Dear Brown Eyes Dear Brown eyes Twisted yet beau..

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Dear Brown Eyes Dear Brown eyes Twisted yet beautiful Shall I penetrate your mysticism if you had insisted Would you greet me with a cold kiss of stoicism Or a pleasure, so very addictive twas it absence made the heart grow fonder A fictive sympathy is all but mustered Charitable benignity facilitates unfounded reasoning To pursue unconscionable endearment And keep your admirers flustered

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Very good ðð

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Thank you it started as a little flirtatious joke with a friend, and I just keep adding to it lol. I think the ending is unnecessary. I might cut it after "a fictive sympathy is all but mustered" and continue from there.. Thoughts? @sjw

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I like it as it is and don't think it's unnecessary but if you do decide to change it tag me ð

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Oo there's some interesting use of words in this!ðgreat!

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Sienna Williamson

Austin

Sienna Williamson

Wendy