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Tradurre   10 anni fa

"L" Part 1 “Please help, anyone, please!” a man cried out from down the street. His hands were covering a spot on his stomach and blood was seeping between his fingers. The man spotted me and walked as fast as he could towards me, he grabbed me by my shoulders with his blood soaked hands. “Please help me, you must stop him, please stop him.” the man pleaded to me, his voice wavering from blood loss. The man doubled over grabbing the spot where he was stabbed. I grabbed him by his shoulders and steadied him. “Who? Who do I need to stop?” I asked the man, his mouth started to form a word but only a sound escaped his mouth, the sound was an “L”. The man went limp I was not able to support his weight and I fell with him. “Sir, who do I need to stop?” I asked again, my voice trembling with fear. The man stayed quiet, his eyes gassed over and the last bit of strength drained out of him. I was crying by now and I started to shake the man. “Sir, please, tell me.” I sobbed as I held the body of the man. Someone must have finally called the cops because I heard the sirens off in the distance. The cops arrived and they had to pry the body out of my hands. I was soaked in the man’s blood and they took me down to the department. That night passed in a numb sensation of answering questions and them collecting my cloths and every sample of blood they could find. They never found the killer of that man, but the memory of that night was forever burned into my mind. I started to wonder who the killer was, all I knew was that his name started with the letter L, so I started to call him that. That happen one year ago today, the killer of the man had gone unknown, that is until I was killed, or almost killed. Christmas break had just ended and everyone was getting back into their usual day to day activities. I had my head down and I was heading to my next class when I heard something coming from the guy’s bathroom. I walked it to find the usual bullies picking on a new kid. “Hey! Back off will ya.” I say pulling the guys off of the kid. The kid was someone who would stick out like a sore thumb. He was wearing black skinny jeans with a crimson tee and black converse. He wasn’t the normal kind of kid you would see around a small school like this one. He had an aura about him that just screamed out that he has had a hard #life, and that he didn’t care what happened to the people around him. The bullies left pushing each other and joking around, while the new kid was groaning in pain. I crouched down and helped him up, even though he was in pain he had an emotionless expression on his face. “Hey are you all right?” I asked the guy. He just nodded and left as quickly as he could. I decided to shake it off and go about my day. The rest of my day went by in a flash, seeing the new kid every now and then, but other than that my day was its usual. Every day after school I would walk up to the guy and try to be nice and be a friend, but he would just walk away like no act of kindness would phase him. Over time I learned that the guys name was Leo. One day I was driving home and I saw Leo walking home, I decided to try and see if he would let me drive him home. I drove up beside him and he stopped walking. “Hey Leo, need a ride?” I asked him once he looked at me. “No, I’m good.” Leo said in a monotone voce, starting to walk away again. I lightly groaned and moved the truck beside him, keeping the same pace as him. “Just get in, I’m not going to bite you.” I say once he stops. “Fine.” he mumbles as I stop the truck. He gets in and buckles up then looks at me, “What’s you name anyway, I mean you know mine, but I have no idea what you name is.” he says watching me. I slightly chuckle and give him a brief look. “I’m Tyler.” I say with a chuckle, “Sorry if I seem a bit stalkerish, there aren’t many people like you around our school.” I look over to Leo to see him looking out of the car window. The rest of the ride was quiet, only broken by Leo telling me where to turn. I would cast a quick glance over at Leo every once in a while. For some reason Leo looks like I have seen him somewhere other than school. “Here is my place. Leo said as I pulled up to that one spot, the spot that had been forever been burned into my mind. That one spot where that man died in my arms. I froze and slightly chuckled. Leo looked at me like I was crazy. “You ok man?” he asked me. “Umm..ya I’m good, just a bad memory of what happened here. You do know what happened here, right?" I asked Leo. I looked over to him to see him giving me a confused look. I sighed and pointed to the spot where that man died. "A man was murdered, he died in my arms right there. They never found who killed him, mostly because all they had to go off of was the letter "L"." I look over at Leo to see his emotionless expression on his face again. He smiled softly and looked at me. "So I'm living in a dead mans house?" he asked me, half joking. He softly chuckled, "I wonder if he is haunting this place." his voice was full of curiosity, he unbuckled his seat belt and opened the door. "If that man was haunting anyone, it would be me." I say