princess? Once upon a time, There was a fragile ..

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princess? Once upon a time, There was a fragile girl. She wasn't locked away in a tower Or destined for world. She wasn't daughter to a king and queen, A pride of all around. No, she came from a rather poor And rattled little town. She didn't fit the glass slipper, Didn't live with seven dwarves. And she certainly didn't dream of Ever having something more. She didn't live deep in the ocean, Wasn't under some dreadful curse. This little girl was battling Something so much worse. She suffered a thing called cancer, And it raged under her skin. She might not ever get her fairytale, She might not even win. Her strength made her beautiful, A diamond in the rust. And she never lost sight of herself, Keeping faith was a must. And even though she was sick, She glowed with fierce delight At the smallest little things. I feel like she could win this fight. Our views on fairytales are warped, Disney's wrong, you see. The real princesses are the fighters, The ones you don't see on tv.

Respect!

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Awesome write ðâ¤

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@leelee101 thank you

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Amazing, well written and a really good message! ðð

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It's beautifully written, and so true. Sends a true message out to readers and is put across so well! Good Job!!

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@IndiaSparrow @AlexJessop97 thank you both for your lovely feedback â¤

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Awwð

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I really like this, nicely writtenðð

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This truly is a powerful piece. thank you for sharing the magic. ð

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Strong message behind this fabulous write...really fabðððð

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I adore this! It's so true!

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@Jesusfreak7 @Stablish @milkeyedmender @misslittleDHP @nikujagagirl thank you all, I truly appreciate your words ð

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Wonderful & compelling piece, with a powerful message. Bravo!ðð

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@Fly10 thank you do much âº

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That reminds me of my friend Tessa and my aunt who both died from cancer thank you. â¤â¤ðâ¤â¤

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This is brilliant, great message

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@magicmilkshake I'm so sorry to hear that, stay strong. â¤

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@Nom thank you âº

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I couldn't agree more. Totally love x

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@maisiebeth awesome piece ðð¹ð¹ð¹

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@maisiebeth You're very welcome!

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@xGx @TheViolator thanks!

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Amazing!! I totally agree

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@kelly_seasons thank you âº

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Dunno how I feel about the rythm, the (intentional?) lack of rhymes in the beginning and the diamond not in the rough but rust... but the content has heart and meaning

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@CLHC I tend to work harder on conveying an important message rather than waste my time worrying about how well the poem rhymes. As for the "diamond in the rust" bit, I'm well aware of the saying. I actually changed it to 'rust' based on a song I heard. However, I appreciate your honest feedback. Thank you.

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I feel that the message is what truly matters @maisiebeth and that I might never forget it. You've given me hope. Hope that i might live through what's happening to me. Thank you for that

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@kelly_seasons im so happy i helped you. Thank you for telling me that, I really appreciate it. Stay strong.

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I will! Lets hope my treatment goes well today!

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@kelly_seasons I hope it does. lemme know how it goes.

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Kik

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K k

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@kelly_seasons mine is the.national

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@maisiebeth To clarify; I actually liked the fact that the rhymes began later - added a bit of magic to the real world . Also, the rust part was fine; gotta have some artistic freedom.

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I am truley speachless...

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@missjods thank you

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Wow!!!! ð Awesome piece of writing!!! ðð

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@cookiekitty45 thanks!

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Wow I am speechless

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I LOVED IT, that's so perfect and true!ð

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@hoggers10 @cperry thank you both!

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This is true people often gain respect for the wrong reasons. Footballers, singers, Paris Hilton. Sure let us lightly applaud their talents, but what about the unsung heros. The people whom have really done something.

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Exactly my point, @awesomeanchovy. The people who survive emotionally & physically exhausting tragedies are often paid no attention at all.

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Oh I found that so emotional. Aaahhhhha hha aaaaaa......................... Once apps a time a person like myself read this Opuss and cried. The end. Lol. But seriously, this is a great Opuss.

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@Supertecnoboff haha, thank youð

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@maisiebeth that was breathtaking

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@izzysitv thanks

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1 of da best

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