Right okay so I've started writing a story, but..

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Right okay so I've started writing a story, but I don't know if I should put it up. I mean all I've seen are these fantastic #poems and they're really really good an I'm just not sure. It's a Bioshock one (that's kind of Atlas and I's thing) so Ill maybe post it later. I know I was meant to write a #limerick and all but I can't, it's too difficult. But I'm okay at stories I guess, and I'm sorry that I won't be posting #poems. So I guess this is just a warning. Don't expect it to be good

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Don't panic Jack! Breathe! It's okay boyo. Didn't I tell you that you can post anything on this?? Don't worry, you'll be fine ððððððððð I know one person who'll certainly read it â¤â¤ðð

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@Atlas thanks Atlas â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤

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Honestly , don't worry about it I'm sure your work is amazing! From what I've seen everyone on opuss supports you. ððð

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@Atiya well thanks, I'll give it a try. I've just never done anything like this ðð

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@JackBrown good luck!! I am sure you will do fine ðð

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@wirelessbrain thank you ððð

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We wanna reaaaad. I'm sure it'll be great

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@smileysavgal oh okay ððð I certainly hope so!

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@JackBrown Of course you should! We would all LOVE to read it, and I'm sure it is amazing! And, you never know, if you don't try! (Or something like that!) ;D

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@boblikescheese okay, thanks ððð and yeah I guess so! ððð

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@JackBrown You'll be fine ð

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@Atiya thank you ðððð

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Don't say that, I'm sure it'll be great ðð

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@paintingskies thank you ðð well I'll certainly do my best

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Post it! Im sure it will be great!

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@flaming is writing a story...

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@TheGolden well I certainly hope so ððð and oh really? I haven't come across that yet, I'll look in to it ðð

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@TheGolden right!!! @JackBrown you should totally read @flaming 's story...

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@wirelessbrain I will ðððð thanks for bringing it to my attention @TheGolden

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@TheGolden @JackBrown I'm also writing a story with @flaming called Like A Rose.

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I'm sure it will be great

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@AVenus cool ððððð I'll maybe give it a look

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@bkim thank you ððð

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It'll be fantastic, I'm sure of it, and that's okay on the limerick-it was a hard first post I gave you!

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@MusicMiss33 okay ðððð and I am really sorry. It's not hat it was hard, I just can't seem to get things to rhyme. I'm sorry ððð

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I'm sure you'll be fine... I'm looking forward to your story,,post it! ð½ðâ¤ð

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Hey, welcome to Opuss and that ðððâ¨ its nice to finally meet you, I've heard alot about you ððâ¨ðð

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@DrCarrow hi! ððð it's great to meet you too! I've heard a lot about you too ðð good things, don't worry

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@JackBrown ahaha I didnt know that ððð but its good to know ðâ¨ yep Ive heard GREAT things about you ðð Cant wait for the story ðâ¨ð

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@DrCarrow I just hope it's good ððð

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@JackBrown dont worry, it will be Im sure!! ððâ¨ð

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Don't panic too much, think of this as a learning platform, the more you write, your confidence will gain and soon no one will be able to stop you. ð I saw your comment about not being good at rhyme..there's phone apps for rhyming dictionaries, when I get stuck for a rhyme (not all my poems rhyme btw), I use that app to help me. So there's always a solution, don't panic. âºâ¨

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Don't panic just believe in your writing ability ð

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@yikici okay ðð thank you! ðð I'll maybe try and find one of those

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@cbearlovesme1 I'll give it a try ððð can't promise it to be good though

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@JackBrown you're most welcome and don't 'maybe' just do so. ðâºâ¨

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@JackBrown you'll never know. Gotta believe its what you want and I bet people will love it. I can't wait.

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@JackBrown who cares at least your tried ð

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@AVenus not mecisarily...

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@yikici okay ðð I'll get to it then ððð

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@blueroses alright, I guess that's one way to look at it ððð I certainly hope people will love it

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@cbearlovesme1 yeah, that's a good way of looking at it ððð

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@JackBrown jack just take the plunge - seems scary but it's not everyone is a great support - just look at all your comments we all know you are going to do brilliantly - dont worry about what anyone else does opuss is for you to express your writing ... Karlito ðð

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@karlito thank you! ðððð okay, thanks. But I'm not really that good at writing

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@JackBrown don't worry about that - just let it run out onto the page - you'll be great !! Best of luck ðððð ooh here have a lucky bit of

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Melon it will help ð@JackBrown

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@karlito thanks ðððð

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You can post it! Lots of people including me post stories (mainly bad ones) and lots of people write really bad poems (#limericky snicker snicker @paraleah)

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@fl1ppyf1sh GEE THANKS!!

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@paraleah

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