more to myself than to Leo. "Why do you say that?" Leo says from the door. "Well because he asked me to stop someone, and I didn't." I say shrugging. Leo slightly nodded and watched me. He slightly shrugged and walked to his house. Before he got to his door he called out to me. "It wasn't your fault, you were in shock." he walked to his door and went inside, leaving me to wonder what he meant. That night the drive to my house seemed to go on for hours, just turning over what Leo said and everything I knew about the killer. Once I got home I went to bed immediately, not wanting to stay up and dwell on the subject anymore, but my sub-conscience had a different idea. My dreams were riddled with the images of the man. One part of the dream I could see a silhouette of a man out of the corner of my eye. I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock blaring in my ear. I didn't want to get up but I wanted to figure out what was up with Leo. I got dressed and headed to my truck. "Hey mom, I'm going to stay at a friends house tonight." I call out as I walk out of the house. I hopped into my truck and started it up, the deep rumble of the engine calming me slightly. I turned the radio on and listened to the rock station. I was halfway to school when I saw Leo walking to school, he had his jacket hood up and his head down, never straying to far from the shadows. If he hadn't of moved when I looked out my window I would not have known he was there. Every once in a while he would look behind him and watch for a minute before he started to move again, I watched him for about five minutes before I called out to him. "Hey! Leo, hop in," he looked up at me and ran towards the truck. "Thanks, thought someone was following me," he says slightly out of breath. I looked around and saw no one around except a patrolling officer parked at the side of the rode. I shrugged what he said off and headed to school. The school parking lot was full of kids and trucks milling around, stalling as much as they could before school. I parked and killed the engine, letting the truck settle before I got out, shortly followed by Leo. "Hey, do you mind if I hang at your house tonight? Parents are gonna be out of town and there are people coming over to work on our house," I speak the lie easily, knowing that I had get to his house somehow. "Don't you have other friends you could stay with?" He asks sounding slightly confused. I sighed and slightly shrugged my shoulders, lowering my head slightly, "Not really, there aren't many people that like me around here." Not a compleat lie but I do have friends. He nodded and slightly shrugged. "Ya ok just make it weird ok?" He said jokingly. I laughed slightly then nodded heading to the school, Leo headed to his class leaving me behind. I soon got to my class not paying attention to the teacher, my mind was on the dream on what when on. I heard my name being called an I ignored it till the teacher came up to me and slammed on my desk. "Tyler! Are you even listening?" He yelled in my face. I looked up at him and shook my head, his face was red from anger and I was just making him madder, and today I really just didn't care. He grabbed my things and sent me to the hall thinking I would just sit there. The second the door was shut I left the school, heading to my truck. I needed to escape, needed to think. I ran ran through the parking lot, not caring if anyone saw, jumped into the front seat and started my truck.

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    Tradurre   10 anni fa

    Seraphina Ok im kinda stuck on this one, anyone want to help??? The sun was just coming above the horizon, it was the day I was to meet my suitors. A woman must marry before the dawn of her 18th year, and that was fast approaching for me. I looked in the small glass mirror that was given to me by the prince of the kingdom I am living in, also known as Arcadora. It was rare for the prince to show interest in any woman let alone a poor commoner like me. I smiled and admired my reflection, I propped the mirror up and pulled my long black hair into a braid that came to my mid back. I smoothed down the simple but modest light tan dress that hugged my curves, I picked up the light blue corset vest and put it on, tightening it to where it fit perfectly. I was beautiful, my jade green eyes stared back at me from the mirror as I looked myself over. I had to be perfect, if no man decided to marry me I was to be sent to the outskirts of the kingdom to live as a harvester and to never marry. The council found that if a woman was to marry after she was 18 then the marriage would fall to shambles and conflict broke out. I pulled on my worn brown slip shoes and put my mirror in a safe place. The house I was living was a simple cottage, a one story house with three rooms, one main siting area, the kitchen, and the sleeping room. I walked into the kitchen and grabbed a piece of bread. As I nibbled on the stale bread I crouched down and knocked on the floorboards till I found the loose one, with a small smile I removed it and pulled out a moss green cloak and a belt with a long sword attached. I was forbidden for a female to learn the ways of the