Opusia Logo
  • Ana Sayfa
    • Sadece Yazarlar Arama
  • Konuk
    • Giriş
    • Kayıt
    • Gündüz modu
Loch Sass Monster Cover Image
User Image
Kapağı yeniden konumlandırmak için sürükleyin
Loch Sass Monster Profile Picture
Loch Sass Monster

Freshman. Enjoys reading and writing, but has too much shit to handle right now. Still attempts to do all of said shit. Mixed results, minor successes.

  • Detaylar
  • 71 Mesajları
  • Dişi
  • 01-01-70
  • Yaşayan İngiltere

Resimler

Mesajlar yok
  • Zaman çizelgesi
  • Resimler
  • Videolar
    • Aşağıdaki
    • İzleyiciler
Loch Sass Monster profile picture
Loch Sass Monster
çevirmek   9 yıllar önce

Really? How is Opuss still a thing? Cmon you guys. I used this when i was 13 to pretend i was a writer. You can see more than half of the community has disappeared just like i did. Why? Because this is lame. Seriously. Only sad, lonely people here...

Beğen
  • Beğen
  • Aşk
  • HaHa
  • Vay
  • Üzgün
  • kızgın
Yorum Yap
Paylaş
avatar

Sammie ❤️

If you felt Opuss was lame, why did you feel the need to come back and say so? Serious writers? I work in the publishing industry and have also been published myself in a number of poetry anthologies. People come and go, not because they're not serious writers, but because life and writing novels get in the way. I'm sure @Honza would be upset to hear you say this, and i am also shocked to see that someone has even liked this. I can name a handful of serious writers here that a still here. If it's not for you, move on, and enjoy writing elsewhere! It's all up to the individual. 😊
  • Beğen
  • Aşk
  • HaHa
  • Vay
  • Üzgün
  • kızgın
· 0 · 1463774483

Yorum Sil

Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

avatar

Sammie ❤️

*that are still here
  • Beğen
  • Aşk
  • HaHa
  • Vay
  • Üzgün
  • kızgın
· 0 · 1463774520

Yorum Sil

Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

avatar

Lee

Spot on @sammielee46. 👍 Lame? What's lame is the fact that you even bothered to come back with such a waste of a post. Sure, there may not be as many active users as there once was, but the people that still use the app enjoy posting here. So why come along and seemingly encourage people not to bother? As Sammie said, I'm disturbed to see that one of our own has put a like on this. Maybe I shouldn't be surprised, knowing that many have probably read this and not bothered to take umbrage at disparaging comments made about the app they claim to love. But I still love the place, and I know that everyone is entitled to their opinion, yourself included, but I'd politely tell you just to move on instead of wasting your time with a post like this. @Honza what do you say?
  • Beğen
  • Aşk
  • HaHa
  • Vay
  • Üzgün
  • kızgın
· 0 · 1463776476

Yorum Sil

Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

  • 00:00
     
    Loch Sass Monster profile picture
    Loch Sass Monster
    çevirmek   10 yıllar önce

    Laces And Faces I just sat down and wrote, as I haven't done that in way too long. -- Ladies in swirling big dresses Men with fancy mustaches They all twirl around and around me. I see a glimpse of a familiar face Which quickly lost by a flash of lace And I feel lost once more. I see fuzzy and cannot concentrate I can't tell the time nor remember the date I don't know how I got here or who I am. I can feel the corset constricting my waist I bite my toungue and scowl at the taste I cannot find myself. A granfather's clock chimes it's eight forty-two Above the sound of dancing shoes And turn around to face it. I see my reflection on it's face And this creature I see looks misplaced Because that isn't me. The room swirls and bends under my feet My eyes scan for an empty seat But all I see are dancers dancing around me. I feel sick, I feel ill like I've taken the wrong pill As I collapse on the wooden floor. I feel a rush, has it stopped? Have my head fibally popped? And then everything is gone. There is only black and I can't hear As I am taken compeltely by fear Have I gone blind? Have I gone mad? I wake up in my room The clock's green glow says its five after two And for a moment I do not know who I am. Why would I dream of a ball? I think as I wonder the halls And then I remember, and then I recall It was my past #life. --- I feel this is shit but I haven't written poetry in so long that anything goes. Wrote this all in one sitting, in one goal, so I apologize if this makes little sense.

