Dead Man's Wish of Uncertainty To sympathize a d..

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Dead Man's Wish of Uncertainty To sympathize a dead mans wish, Is to acknowledge an endearment that does not exist. If a frivolous flask can wash away sin, Will much more troubles be Whisked away if I binge? To sympathize a dead mans wish, Is to end a flight that seems to only persist; A troublesome worry of who he will miss, Fades away with the tilt of his wrist.

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Nice!!! ðððððððð

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Thanks! I really love the simplicity behind this one, I'm debating whether or not I should expand upon it and fill in the gaps, or keep it chopped(the way it is)? @mause574

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It's good

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Like you said the simplicity of it makes it a beautiful piece as it isðð you could expand it in a second version for your followers delightððð

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Bravissimo! Really well written. Magnificent use of vocabulary. Along with all your other pieces. Wonderful ð keep it up bud

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