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Ace Chapter one Some walks into my office ,I need your help ,she said. With what? My roommate is missing. For how long? For a week ,I said. That is a long time to be gone why have you called the police? Because they will kill her. She was kidnapped. Yes she was. Will you help me. Yes I will, I said what is your name? Emily,she said. Well Emily did you got a note? Yes I did. Can I see it. I don' t have it on me, she said. Where is it? At home When can I see it? At dinner tonight. Okay where is your House? She gave me her address. I drove to her house, I knock on the door someone open the door, hello I am Ace what is your name? Molly, she said. Is Emily home? Yes she is, she is in the kitchen. I walk into the kitchen. I touch on the back, she turns hello she said. Hi, so what is for dinner. Chicken,she said. Yummy ,I said. We ate then I asked for the note. She took the note form her pocket. You lied to me! I said. Why did you lie? I wanted you over for dinner, she said. Oh okay, I read the note. You two are in danger, I want to stay here tonight, I said. No she said we Will be fine. I went to my office. Then I got a the phone rings, I pick up the Phone. Hello, I say. Molly is gone. I'll be right over. I drove as fast as I could. Emily was outside. She runs to me, she hugs me. What happen? I went to check on and she was gone. Where is her room upstairs, she says. I walk up the steps. I saw that the window was open. Was this window open Before. No it wasn't, she says. Can you stay with me tonight. You coming home with me. We drove back to my office. You live in your office. Yes I do. I said. Why? Cheep and I don't have to drove to work. Okay where do I sleep? You will sleep On the sofa. I will sleep in my chair. Okay, she said. She fell a sleep. Then I heard a scream. Emily are you okay? No I am not okay, I miss my friends. Can you lie down next to me? Okay , I said I lie down next to her We started to talk. So how did you become a private eye? She asked me I was a cop,I said. What happen? I did like it. Oh, okay she said. We kissed, I want you she said. We can not yet,I said why not because I have to solve the case first. Oh okay, she said. I want you too, I said She fell a sleep She was a sleep.

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It's well written but all comes across a bit sudden. You need paragraphs with description of the situation.
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