    Beğen
    • Beğen
    • Aşk
    • HaHa
    • Vay
    • Üzgün
    • kızgın
    Yorum Yap
    Paylaş
    avatar

    Ryan

    This is amazing!
    • Beğen
    • Aşk
    • HaHa
    • Vay
    • Üzgün
    • kızgın
    · 0 · 1427933421

    Yorum Sil

    Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

    • 00:00
       
      Loch Sass Monster profile picture
      Loch Sass Monster
      çevirmek   10 yıllar önce

      Figurines There is this little girl, A very strange little girl, Who likes to play With her clay figurines In her house’s attic. She is an abnormality, With but her figurines For company. Yet they are better friends Than most humans can be. There is this little girl, A very strange little girl, Who goes by the name of Laura. She shapes clay Into human forms Which she then brings to #life. Her eyes are ash, Her hair is coal, And her face is as pretty as can be. Her nose is pointy, Her lips are full, And she is always giddy. She laughs by herself, As she talks to her clay Figurines. She is quite a sight to behold, A vision to see unfold, A picture frame worth more than gold. Laura loves to play With her clay Figurines. They keep her busy for many days And many nights In a row. There is this little girl, A very strange little girl, Who has the power of #life. She makes little clay hearts, Which then, with a sweet kiss She blesses So it will be filled with a soul And start beating. Into the clay figurines The beating clay hearts go. The clay figurines Then burst into #life, Moving like a humans, Looking like humans, Behaving like humans, Yet just not human. There is this little girl, A very strange little girl, Who is treated like a freak. Like an aberration, A demon, A monster. They say she moves like humans, Looks like humans, Behaves like humans, Yet she is just as human As her clay figurines Who are yet just not human. But Laura never gets sad. She is glad For fear keeps them all away, It keeps her safe It keeps her little clay figurines safe Where no one can touch them, Where no one can find them. They are her secret, The one thing she has to herself And to herself only. And so she is glad. She knows that if they found out She would burn at the stake Like her mother And all her ancestors Like the witches they were. So she keeps quiet Up in her house’s attic Where no one can find her Or her clay figurines That dance And prance Around and around her giddy form. There is this little girl This very strange little girl, Who goes by the name of Laura. A witch she is, Blessed and cursed With the power over #life. So she stays With her clay Figurines. They are her only friends And she doesn’t even mind For they are better friends Than humans could ever be. A new family moved into her house Not too long ago. So she hides herself And her clay figurines In that darkened attic. She's disguised As the cutest doll you will ever Lay your eyes upon, She tricks little girls into playing with her Into loving her, Into taking her with them Wherever they go. Until she turns back In the middle of the night, While the little girls are asleep And sucks their souls Out of their beating hearts, Of which she then feeds on. She knows one soul Must be taken Before another Can be given. ‘Tis the law of #life, No one can create a #life, Without a sacrifice. To make a new friend, Someone must die, And she is always Expanding her collection Of clay figurines. There is this little girl, A very strange little girl, Who goes by the name of Laura. She is a peculiar one, That she is, And no one can deny. She hides in that house’s attic And tricks girl after girl So she can make another figurine. Laura still remains there As she will Forevermore With only her clay Figurines For company. *not quite a #poem, not quite a story. I classify this simply as "writing".

      Beğen
      • Beğen
      • Aşk
      • HaHa
      • Vay
      • Üzgün
      • kızgın
      Yorum Yap
      Paylaş
      avatar

      Brian Beisigl

      May not have been a poem, but reminded me of like a song that contains more of a story.. Cool.. 👍👏😊
      • Beğen
      • Aşk
      • HaHa
      • Vay
      • Üzgün
      • kızgın
      · 0 · 1420996850

      Yorum Sil

      Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

      avatar

      Loch Sass Monster

      @alienize96 Thanks again! And yes, that's what I was going for 😊
      • Beğen
      • Aşk
      • HaHa
      • Vay
      • Üzgün
      • kızgın
      · 0 · 1421006252

