My Saviour Last night I drank bleach, I died And..

My Saviour Last night I drank bleach, I died And guess who saved me It was my friend, the devil. ##haiku?

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Almost, the first and last line should have 5 syllables and the Middle line 7 ðâ¤ï¸

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Last night I drank bleach/ I died and guess who saved me/ my friend the Devil (would be correct)

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@sjw Haha. Thank you. I got used to 7-5-7. Anyway, haha. Thanks ð

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