the forehead I smile and so does Luis then he says "are you ready to go to mi nova" I smile and say "I'm not your nova" he frowns and says "awww man" then winks and then takes my hand and says "okay mi future nova you ready to go" he smiles and I nod yes and I grab my bag and lock the doors and walk out of the door holding Luis's hand and the he lets go and opens the car door for me I smile and kiss him on the cheek.he starts the car up and backs out of my drive way then he takes a left to the Main Street to get on the high way to go to the museum. "I've never been to the museum before" I said to Luis as we're getting on the highway he smiles and saids " I went when I was little its pretty cool" I smile and lean over and turn the stereo on my favorite song is on so I mouth the words and dance a little and Luis starts laughing at me and then he starts singing. He screams the words and I laugh so hard that I can't breath then I start singing like he is and we both start laughing and singing I'm having so much fun and we're not even there yet. * * * When we get to the front desk of the museum I go in my bag for money but Luis just put the money back in and pays for both of us I say thank you and kiss him on his lips then we brake apart and he smiles and says "thanks for that chica" then winks and takes my hand and we walk into the first section and it's about tracking animals my there poop me and Luis start laughing then move to the next section. We watch a show where they have live animals we wait a little before the show we guess what animals there gonna show us Luis says "their gonna have a live moose" I laugh and say "their gonna have a dinosaur I bet" he smiles and says "you wanna make a bet?" I think about it and say "what are we betting for?" He smiles at me and says "if I win then I get to ask you to my nova" I get butterfly's in my stomach and say "and what If I win?" He kisses my forehead and says "if you win then I get to ask you to be mi nova so ether way I win" I laugh and take his hand in mine and say "only this time babe" I didn't mean to say babe but It kind of just came out he just smiled at me. The show started and they had a eagle a porcupine and moose antlers Luis looked at me and smiled he won the bet after the show Luis whispered in my ear "I won" I smiled and said "yeah you did" he get up and toke my hand then we walked to the oldest elephant was I never wanted to leave there it was so cool and Luis knew I would love it. We were looking at the oldest elephant when Luis hugged me from beyond I love this feeling he whispered in my ear "so I was wondering if you would wanna be mi nova" I smile and turned around to face him he was looking at the ground so I picked his head up and I whispered in his ear and said "does that mean I'm yours" he smiled and said "of course cutie" I smile so wide my cheeks are hurting so I say "then yes babe" he's smile is so cute and he laughs and says "I love it when you call me babe and so now your my girlfriend?" I kiss him on his lips and say "I'm glad and yes I am and your my boyfriend?" He laughs and says "yes I am Eva" his kisses me for a long time at the end of the amazing kiss we both are smiling. * * * We leave the museum and go out to eat at the local dinner were everyone goes for food Luis asks my "do you really wanna be seen with a Mexican" I frown and say "your my boyfriend I'm not embarrassed to be with you Luis" then I kiss him. We walk in and I see my friends from school I smile at them but they don't return a smile back but I don't care I'm happy with Luis the waitress comes over and ask us what we want I ask for chicken fingers and Luis gets a burger and then he gets a vanilla milkshake for us to share. He's so cute he's staring at me so I say"why are you looking at me babe" he blushed and says "because your my girlfriend and your so beautiful" I blush as the waitress comes over with our food and our milkshake with to straws. The bell that's on the door rings as violet walks in and I wave to her and she comes over and says "hi Eva is this Luis who you couldn't stop talking about" I blush and say "thanks violet and this is Luis,Luis this is violet who loves to embarrass me" Luis laugh and shakes violets hand she smiles and says "I like this kid already" I get closer to her so Luis can still hear but kind of making it a secret and say "I like him too" he smiles and takes my hand violets smiles then says she has to go so we say bye and me and Luis talk till we get kicked out by the manger.

