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The Black Flame Chapter One I could hear the sounds screeching and whining as I arose. There was someone, something in my closet. As I ran up to the closet I put my head against the closet I could hear the sounds whining louder and louder. Then I suddenly heard a man yelling "Help, me they are going to eat me!" I dove into the closet and found myself in an alternate dimension. The walls were as black as asphalt and the air smelled like pea soup. I walked around the room I was in and then it cought my eye I saw a flame, a black flame. I was freaked out a black flame really that is crazy. So I ran downstairs to see what this place was. There were hideous creatures and flying fat people I was genuinly scared. When I went up to ask someone what this place was they dissapeared and I felt a tap on my back but not a light tap a tap that could penetrate skin. As I turned around I saw a Man standing behind me very slender and had no face. I ran but I couldn't escape. It was following me. As i ran something pulled me out of the street. When I looked at my savior i suddenly noticed it was a real human. "That creature you just saw is called slender man he is the most scary thing you will ever meet. "why" I asked. "I cant explain to large of a story to little time, this way follow me." he said. We travled through a corrodor which was full of dead spiders and rotting wood. It quickly opened up into a great room that seemed as if it was from the 1900s. There were people talking, socializing, and laughing at something someone just said. "These are all refugees from the real world that were transported here." said the man. "did you mention your name? I asked the man. "Sorry I forgot its Jon." he said. "my name is rick." I said in reply. "well nice to meet you rick welcome to the underground." he said. Jon showed me the rest of the "underground" It was a large area with a cafeteria, a gym, and most importantly an arcade. "why was i sent here" I asked jon. "no one really knows all of us came here through the closet maybe it is slender man or this is just a figment of our imaginations but no one knows for sure." He said. Then I felt an eerie wind blow through the building. "Take cover slendy has found us!" someone yelled. There were screams ecoing through the building. Meanwhile in the real world... "jon its time to wake up you have school today." His mom said as she entered his room. She gasped her son wasn't in bed he was, gone. She checked everywhere for him under the bed in the dresser and even in his toy chest but never the closet. If she would have checked the closet she would have noticed him knocked out in the closet but she never checked the closet not one glance in its direction. So she called 9-1-1 to report her child missing.

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