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What Are Feelings? What are feelings that float in a heart, between the insecure beats of time? What are feelings that drown in parts, between the light and darkness of mine? What are feelings that are never spoke, between two people who both feel lost? What are feelings that lay so broke, between the value they hold and cost? What are feelings that create a sense, between love and something missing? What are feelings trapped inside me, with thoughts that I've been wishing?

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"What are feelings that float in a heart between insecure beats of time" -- Aagh, I think i jumbled the second line, but the first two lines captured how delicate emotion can be. Beautifully done. I like it a lot. ð½ð½ððð»â¨

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@HydrogenHelium Thank You Elise.. ðð i think im grtting my mind back to write again..

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Oh, i can understand that. It's a good feeling when that happens. I'm only now getting my voice back for writing after losing it for several years. Write on, my friend. You are so very talented. ð½ð½ðððâ¨

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@HydrogenHelium And you keep yours coming!! Enjoying your voice.. ððð

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Aww, thank you! It is nice to know if other people like my writing, because while i have some things i like, i dont know if any of it would resonate with someone. I hope you're having a great weekend!! ð½ð½ððâ¨

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Nicely written!!

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Very true! Great to see you back and on our new Opusia @barefootwriter25 If you need any help, please feel free to ask anything on Support and Mentors Group. All the best

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@honza.. thank you! I plan to post some things soon!!! Love the new site!!

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Great opus Brian. Hope you are doing great. @alienize96 )

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Thank you Honda. Hoping the App is out soon. I always find the Apps easier then webpages for quick access. But now that I got my login settled, I'll be checking in more.

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