      Yorum Sil

      Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

      • 00:00
         
        Loch Sass Monster profile picture
        Loch Sass Monster
        çevirmek   10 yıllar önce

        Maybe Maybe if I close my eyes... No, your image is engraved in my mind Maybe if I hold my breath for as long as I can... No, though the haze of deoxygenation you'll still be there. Maybe if I sleep through the day... No, you'll be starring in my dream anyway. Maybe if I smoke just a little... No, for your memory I would belittle. So perhaps if I smoke a lot... No, I'd still feel you there through the pot. Maybe if I drink to forget No, I could never forget the day we met. There is no way to put you out of my mind, Maybe I will instead pull out my knife Maybe join you. Yes, 'tis what I'll do.

        Beğen
        • Beğen
        • Aşk
        • HaHa
        • Vay
        • Üzgün
        • kızgın
        Yorum Yap
        Paylaş
        avatar

        Brian Beisigl

        Love this.. ❤️
        • Beğen
        • Aşk
        • HaHa
        • Vay
        • Üzgün
        • kızgın
        · 0 · 1420940085

        Yorum Sil

        Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

        avatar

        Loch Sass Monster

        @alienize96 Thank you😘
        • Beğen
        • Aşk
        • HaHa
        • Vay
        • Üzgün
        • kızgın
        · 0 · 1420940148

        Yorum Sil

        Bu yorumu silmek istediğinizden emin misiniz?

        • 00:00
           
          Loch Sass Monster profile picture
          Loch Sass Monster
          çevirmek   10 yıllar önce

          Night Vale "Welcome to Night Vale," The deep voice says in my ear I smile and relax. *Please someone say they get this...

          Beğen
          • Beğen
          • Aşk
          • HaHa
          • Vay
          • Üzgün
          • kızgın
          Yorum Yap
          Paylaş
          • 00:00
             
            Daha fazla Mesajları yükle
            • Daha fazla bilgi
            • Daha fazla bilgi
            • Daha fazla bilgi
            • Aşağıdaki 50

            • polarqk
              Bianca
              Stonker
              Sally Beth
              Marto
              Laura Sosa
              Brian Beis
              $avanna ðŸ
              Alyssa
            • Daha fazla bilgi
            • İzleyiciler 58

            • PiscesPupp
              CountCrist
              Ryan
              Uthman Yus
              Sporty_nat
              Avery
              Mich
              polarqk
              Bianca
            Dil
            • English
            • Arabic
            • Dutch
            • French
            • German
            • Italian
            • Portuguese
            • Russian
            • Spanish
            • Turkish

            © 2025 Opusia

            • Yaklaşık
            • Bize Ulaşın
            • daha
              • Gizlilik Politikası
              • Kullanım Şartları

            Arkadaşlıktan Çıkar

            Arkadaşlık etmek istediğinden emin misin?

            Bu kullanıcıyı rapor et

            Önemli!

            Bu üyeyi ailenden kaldırmak istediğinizden emin misiniz?

            poked var Biasasse

            Yeni üye, aileniz listesine başarıyla eklendi!

            Avatarını kırp

            avatar

            © 2025 Opusia

            Dil
            • English
            • Arabic
            • Dutch
            • French
            • German
            • Italian
            • Portuguese
            • Russian
            • Spanish
            • Turkish
            • Ana Sayfa
            • Yaklaşık
            • Bize Ulaşın
            • Gizlilik Politikası
            • Kullanım Şartları

            Yorum başarıyla bildirildi.

            Mesaj, zaman çizelgesine başarıyla eklendi!

            arkadaşınızla ilgili sınırınıza ulaştınız!

            Dosya boyutu hatası: Dosya limiti aştı (6 MB) ve yüklenemiyor.

            Dosya yüklenemiyor: Bu dosya türü desteklenmiyor.

            Yüklediğiniz resimdeki bazı yetişkinlere uygun içerik tespit ettik, bu nedenle yükleme işleminizi reddetti.

            Gönderiniz gönderildi, içeriğinizi yakında inceleyeceğiz.

            Resim, video ve ses dosyası yüklemek için profesyonel üyeye yükseltmelisiniz. Pro'ya yükselt

            Teklifi Düzenle

            0%