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A Village Boy Once upon a time there was a boy, he lived in a small village. When he was of age His parents asked he who in the their village he would marry. To this he replied "no girl in this village is right." Do they got a company of men from their village for him so that he could go to the surrounding villages. They searched high and low (meaning the mountains and valleys) but still no woman was right. One day they were hiking trough a thick forest when they came upon a stone house. His men could not see the house, so when he asked them to find the door them to find they looked at him confused. He again pointed to the house. Still none could see it. So he rubbed his eyes and the house vanished.