The Flowers On Alcatraz - New short story, considering submitting to magazines or competitions, would love a good proof read and some constructive criticism! Even a little helps! The Flowers on Alcatraz C.E. Mongon June 2018 Jesus, Benny, I’m here. I’m on Alcatraz, it’s June 24th, but you’re not next to me. You’re somewhere else. A different plane entirely, and I’m not even talking about coke or psychedelics, Benny, you’re just gone. Gone, like, for good. And I don’t know what the hell to do besides sit here, and eat the goddamn baguette we were supposed to share, and write this stupid letter, and think of what to name our daughter. I can’t even listen to your songs anymore. It makes me sick, especially lately since my stomachs so sensitive and I’m just puking like that bitch from The Exorcist. She’s a real pain in my ass, you know, and she hasn’t even come out yet. She’s kicking right now. She knows when I think about you, it’s ridiculous. When I sit on our old stone spot, and I look out at the ocean, and the sun makes the water sparkle like it has every June 24th for the past... what... fourteen years? I just can’t help but wonder how nothing can change here, when so much has changed in my own heart, and my own #life. You knew I stopped using. As soon as I found out, I fucking stopped. You promised me you’d do the same. But you broke that promise, and now I’m lost in the world and locked in a prison without love, and our kid doesn’t have a dad. I’m so mad at you, I can’t stand it. And now I’m crying. And people are staring. So I have to just shut up and try not to think about you and look at the water that we used to joke we’d own someday. I sit here, and the birds sing to me and I try to understand, and all I come up with is, I just wasn’t enough to keep you here. Is that ridiculous? Did I drive you to do this, Benny? Should I have never told you about her in the first place? You loved our #life, I thought, Benny. You loved playing to those crowds, you loved the guitar. You loved wine at two a.m. every night and drunk sex on what we thought was Jim Morrison’s old sofa and the nice car in the shop and the palm trees in the wind and everything about the way I looked at you. I thought palm trees and the look in my eyes was enough to keep you. How fucking naive was I? When I told you about the baby, you seemed excited. Surprised, like when I pushed you in the pool that night in August, and you dragged me in with you and we just laughed and kissed in the dark water. But you didn’t pull me in with you this time. You just dove to the bottom, and never came back up for air. Did it ever even fucking occur to you I would’ve gladly drowned with you? That all you had to do was ask? There are lilies growing again here. Everywhere you look. I miss you more than I thought a human being could bare. Love and love and love again, Your Wife Always, Alice How bad were you caught up in this shit, Benny, you beautiful fucking idiot? I found your stash in the studio. And I’ve got to be honest, seeing that much... it took everything I had in me not to tie a nice fucking knot around my arm and load up. But I didn’t. I swear to you, Benny, I didn’t. Our daughters almost one now, and I still haven’t named her, and your mother is completely up my ass about it and the government wants me to just pick a place-holder so they can register her citizenship but Benny… you were going to pick her name. You were always the one with the names. The car, the house, the record company you wanted to start one day when the music shit got tired. You just knew what to call stuff, and it was always so perfect and simple. As soon as you looked into her eyes, I bet you’d know. But all I see in her is you, over and over again, every time she so much as blinks. Her eyes are hazel, like yours, with that brilliant, brilliant green in the middle. My heart still aches when I think of you, and there are mornings I wake up and roll over to see your beautiful, skinny, tomcat back in the sunlight, and for some reason, my heart breaks fresh every time I find it empty. It’s been a year now. Should I still feel like this, Benny? This re-tearing of a wound every time I open my eyes? Should I be able to hear your music again, should I be attending spin class and going to wine clubs and hiring nannies like all the other Hollywood moms? Should I be able to leave her side, not just because I don’t want to be apart from my daughter but because I don’t want to be away from what connects me most to you? The last living part of you left to hold? Why do I smell you when I hold her? Why do I hear you when she laughs? I must be fucking crazy, asking a dead man question’s like these. This is the only time I write to you, these June days spent on Alcatraz. This damn island… why did you love it so much? It became your most popular song after your death, you know, the one you wrote about us and the lilies and the water and the way grass grew between concrete. And I still don’t understand why. What was it about a prison defunct and overgrown that called to you? Love and love and love again, Your Wife Always, Alice She runs around Alcatraz like a fool, the way you did. I think she’s going to grow up, and love the way you loved, too. I haven’t met a man on this earth who’s loved me the way you loved me. Before or after you were in my #life. Thinking about that makes my soul happy, but my head and chest and every other part of my body sting because I know, at least on this planet, I will never have that again. But that’s what makes things special. Wholly felt, I guess. You know the other day, she climbed out of her crib? All on her own, and dropped to the floor without a damn problem, and she had this and I swear in that moment I could hear you saying, somewhere in the house, in our home... “my girl.” Like you used to call me. She reaches out to nothing sometimes, not towards me or anyone else, just to thin fucking air. I’m convinced it’s you. I’m calling her Jane Doe for now, like those cadavers, a little morbid, a little punk but she has to have a legal name to get a birth certificate, which she needs to get into daycare, because apparently a kid isn’t proof enough that she exists. But I don’t call her that. Not to her face. I think you would’ve liked this. I think our daughter not having a real name would be a running joke between you and I. If I could just talk to you again. Sometimes, something will happen in my daily #life, like your mother bringing brisket at ten in the morning, or a mailman being chased by our neighbor’s labradoodle, and I’ll laugh because it reminds me of something that happened in those crazy fourteen years. Then I’ll just want to cry. Because nobody would have a damned clue what I was talking about. But I don’t cry. I just hold our little Jane Doe in my arms until you come back to me. Please, keep coming back to me. Love and love and love again, Your Wife Always, Alice So, our child has real, thick hair now, hair like her mama’s. Big and wild, just like you dreamed. She knows so many words, and can read, which is more than I could ever say for either us. She has a bookshelf full of books, and that nice 64-set of crayons, and a metal xylophone. But I think, one day, she’s going to want a guitar. I keep noticing things about the island with her that I never noticed with you. Like, how the air here smells different than on Beverly. It’s so much more of the ocean, and so much less of that “California bullshit”, as you called it. The trees are greener here, too, the grass and the bushes and the leaves have this vibrancy and when she touches one, she always tries to pull it right out of the roots, like she wants to save the color for herself. Remember when you’d pick flowers for me, and every June 24th I’d come home with a shitty, dying bouquet? She does the same exact thing. I played your song for her today, “The Flowers on Alcatraz”, the one you wrote when we first came here. She clapped, and laughed, the whole time, but loudest when you started to sing. You would’ve been proud. Mama didn’t even cry. One day, I’m going to really figure it out, Benny. I’m going to know why you collapsed on 65th, why you had to take that much, that fast, why you went alone, when someone who loved you was just around the corner, on the next fucking street, not a block away. Why I never get to know if you died walking towards me, or away from me. From her. Or maybe I won’t. The flowers are beautiful on Alcatraz. They really are. I wish you were here to see them. But I think it’s alright that you aren’t. Because our daughter, Lily, is with me, down by the water, picking her namesake by the stems, and humming the tune you wrote just for me. Love and love and love again, Your Daughters Mother, Your Widow Always, Alice.