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    Fighting For Love-Chapter 2 Luis and I talked about every thing that happened in own #life's when I told him I cut he called me I was so scared to answer but when I did he said "Eva when's the last time you cut" I'm so ashamed when I say "right before I met you" he sighed and said "Eva promise me you'll never ever do that again please Eva promise me" a tear escaped from my eye I just let it slide down my face I say "i can't Luis" he said "why I'll do anything Eva please" I start to really cry and I know Luis can hear me because he says "Eva don't cry I'm sorry I upset you" I had to catch my breath to say "the last time someone ask my to promise not to cut they broke my heart". Luis said in a caring voice "Eva I promise I will never brake your heart and when I promise something I keep it okay chica" I smile and say "I believe you Luis and I trust you" we went to bed after that which was at four. When I wake up I have three texts one from violet one from Matt oh great and one from Luis which makes me smile I look at violets first that says "Hey Aaron was amazing last night how was your night??" I texted back " lmao nice we're you safe?? N my was amazing has well I met someone " Then I looked at Matt's text it said "Eva I want you back Brandy is crazy plz forgive me!!!" I text back and say "I met someone leave me alone have fun" Then I blocked his number then looked at Luis's text it said "Morning beautiful (:" I texted back "Morning cutie (;" I think I already like him I know every thing about him like he lives with his mom who Luis says is crazy and he's baby brother Alex his dad dead when he was ten so he doesn't remember him but he's mom said he was a great man. Luis wants to be a vet when he gets to collage which is amazing because I want to be a zoologist when I get to collage he has a pet cat he named phill I laughed when he told me he named his cat when he was ten he's so cute. I told him I have a cat and a dog thats a Great Dane I just got my dog on my sixteenth birthday witch was last year my dog is named Thor and my cat I've had since my twelfth birthday her name is Kira they get along sometimes. My phone vibrated and I smiled because it was Luis he texted "I missed you :3" That face means he was embarrassed but I thought it was cute I texted back "I missed you (:" I wanted him to know I liked him I don't know if he'll figure it out hopefully he will. He texted back fast which I like he says "Haha good cus if you didn't I would have been sad ;p" I laughed and said "Of course I missed you silly (;" My phone vibrated again it was violet she said "Duhhhh and Oooo lala do I know him??" I texted back and said "Good and no I just met him on New Years haha he's amazing" Luis texted me back and said "Good so ummm I wanted to know if you wanted to chill with me tomorrow at the museum" I smile and replayed "Hehe yes I would Luis when would you wanna go???" Violet texted back and said "Oooo what school does he go to??" Luis goes to own school starting in three days I was so excited when he told me. I text her back and say "He's name is Luis and goes to owns (:" Luis texts me back and says "Umm how bout i pick you up at three ill take you out to dinner after?? ;D" I text him back "Sounds perfect " I tell him my address hopeful he's not scared to come in because my house probably isn't like he's and I hope my mom is nice to him oh she better. Violet texts me back and says "Aaron says he knows him and Luis get in trouble a lot" I'm confused when she tells me this I text back and say "How does he know maybe Luis changed" Luis texts me back and says " you live in the rich part of town??" I text back and say "Yeah why does it matter" I don't care the Luis gets in trouble I don't get why he didn't tell me then violet texts me back and says "Aaron went to school with him and he says he gets in fights and hardly goes to school" I don't care about that stuff I'm not a bitch Ill like him no matter what. I text back and say "I don't care bout that stuff I really like him" I smile when my phone vibrates and it's Luis I love the way he makes me feel I look at the texts and it says " no I don't care where you live I like you for you Eva" Oh my god he said he likes me i have to play it cool so I text back and say "You just said you liked me" I smile when I sent it then violets texted me back and says "Eva just be careful I don't want you to get hurt again" I think it's nice that she says that so I text back and say "Thanks for caring and I'm not gonna get hurt" I go down stairs to tell my mom I'm going out tomorrow with violet I don't want her to know about Luis just yet. I get a text for Luis that's says "I do like you chica (: do you like me??" As if he doesn't already know I smile and text back and i say "I like you too Luis (:" My mom says that's fine that I hang with violet tomorrow she doesn't know I plan on going out with Luis instead. I'm scared my mom won't like Luis but I don't care because I do. Luis texts me back I love seeing his name on my phone it gives me butterfly's I look at my text and it says "I'm glad mi nova" I don't know what nova means so I text back "What does mi nova mean??" I'm so exited to go tomorrow that I wish it wasn't only three in the afternoon. My mom has to go to work now till ten the next day she wants me to go to my dads who lives an hour away because she hates living me alone because of my anxiety of being killed while being home alone I weird and everyone knows it too. So I pick my stuff to go to my dads when Luis texts me back and says "Mi nova means my girlfriend in Spanish (:" The butterfly's in my stomach go off and I text back. "So I'm your girlfriend now huh and I'm driving to my dads ill txt you when I get there and ill be back in time for own date (:" I drive to my dads and check my phone to see if Luis text back and he did he said "Not yet mi nova and okay I'll miss ya" I text back and say "I back and I missed you too" My dad asks who I'm texting I say a friend he try's to take my phone I just tell him this guy named Luis my dad says "oh that's nice" my dad cooks us chicken parm which is my favorite which is also Luis's favorite too he texts back and says "If I did ask you to be mi nova what would you say" I smiled and texted back "I would say yes Luis" I eat my dinner then we watch law and oder:svu Luis texts back and says "Good so ill ask you when you don't expect it Eva" I laugh and text back "Okayy Luis I can't wait (:" We text until one then I get tired and I text him "I'm getting sleepy Luis ):" Then he texts back "Okayy mi nova I don't wanna keep you up night night ill see you tomorrow " Then I text back and say "Hehe thanks Luis night night Ill see you tomorrow " My eyes start getting heavy and I start to dream of what tomorrow will bring and I start to get excited.

