His Mummy Never Cared. Peter was a young, shy bo..

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His Mummy Never Cared. Peter was a young, shy boy, With brown locks of hair, Peter had tons of toys, But he said he couldn't care. Peter never played with the toys, And never seemed to smile, Peter was a sad little boy and had been for a while. Peter's mummy was never there, To kiss him on his head, Peter's mummy was never there, She never tucked him into bed. Peter knew that he wasn't wanted, He knew that no one cared, So he dashed each wrist with a plastic knife, To make his mummy scared. His mummy, then she wondered how Peter could of known, She wondered how he'd gotten so tall, skinny and overgrown. Peter was an older boy now and a mature young man, people ask him about his mother and he quietly repeats the words, "she ran".

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Wow...this is a greatly written emotive piece...you captured it well....also welcome to Opuss Hun....hope you enjoy it lots ðððððð....enjoy ððððð

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@misslittleDHP Thankyou so much :')

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New to writing you say? Well what a start! ðâ¤ cracking write hun ððð¹ and welcome

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@leelee101 yes I am , just trying it out! Thankyou

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@Amellia you'll love it...

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This is is lovely the emotion is captured so well welcome to opuss ð

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Thankyou! ð

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Ahh poor peter

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@Amellia Aww you should see the tears in my eyes right now

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I Luv it

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@Emma_33 Thankyou so much! I cried too :')

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Heartwrenchingð Great poemðð

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@Emma_33 Thankyou

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@Blueblotts Thankyou so much!

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