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Traducciones   12 años

Bioshock- Dark Encounter The year is 2013, in New York's most prestigious children's orphanage "Doctor Tennenbaum's home for Little Sisters". The place is well known for taking in any orphaned child they find, not just girls as the name suggests. The founder, Jack, is dying. He is 72 years old. A nurse comes in to check on him. The nurse looks young, but her eyes reveal that she may be older than she seems, the same way Jack's make him seem so much younger. Her name badge reads "HELLO, MY NAME IS: Eleanor" "How are you feeling Jack?she asks, her English accent now somewhat distorted from living in New York for so long. Jack does not respond. He doesn't need a nurse anymore. He doesn't need anyone anymore. He passes painlessly, and sleeps peacefully for the first time in so long. Eleanor stops a moment to reflect on the man's #life. Oh, and what a #life it had been. There was a notebook on the table. Eleanor opened it, the parchment-like pages scratching her hands, and began to read... They told me "Son, you're special. You were born to do great things". And you know what? They were right --------------------------------- Okay so this is a little introduction to the story I'm writing. Any comments?? Thanks xxxx

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@Atlas so I (finally) uploaded it. Missing you loads baby xxxxx ❤❤
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Atlas

@JackBrown loving it man!! 😘😘❤❤ told you it would be good! Missing you too babe ❤❤❤❤
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Emily

Hehe the comments of you two make me happy 💗💗💗 love it so far! 😘💗 good start 😊😊
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    Traducciones   12 años

    Hey everyone! Just dropping in to say that Craig's arrived home now. He's exhausted amongst things, but thanks to everyone for their love and support for him. Hopefully he'll be okay soon xxxxxx

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    @MusicMiss33 @DrCarrow
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    Grace

    @JackBrown thats good news
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    Jack O'Connell

    @loveandpeace yeah, it really is sweetie 😊😊
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      Traducciones   12 años

      Um okay so story wise, how many words would be okay per segment? I mean I can't just upload the whole thing, it's already over 4000 words, but I was thinking that if I upload it in little segments then it'll be easier to read, so I was wonder how many words would be advisable. Because I don't want it to be too long, but I don't want it to be too short so I was just wondering. Thanks xxxx

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      It doesn't quite matter how many words, it only has to be split up in places that make sense really. But like 200-400ish idek the only story I ever wrote was a failure 😋.
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      Sienna Williamson

      Personally if a story is more than 3 pages on here I don't tend to read it but I'm not sure how many words that is sorry 😏😘
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      Jack O'Connell

      @LoveIsLove right okay, I'll bare that in mind thanks! 😊😊😊
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        Traducciones   12 años

        Right okay so I've started writing a story, but I don't know if I should put it up. I mean all I've seen are these fantastic #poems and they're really really good an I'm just not sure. It's a Bioshock one (that's kind of Atlas and I's thing) so Ill maybe post it later. I know I was meant to write a #limerick and all but I can't, it's too difficult. But I'm okay at stories I guess, and I'm sorry that I won't be posting #poems. So I guess this is just a warning. Don't expect it to be good

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        Atlas

        Don't panic Jack! Breathe! It's okay boyo. Didn't I tell you that you can post anything on this?? Don't worry, you'll be fine 😘😘💗💗💗💗💗💗💗 I know one person who'll certainly read it ❤❤💙💙
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        @Atlas thanks Atlas ❤❤❤❤❤❤
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        Atiya

        Honestly , don't worry about it I'm sure your work is amazing! From what I've seen everyone on opuss supports you. 😊😊😊
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          Traducciones   12 años

          So uh....hi

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          Hi!! About time you joined, Welcome to Opuss!! 💗💗💗
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          Atlas

          HEY JACK
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          Jack O'Connell

          @MusicMiss33 hey! Yeah, I figured I'd see what all the fuss was about 😊💗💗 plus Atlas practically bullied me into it 😊😊 it's nice to talk to you again!
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