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      Fighting For Love-Chapter One "Eva I had sex with brandy and she is so much hotter then you so I'm braking up with you sorry" Matt said in his I'm so annoyed with you voice. "I thought you said we were never gonna brake up matt" I said almost crying but i wanted to keep my dignity so had to keep calm. "There's no point trying to get me to change my mind so I'm just gonna hang up bye". Then Matt hang up and I just sat there thinking and praying that this was all a dream but it wasn't because I felt my heart melting like lava. I never thought that he would do this because for the year that we were dating he promise that we would never brake up or fuck someone else! God Dammit! I texted my best friend violet what happened and she said "I can't believe that shit he's such a dick you should go over to his house and cut his dick off" I texted back "lmao I would but I wouldn't want to keep his nasty junk" violet texted back saying " yeah your prob right that is nasty but I g2g cus I'm about to fuck Aaron lmao byeeee" I laughed and text " have fun be safe" then went down stair to get a razor blade. I've been cutting since the 8th grade only my friends know,nowI'm a junior at Belmont high school in New Hampshire it's an okay school I guess the teachers are nice I couldn't say that about the kids though their all assholes in the own way. When I get the razor I have complete control and I like that I make twelve semi deep cuts on my left wrist it stings a little but hey it's what I get for not seeing this shit coming. A few hours later the cuts stop bleeding and my mom comes home and says that I have to go to this New Year's Eve party at her friends house this should be fun.... Not! I hate being here every one ask about Matt and I say he broke up with me which makes me want to cut more then I already did. I go outside to get some air I walk down the street, i hear people talking I think it's people for other party's but it's not its boys I think my age yelling at me in Spanish I have no idea what there saying so I just keep walking. They get closer and I start to walk faster when one of then grabs my shoulder and pulls me around to face him. He says something in Spanish to his friends and they all laugh then he turns to me and says "what's a pretty chica like you doing out her all alone" I stature and say "i- i-I'm here at a party with my family" "we should have a little party right here with you chica has a party favor" he saids laugh and high fiveing all his friends. Then someone says"hector stop leave her alone" then hector said" well well well looks like Luis doesn't want to play" the kid looks about my age says" let's just leave her alone she's just some rich perra" hector nods his head and says " your right this perra it's worth my time vamos!" They all walked away but the guy who stop hector stayed be hide I said "thank you for stoping them" he walked closer to me and I saw his sparkling blue eyes and he was taller then me and his jet black hair almost covered his eyes he was hot. He opened his mouth to say something the closed it quick "my name is Eva your name Is Luis right?" I said shyly not knowing why he stayed by hide then he said"sii" in a sexy deep voice. He stood there staring at me for a long time before saying " you shouldn't be out here alone" "I'm not alone I'm with you" I said smiling and he was smiling too and said "I'm not always gonna be here to stop them you know" then he stepped closer to me he was an inch away from my face I could smell his cologne he smelled amazing "you could be" I said in the sexiest voice I could make, he laughed and said "how chica" I smiled and said "give my your number and ill call you whenever I need you" then I winked. I'm such an idiot why would he gave his number to someone he just saved. He toke out his phone and gave it to me and said smiling "okay put your number in" I was surprised and said "really you just met me" he just laughed and said "I think your beautiful and you need me" I blush and look at the ground I never thought I was pretty let alone beautiful he put his hand under my chin and picked my head up which gave me then chills he looked into my eyes and I looked into his I felt like he could see though my soul then he sang "hey I just met you and this is crazy but here's my number so call me baby" I laughed so hard then said " don't sing that every again" Luis said okay and I put my number in his phone and he put his in mine. I didn't want him to leave but I knew that if we both didn't leave we'd get in trouble so I look at the ground again and said "i should probably get going because my mom will probably flip if I'm not back soon" he sighed and said"yeah I should probably go too or my mom will kill me" I looked up and he was already staring at me and I said " why are you looking at me like that" I think I see him blushing but it's to dark to see but he says" I don't know your really beautiful and I can't stop staring" I can feel my face getting red but it's dark so he can't see thank god. We both don't want to walk away but we have to i start to say goodbye but he puts his finger to my mouth and he saids "shhhh I really don't want to say goodbye cus goodbye means not seeing each other again and I really want to see you again Eva so that's say see you later okay" I take his finger off my mouth and say" how can you say that stuff when you know nothing about me" he looks sad and says "I feel something between us and I'm going to text you later so I can get to know you Eva if that okay with you" I smile and say "that's fine with me Luis see you later" he smiles and says" see you later eva" then walks away. I go back to the party no one even knows I'm gone their all drunk so I just go in the living room where it's quit and I think if what just happened. My phone vibrates it's probably just violet telling me how great her sex was but I'm completely surprised to see Luis's name on my screen saying "Hey (:" I smile and text back " Heyy (:" He texts back a second later "I can't believe I just met you I can't get you out of my head" I can feel the butterfly's in my stomach I text back " ik I can't get you out of my head ether (:" We talk till four in the morning on the new year.

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        When I Saw Him He was there all along Eyes as blue as ice Heart like fire Hair jet black Tall like a skyscraper Holds me like he never wants to leave Hands like a god

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