ranger but I loved the feel of the sword in my hands. I put the belt around my waist and it hung loosely around it, I threw the cloak around my shoulders and tied the strings around my neck so it would not fall. With my hood up I slipped out of the house and headed to the forest. It was the only place that I was able to practice without anyone finding me, no one dared to go into the forest, they were scared of what they did not know. I was only going to practice till high noon, then I had to head to the town square to meet the man who I am to marry. The forest was quiet and relaxing as I ran through the trees, my feet silent on the ground. When I was running through the forest I was free, free from the laws, free from who I was supposed to be. I reached the clearing that I called my own, it wasn’t that big, just large enough for a training area. My eyes closed as I breathed in the grassy scent mixed with fresh running water, I pulled my sword. My arms no longer trembled from the weight of the man’s sword, I had grown stronger over the years of using it. My form was near perfect, considering I never had training. I moved through the forms with ease and always worked on getting my strength up. I soon lost track of time and only stopped when my whole body was tired and sore. I looked up to the sky to see that it was almost high noon, I would not have time to run home and hide my cloak and sword. I ran to the far edge of the clearing and placed the cloak and sword in a fallen hallow oak tree, throwing dead leaves on it. I ran towards the town as fast as I could, still staying silent as not to disturb the animals near me. Once I reached the area as to where people could see me I slowed to a fast walk. As I walked to the center of the town I fixed my braid to where I was presentable and I sat on one of the stone benches to wait and to give my legs a rest from the training. As I rested I looked around the town square and started to watch the people to analyze their actions, something I had perfected when I was little. There was a couple standing under the clock tower, the man was fidgeting and I could tell he was planning on asking her to marry him. There was a group of girls milling through the market, buying things for their mothers. I was listening to the area around me so I was not surprised when I heard the man behind me speak. “Miss Seraphina?” I turned to see a man with hair as black as ink, a smile that made the hair on my arms stand on end, and a slim body that told me he was not much of a worker. He held out his hand in offer to help me up. I slipped my small hand into his and his long fingers closed around my hand in a soft but firm grab. He gently pulled me to my feet and started to walk with me around the town center. I was quiet the whole time, only answering when the man addressed me, acting as a woman was supposed to act. I hated every second of it, the man’s hand never left my lower back and anytime one of my friends would greet me he would instantly push me to walk faster, saying that I was soon to be his wife and that I would be a higher status than them and that no man was to talk to me. I felt like a slave the minute I met him, he never told me his name, only that I should call him Sir. or Husband. I had to keep my eyes on the ground, never looking at anyone or making eye contact with the man. “Next week you will be moved out of this house and into mine, and the day after you move in we will be married.” The man said. “So soon?” my voice slightly squeaking as I looked up at him, making the mistake of looking into his deep brown almost black eyes. There was a sharp crack as the palm of his hand hit my cheek, making me fall to the side, “Never look at me directly.” There was a slight growl in his voice. “Now stand up, and it is going to be soon so no man has the chance to try and take you away from me.” The man said as I pulled myself up from the ground. The whole right side of my face was stinging, I resisted putting my hand on my cheek to try and comfort the sting. I nodded and turned to head inside my house, “Goodnight Sir. I will see you in the morrow.” I say softly as I went into my house. I watched out the cracks in the door as he left, as soon as he was gone I snuck back out the door and ran to the forest, my feet knowing exactly where to go. I reached the clearing and ran to where I hid my sword. “What is a lovely young lady like you doing out here in the forest? And with a sword no less.” I heard a voice from behind me say. I turned around to see the prince behind me. I am stunned at seeing him and I can’t seem to get my voice. “Uh…uh…um…I…” I start to say trying to make an excuse for having a sword. As soon as I find my voice, and so I don’t seem like a compete bimbo I instantly bow to my knees. “I’m sorry my Lord, my father gave me his sword..” he chuckles cutting me off and I look up at him, his soft brown eyes watching me with a smile in them. “Fear not young maiden,” he begins, my eyebrow raises at the young comment but I stay quiet, “I will not harm nor will I discredit you, for a woman with a sword is more dangerous than a man with ten…” his laughter cuts him off and I stand up. I knew I should not