Ladybug I have this group of lady bugs Bottleing..

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Ladybug I have this group of lady bugs Bottleing up inside. I gave you a few of the ladybugs And now there yours to hide. But more lady bugs needed to get out, They just kept getting bigger. So I went to Mrs. A. and let more out, But that seemed like a trigger. 'Cause god knows I can't be happy For more than a single day. 'Cause you went and took my lady bugs, And gave them all away. Now my precious ladybugs Are flying all about I'll never get them all back in So I guess my luck is out I dont think I can forgive you For letting my ladybugs out Oh how I long for those ladybugs That I will have to go on with out.

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Not so sure about this poem, but I wrote it and I would love any feedback at all, even if it is negative. :]

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U are still very youngã writing is an art.there is no wrong or right.just express yourselfand communicate .

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This poem has many interpretations . Can be your boundless imagination, creativity needing to be explored, can be your energy that needs to be spent etc .

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Shows depth of feelings , sharing, etc

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Thanks for the feedback!! Your right about there being no right or wrong when writing :]

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