Start Line Heart thumping deep inside my chest, ..

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Start Line Heart thumping deep inside my chest, Droplets of sweat trickling down my face creating tiny puddles of anxiety, I take one hard look at the never ending track that awaits my foot steps, I wait...wait for the piercing gun shot that threatens my feet to run, Ready, Set, Go!

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Delen

This is really good I like the anticipation you get when you read it but I think it should be longer :3 constructive Criticism

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This is really great!

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Haha thankyou will take it into consideration

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@philipparichyrich that was gr8

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@philipparichyrich very well written

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