Nightmare Ocean! by Evie Medcalf . Once in the deep dark ocean skidding on the rough floor was my sisters nightmare.There were thousands of them ! One was dark blue with yellow Spots and another was dark green with dark black stripes . Once my sister Maisie was skipping along the beach and she decided to go snorkelling on her own she told her mum Victoria and then she went she swam Miles until She decided to stop.She sat down on a low rock. Suddenly a flat blue thing swam up to her and surprisingly it said "hello".Maisie gasped and swam as fast as an arrow back to the shore . When she walked up the shore shouting "Evie Evie! I saw a... Maisie let me guess you saw a stingray "? Yes yes I did really this...Maisie you are always never see one you can say it but you can not prove it .o but Evie you can't prove it .fine I will prove it !so she swam back to the rock and waited for it .She waited and waited in till it came back suddenly it swam up to her .But before any one could speak Maisie said"take me to a underground world. O okay ." WISH !WOOSH! In a flash they where gone!W..where are we we are in CHOCOLATE LAND every thing is chocolate And edible ! I love you .num num num! O I don't feel well . It is because you ate to much chocolate . O o quickly take a Pictor of me ! Okay !SNAP! All don. Okay now let me take a Pictor of you ! SNAP ! O quick I need to go back to the shore.SWISH SWOSH!Yes I am back ! Evie Evie I have got proof yes yes I am hear show me the proof . Look look ! O my it is real sorry I did not believe you . THE END !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pp