The Horror In The Hole At three o'clock I walked into my best mates house, and he said to me why don't you come with me and I will show you this sick thing! So he led me to this place in the back garden. We stopped after going through a series of bushes and fences but finally we got there and we went into my other friends house she was called Georgia and my friend was going out with her when I was there and she said to my mate Charlie said to Georgia hey girl me and James here will be checking out that hole of yours. She then replied that we should come in the house because her mum was baking a pie! So we went in to Georgia's house and her mum said hi to me and what's up to Charlie. I said I heard you making pie and she said to me that she had already baked it, so I said oh boy what flavour! She said PIIIE flavour! She laughed she said to me that she wanted to make it for Charlie so she could not tell me. I thought it sounded fair because they were intending to marry each other although they had like eight years to wait. After the house we went into the back garden to look down the hole, when we got there Charlie said that he "needed the toilet" and winked to Georgia, I knew what they were going to do. About fifteen minutes later Charlie came back and said to me, that when you look through this hole you will need to step back after a while otherwise something bad will happen to you. We walked to the hole and said to me now remember what I said! Suddenly a slight wing picked up Charlie said oh .... this was not meant to happen, a hand grasped for him and he got pulled under. A door opened it was Georgia, how was I meant to tell her; her three year boyfriend was gone... Forever. She walked to me and said to me, where did my good friend go!? I then said to her he is gone mate forever and ever he got grabbed by a hand and got pulled under. She said yes, I wanted him to do that. Because all this time I don't know why but I always wanted... You, you James. In shock I said how I only consider you as a friend she said then that you can say you like me at least. I said no go to hell you idiot. Go love someone else, in annoyance I pushed her down the hole she was gone as well. I thought soon they would come back and call the police on me for attempted murder. So I stupidly but I agreed with myself that I should shoot myself in the head, I grabbed friends rifle. And shot myself I'm the head, a warm gush of blood crawled into my head. On the floor dead in my friends garden. Please give me feedback and don't be afraid to post comments because I really need advice for this!!!