think these things but how dare he laugh at me, I was in complete shock at his sudden outburst of laughter and when he saw the shock on my face he laughed harder. I shook my head and threw my cloak around my shoulders and I started to walk away, but when I saw the prince taking off his bow and started to reach for one of his short swords it made me stop in my place. “In fact I would very much like to see how well trained you are!” he exclaims. I shake my head and look at him like he was crazy. “I’m sorry, but I can’t fight you.” I say still in shock, partly because I am talking to the prince and above all he is armed with a ranger’s sword, and partly because he wants to fight me. “Come now…this shall be intriguing.” The prince says, sounding like he thinks he will win. It was getting me slightly agitated. “What? Are you worried that I’ll hurt you?” he asks and I slightly chuckle, “how about this, I’ll go easy on you.” With that last comment I snap. I stand still for a moment before I pull off my cloak and unsheathe my sword, dropping the sheath to the ground. “I pray you do not go easy on me.” I say as I slip into my defensive stance. He goes into his stance and he starts to circle me, taking a step forward, faking a lunge. He wanted me to strike first and that is exactly what I do. Our swords clash as he counters my attack, swinging his sword in return into my defense. “You fight quite well my lady.” He says and I smirk as I attack once more, making him back up a few steps to defend the blow, “in fact your skill is far superior to most I have fought.” He admits. I chuckle and block one of his attacks with ease, “I practice, my prince!” I reply. The fight goes on for a while longer, attack, counter, defend, and repeat. Once he made the mistake of leaving his sword tilted a little too far down I instantly spun my blade around his making him throw it, I closed in on him and placed my sword up to his throat. We were both breathing hard and I realized how close I was to him. I took a few steps back and grabbed my belt and sheath and my cloak. I sheathe my sword and he starts to clap, I can’t help but smile and bow slightly. “Very good for a woman.” he says with a smile. “Not too bad for a man!” I call out as I leaned against a tree to catch my breath. He was looking at me with a slight interest. “I would very much like to do this again.” He says smiling, he was trying to be charming, and I found it quite funny. I smile and stand up to leave, “I’m sorry, but I am engaged.” My voice taking on a playful tone to it. “At least tell me you name my Fair maiden.” He says as I turn around. “Seraphina, my name is Seraphina.” I say softly. “Seraphina.” I can hear him say softly. I slightly smile and start to walk away. “Wait! I must meet you again! Please?” he says making me stop once more, I slightly sigh and turn around. “I practice out here every morning till high noon.” I say softly I hear the prince’s name called out from behind him and he turns around and yells, “It’s alright, I’m fine, calm yourselves.” At his distraction I ran from the clearing and hid behind a tree. I look back to see him turn to look where I once stood and his face fell slightly. He turned and headed in the direction of where the royal castle lays. I turned away from where the prince once was and I threw my cloak over my shoulders, tying it around my neck once more. I pulled my hood up and started to walk through the forest, never making a sound. I reached the edge of the forest and slipped past the patrolling guard to run to my house. It was quiet on the street, all lights were out and everyone was sleeping. I stayed to the shadows of the houses as I approached mine. The house was dark and I slipped inside, running to the kitchen and pulling up the loose board and putting my cloak and sword away. I slowly walked to my room and pulled off my dress and shoes, leaving me in my thin under dress and my panties. It was comforting being able to relax in my simple underclothes. I slipped onto my small bed and sleep instantly pulled me under. I was in the open field by the river, my mother was bathing in the river and I was brushing out my wet hair. I was only 5 at the time, just barley learning the rules that women had to follow. I picked up the small silver necklace that was my mothers, admiring the small cross and the way the sun shined off of it. I was startled out of my daze by a shrill scream, I peaked around the bush that was shielding my mother. There were solders surrounding her and she was trying her best to hide herself. “Come now, you must not be ashamed of your body.” The head guard said. He was easily identified by the way he held himself. “I haven’t been with a beauty like you in years,” the guard growled out as he grabbed my mother’s wrist. “I will not be unfaithful to my husband,” my mother said as she pulled her hand away from the guard. The guard got mad and hit her, making her whimper. I heard another scream, then I realized it was me who had scream, but I didn’t realize it till the guards looked over at me. “So you have a daughter, hmm let’s see what she thinks of the head guard.” He said with a grin. The guard walked over to me and when he grabbed my