The Day Hell Passed By I never really thought about dying . I just thought you died of old age. Maybe you don't just die, and I know this because this was the day I found heaven. Chapter one My name is Ariatie . I'm 17 years old. I've got a long time in till I die I hope but I can't be positive about that. I like to play with my friends a lot and so I did on Saturday and this is what happend.... " Hey Ariatie! , look there's a forest over there lets take a look!" " Are you sure Alice? It looks kinda dangerous dont you think? " I said . " Yeah, I suppose but still we are both 17 coming on 18 so what could go wrong?" We entered and it was dark and spooky. After 10 minutes we got to a cross path we did not know what one to go with , so we did a lucky guess. We chose the 3rd path , so then we just walked intill we found a big hole. Beside it was a tree with a rope on it and next to it was a message saying : " use this rope of you dare to go down this hole but remember this rope isn't over 10 miles long it's below it , so you can use it but the devil is waiting.... ". So then me and my friend, alice done rock, paper, scissors to see who would dare to go down the hole. Unfortunately, it was Alice , so we got the rope and she started to climb down it , then about 10 minutes later she shouted up to me and said that the ropes too short. I said that It can't be , then she said pull me up! I said why? Then Alice replied and Said its a trick! Theres a swamp down here of crocodiles, souls and skolls! There's a Devil down here Climbing up to me and in about 2 minutes I might be dead if you don't bloody pull me up now ! I replied, im pulling help me by walking up the wall as well as me pulling the rope ! Aventally, she got to the top and we saw a wooden plank of wood over near by so we lifted it up and covered the hole. Then we rushed home and we ne'er went in that woodland again . The end. Author: kirsty richards
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