Song? Hey I'm trying to write the lyrics to an o..

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Song? Hey I'm trying to write the lyrics to an original song so if anyone would be willing to help or write the start of one that would be fantastic! Thank you!

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Go for it.. I love writing lyrics so lets go ðð

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So you'll help me?! ðº

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Course ð ... U gotta tag me (@Burrfoot ) so I know you've replied.. What genre/style/theme?

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@Burrfoot well I was thinking something sorta slow that I could sing yet also play on my acoustic guitar around the Speed of Christina perrys "sad song"

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Btw.. I'm in Scotland so time zones are off.. It's bedtime for me so I'll pick it up in morning ð

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Ok yea totally good nite!!

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@Burrfoot

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Okey doke.. I'll listen to it and get back with a few lines.. What about a theme/story.. 1st or 3rd person ?

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Had a quick listen to the vibe (like her bit never heard that song before).. Here's a few lines that spring to mind... (I'll sleep on it but let me know if I'm way off)

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Maybe today I will find The words to show my mind But maybe tomorrow will come Without showing where they come from

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Yea I really like that!

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@Burrfoot

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ð ok @Disneygirl ð your challenge is to come up with a hook or chorus and move it on a piece .. Look forward to seeing what you do with it ðð

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Let's think about who the song is about and what their story is.. Then the words will come ð

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@Burrfoot ok so I was thinking the story could be like this 14 year old girl has known this guy for a long time and she thinks she is in love with him

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@Disneygirl ok nice ð been a LONG time since I was 14 so you're gonna have to bring it to that/your world.. But the theme is universal

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We hold hands and I wonder if you feel the touch The spark that let's me know I like you too much

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Yea I like that that's really good

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@Burrfoot

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So @Burrfoot that could defiantly work

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Good stuff.. Need a chorus a hook and a few verses and bingo!

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@Burrfoot yea totally

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@Burrfoot but you'll help me finish it, right?

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Course.. Internet wasn't working there but it's back now so I'll have another try .. Why don't ya pop a few lines down too

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@Burrfoot ok

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The look in your eyes makes me feel so special

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Your divine smile makes me want to die @Burrfoot

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Good work ððð

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When I'm with you, I always have hope

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When despair caught me I could never cope

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When you held my hand I could finally see

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That when I'm sad I know your always with me

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Sorry to bud in but I couldn't help myself

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@Yinara your fantastic!!

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Aw thanks your making me blush

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@Yinara haha thanks for the help, we are getting really close!

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Your welcome I don't write songs but music is my inspiration.

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