face to make me look him in his eyes I bit him, hard. The man pulled his hand back and cursed. “Kill the brat,” the man ordered as he walked away. “No please, not my daughter. Punish me if you must, but please don’t hurt my daughter.” My mother said with tears making her blue eyes look gray. The guard nodded and pulled out a small dagger, walked to my mother and grabbed her blond hair. He pulled her out of the river and threw her in front of me. “Time to learn what happens when you don’t do as you’re told,” the man said. He took the dagger and sliced it across my mother’s stomach. It was deep, but shallow enough to make her death a painful one. I cried out and broke free of the lower rankings guards grasp. “You are a sick man,” I say, my voice full of pain. I crawled to my mother and I couldn’t hold back the tears as I watched the #life drain out of her body. I woke from the dream with tears running down my face. I slowly sat up in my bed and pulled my legs up to my chest, the sun wasn’t even up, but I was wide awake. I silently cried for a while longer, letting out my pain for my mother. I haven’t dreamed of her in years, and the dream opened up old scars and created new ones. That was the one reason why I trained with my sword. I was going to kill the man who killed my mother. Once my tears dried up I got out of my bed, the floor was cold, it was still dark so I had to feel my way around the room to find my way. I felt through my clothes till I found my riding pants and men’s shirt. I was going to head to the market and get me a few more swords. I went to the loose board in the kitchen and pulled it up, pulling out my cloak and my sword, but instead of replacing the board I reached farther down till I felt the leather bag. I grabbed it and pulled it out. In it was over 500 gold pieces, saved from years of work and saving up. I put my cloak over my shoulders and put the hood up, my sword resting in its usual spot on my hip. I opened the door to the outside and slipped out into the dark of the night, keeping to the shadows as always. There was a dog baying in the distance and I slightly smirked, no would know that I was out, no one knew me at the distant kingdom where all weapons were made and traded. The merchants there didn’t care if they sold a weapon to a woman, gold was gold. I needed to find a horse to ride, there was a stable closer to the edge of the kingdom. The owner is a friend of mine and he wouldn’t mind if I borrowed a horse. I turned down the street that would lead to the stables and I realized too late that the street was not empty. I saw three guards and I instantly moved to the shadows, not wanting to be seen. The guards were talking and I slowly approached them. “Sir, when is this going to take place?” one of them asked. “They say in a few months, but it will end up being in a year or two.” The second guard said. “We need this to happen soon sooner.” The third one stated. I couldn’t tell what they were talking about but their voices soon faded as I walked past them and closer to the stables. As I looked over to the horizon I saw that the sky was getting lighter. I had to be fast. I spotted the stables and I ran towards it. It was a simple building, three walls just tall enough to house horses, with dividers and gates to keep the horses separated and locked in. There were six areas divided off and I headed to the last one, in it was a midnight black mare that I always rode. As I approached her she slightly neighed. I opened the gate and slowly walked up to her head, always keeping one had on her. “Shh, its ok Midnight, we are going for a little ride,” I say softly as I grab the rope around her neck. I pulled her out of the hay covered stall and towards the saddle closet, her feet softly making a clopping noise as she walked on the cobblestoned ground. The closet was unlocked and I opened it to find my saddle resting in its normal place, it was a stained leather saddle that was worn down from years of use. I looked back at Midnight to see that she was going to stay where she was, I dropped the rope and headed deeper to find her bit and reins. I found them hanging in the same place I left them, at the back of the closet hanging on the wall, they were made of the same stained worn leather that the saddle was made of. I grabbed them and headed back to the saddle and let the smell of leather relax me as I ran my hand across it. I walked up to Midnight and easily put the bit into her mouth, throwing the reins over her head before I turned to get the saddle. I picked it up with ease and walked over to Midnight letting her slightly smell the saddle before I put it on her, I tightened up all the straps and headed to the street. In one swift motion I mounted her and kicked her into a trot, not wanting anyone to notice who I was. It was easy to leave the kingdom behind me in a flash of speed, the hard part was coming back. The rode to the small merchant town that I am heading to is through the bandit land, so everyone was afraid to go to the merchant village. No one knew the name of it, only that it was full of merchants so everyone just called it the merchant village.

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