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Hi, my name is Magnus and on time of writing I'm 13 years old. I enjoy writing and political/warfare based history and live reading books based in post-apocalyptic style settings like mortal engines etc. I like banksy and come from Sheffield the steel city. I have a YouTube channel

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перевести   13 лет назад

New Story Hey guys I know that I was original writing a story about some guys but I'm gonna stick with my original storyboard idea

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    Untitled -story, Part 2 Nagoi Nagana lifted his eyes from his maps as the sounds of perfectly polished boots squeaking on a perfectly polished floor echoed through the arched hall. "your son to see you lord general" Said the man in a crisp, clipped tone which matched his immaculate uniform. "Well, see him in then" Sighed Nagana. The man saluted and walked down the room and pulled open the large, oak door, then stood to attention as Naganas son strode into the room, giving a retiring salute to the soldier who then turned and closed the door. Naganas son was called Nogona after his farther, unlike his farther he was rash, cocky and quick tempered. His hair was black and greasy and his Chinese complexion made him look like a prophet from an ancient religion called Jackie Chan. He wore a olive green uniform of the same style of his fathers and bore the rank of captain on his shoulder plate. He stormed down the hall and stopped in front of his farther. He didn't salute. " Farther", he began," Farther, I know that this rank you awarded me" he said, prodding his striped on his shoulder," was only gained through basic training and simple guard operations and the fact that I am your son." he continued." therefore, I wish to prove my military prowess by leading an operation of significant military importance" he said, curtly. " What kind of operation did you have in mind" said his farther, wearily. " Well" his son said in a more approving and antagonizing tone. " I wish for you to provide me with the 16th seaborne, the 12th airborne, the 24th siege, the 9th mechanized companies and a collection of naval forces to transport these men as well as air support" he stated, while pulling out numerous rolled up pieces of paper from a satchel. " Well, um what do you require these forces for?" asked his farther, in a retiring tone of voice as he lent back in his chair and prepared for the on coming storm. " Well" beamed Nogona, " I plan to invade and hold the islands of Angland and the US bases of the Irland Islands" in a finalizing tone.

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      перевести   13 лет назад

      The Personification Of Evil That sound again the rustic ticking, the sound of tortured clockwork. The blackness that engulfs me is bit that of nights creating, the un-natural sensation of nothing around me but the most beautiful thing being right infront of me. The soundness scream, the noiseless soundscape of the tortured imagination. Black. I am awake again, my vision is blurred and spiked with red strands of blood stained tears. And still that ticking. Around me was black, charred wood. A body. Black again. Now I only see light, I hear voices, singing there praise to the sky. But below comes the red blood darkness of what lives below.

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        перевести   13 лет назад

        A List Of Jokes Q: What do you call cheese that isn't yours? A: Nacho cheese Q: Hey, no any good jokes about sodium? A: Na I found it hard to helically farther was stealing from his job as a road worker, but when I got home, the signs were all there. I woke up this morning to a tap on my door. Funny sense if humor my plumber has. I'm not vegetarian because I love animals, I'm vegetarian cos I hate plants

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          Storyboard Idea It's 3000 years into the future and the world is ruled by two, left and right wing factions, the united west, led by North America after the economical and social collapse of Europe with what's left been ruled by the US and the free peoples empire of The east, a left wing continent taking up Asia, what's left of Australia after the 10 minute war and Russia. However (before someone rages I know we are millions of years off this) the sun is expanding and earth is on the front line after the liquidation of Venus. So, the UW sets out to the artificial island that is the south pole and begins drilling, and drilling and drilling until (nice again I know this is very un-realistic) they reach the centre of the earth and hollow out the middle putting large combustion engines there and extracting what's left of the earths oil from the inside to feed there furnaces along with anything else they can find. They then cover the antarctic area with engines and pull away from the sun. Alls going well until they realize that with the sun far behind and the earths core missing there is no heat or light. So a handful if hand picked scientists, technicians, a team if soldiers and whoever else can pay there way in are frozen and buried in a bunker under mt Etna. They then wait as the world around them floats into ruin. Feedback please I need to know wether to continue or not thanks!!!!!!

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