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Hey guys I really want to get into writing????????

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Unfounded Chapter 1 Mom wanted me to head to dad for a while I knew my family was falling apart but I never thought she was going to kick me out. I left her, but I never wanted to go to my dad's, so I left and headed to the one place I felt safe. The beach, my grandpa and I use to go surfing all the time. That is until he pass away. I lost my grandpa to the waves, he went under and nobody found him every again, i know his out there, but where? Once my feet touch the waves I felt free. Like my home was the beach, the quite windy air, the sound of the waves, peacefully rubbing against my toes. I thought nothing could ruined this very moment. Until Daniel came, Daniel is my best friend his always knows how I feel, but he is very protective. I'd stop hanging out with him after my grandpa funeral, but he always seem to find me. " hey " he said but nothing came back in replied, I stood still while he sat Down telling me he wanted to help! I'd wipe back a tear " you can't help, I don't help, I don't need you, I don't need anybody" Daniel mind went blank as if he had been lost, unfounded in his own thoughts. Daniel stood up toke my hand and gently push me out in the water. As soon as we had reach the center. We sank, deep deep Down, only a matter of minute until we drown, but we didn't as soon as I looked up, there it was the unfounded land my grandpa told me in his books of tales, I never thought could be real, I looked up to Daniel and said " where have you taken me, where am I? Even though I knew exactly where we were. Your grandpa told me if things ever gotten super bad take you here. " what, why would my grandpa tell you this place and not me" I'd asked, Daniel shrugged his shoulders and said " would you like a tour" I blinked back my tears to hold them in to try to understand that grandpa didn't feel like he could tell me this place, you've been here before? Your grandpa brought me here when I was a kid before you were born, I hit Daniel so hard I've hurt myself, you've knew about this place and you knew that I've had been lonely without my grandpa and you didn't think of taking me here sooner you are such a jerk! Daniel told me that he wanted to tell me he just didn't now when was the right time. I'd just looked at him and walk down the water staircase soon I was seeing a beyond stunning castle entirely made out of coral I was shocked to see mermaids, seahorse carrying carriage , I couldn't believe it, it was the unfounded land. To be contined

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