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The Legend of Pandora the Dark Demon Returns Chapter 8 Rapid Waves Arthur, Rupert, Alice, Tod and Rose made their way towards the boat. The boat wasn't a captain's boat, very large and has weapons loaded on it. It was just a small raft. So they all climbed aboard and slowly floated down the calm river. "Arthur, what are these Protection Forces, I need more information?" Tod asked. "These Protection Forces, Pandora needs them to keep this world living. If the dark possesses them then Pandora would be destroyed. Well that's what the Dark Demon always say." Tod and Alice were shocked by what Arthur just said, "So we need to protect them at all cost." "Correct but if we fail then our mission is over, so first things first we go to the lost cave. That's where we would find Lucky," Rupert answered, while peeking out of Arthur's pocket. Rose grabbed the oar and everyone else gathered around the middle of the raft and sat quietly listening to the calm flow of the river trickling along the banks. An hour later Rose heard a loud rushing noise ahead, "Hold on tight!" "To what!" Tod yelled. The raft speeded up down the fast current, the water sprayed against their faces but Rose tried her best to steer the raft in the right direction. A tight corner was approaching so Rose used all her strength to swing the raft around but the raft collided against the bank and smashed into tiny pieces. Everyone fell into the rapid waves, the strong current pulled them all under, tossing and turning until they couldn't breathe. "Timber!" Someone shouted within the forest. A huge tree came falling down across the river acting like a bridge. A young monk hurried over and reached out to Arthur. Everyone made a chain by holding hands and Bruce gripped on to Arthurs and pulled them all up. They all thanked Bruce and Lola for helping them. "Where you off to?" Bruce asked. "Where going to help the Protection Forces, they're in trouble. Tina's here to capture them so we need to stop her before the Dark Demon is reborn," Arthur said "Let us come with you, we can be useful ," Lola said. Arthur agreed, "Of course, can't let my friends down." They all set off through the forest making their way towards the exit to find the lost cave. Bruno and Lola saved their lives and has joined the team once again.

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Sorry for not going on earlier and seeing your chapter! Great as always!
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Thank u sorry haven't been up dating been enjoying Xmas and new year have posted it on wattpad though but I'll update on here tomoz. Oh and thank you for that sight wattpad.@Aveyond
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    The Legend of Pandora the Dark Demon Returns Chapter 7 Raptor Attack Arthur looked around to find raptors circling around but Zebajin was in danger too. Rose the puppeteer grabbed Braxton and Sparrow from behind her back and pulled the strings, launching Sparrow into the bright shimmering sky that glistened down on Pandora. Sparrow let Braxton drop, landing by the raptor knocking it flying into the other pack. "Just borrowing this Zebajin," Braxton explain. "Hey that's my favourite hammer, give it back!" Zebajin shouted. Braxton went straight at the raptors but with each swing the raptors leaped into the air. The hammer just made giant holes in the ground that covered half the pitch. Then Braxton swung the hammer three hundred and sixty degrees launching it into the air, knocking a raptor out. Sparrow then caught the hammer and smacked the other raptors across the back, breaking every bone inside their body. Ragz, Rupert, Arthur, Grizzly and Sid drew out their swords ready to battle the raptors. Tod felt useless so he had to join in this battle to save his sister from any harm. Tod also drew out his blade and held it tightly but also was shaking in fear. "If you want to help you can but pull yourself together man, both of you!" Arthur shouted. Tod and Alice stared at each other by how strong and brave Arthur is even though it costs him his #life. Then the raptors leaped at them all. Bogz, Rupert, Arthur, Grizzly and Sid swung their weapons towards the raptors, wounding them in battle. Sandy and Yuna bucked two raptors with their hooves and Slither casted a fire spell that burnt them. The raptors could hardly stand. Zebajin grabbed his hammer and rushed in raising the hammer above his head. Lots of blood was pouring down his arms but Zebajin was furious and he had his eyes fixed on the battle. Dropping the hammer once again onto the raptors but Tina called them back to the orb making the troll tumble to the ground. Everyone rushed over towards Zebajin to find his arms smothered in blood and his eyes slowly dropping. "Please...S...Save Pan...dora." Zebajin gasped. "Don't be silly Zebajin, you're not leaving us yet," Rose explained. Rose searched her pockets for some useful items. She took out a small vodka bottle, bandages and tape. Rose poured the vodka over Zebajin's arms. He gripped his teeth to ease the pain but it was stinging too much that he couldn't take it anymore. Zebajin gave out a mighty cry that began to upset the others even Alice. "Would he be alright Tod?" Alice wept. "Yes he's a strong errrr, anyway just be brave yourself okay, we can't act weak in front of Arthur." Rose wrapped the bandages tightly around the troll's arms and stuck some tape across to secure it in place. "Thank you Rose," Zebajin mumbled. Suddenly a bolt of lightning was heading straight at Zebajin. Grizzly threw his battle axes in front of Zebajin that repelled the spell back towards Tina. The lightning struck the pillar making it collapse to the ground bringing Tina with it. "Why you!" Tina called out. "I've had enough of her!" Alice shouted. Alice pulled out her long bow and fired three arrows that swirled towards Tina. The arrows tangled her blue hair and then pierced in the tee leaving Tina hanging. "Wow Alice that was great, you also can use three arrows at once as well," Sandy answered. "I just hate the villains in fairy tales., they always get on my nerves. They always stop happy endings . Now it's time to shine, I need to be strong just like you Princess and also you Arthur. One day I will be a beautiful Princess." "Yes you can, only if you believe, please stay strong Alice it's your only hope," Sandy said as she smiled at the young girl. "I can see what you mean. Zebajin nearly went to heaven...if Rose didn't save his #life he would of..." Alice gulped, the words took her breath away, "so I will stay strong for now on and keep everyone safe." Yuna smiled at the little child then gave a command to arrest Tina. When they turned she had vanished all that was left was the three arrows, pierced into the nearest tree with a few strands of hair twined around the arrows. "Where's she gone?" Alice yelled. "She must have done the same thing as before, look purple mist," Rupert spoke. "So this Tina, she's not an easy target. This is going to be tricky," Arthur explained. "What was that she held in her hand? The beasts came out from them, what are they?" Tod asked. "I recon they're like our Protection Forces but she had these orbs, you may encounter her other creatures if she has more. To my calculations, she might be on her way to gain the Protection Forces, you must stop her at all costs," Yuna explained. "We'll try Yuna," Arthur answered. So Arthur, Tod, Alice, Rose and Rupert made their way towards the river where they found a boat. This would take them to a cave where they would find Lucky the rainbow fish. The one that saved their lives back where the octopus attacked them. "We better get back to Cindy to tell her the news Sid," Dash spoke while munching on a clump of grass. "Your right," Sid mounted onto Dash's back and galloped back to Angel village to find Cindy, Daisy and Lily. Finally Alice has come out of her shell, firing three arrows that tangled Tina's hair. What ability, Tina has vanished before their eyes. How are they going to defeat her if she has that kind of power?

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      The Legend of Pandora the Dark Demon Returns Chapter 6 An Unexpected Battle Oxens beat their drums and a dwarf blew on a giant horn that was ear piercing. Arthur led the others to meet Princess Yuna's in her room. Arthur knocked on the door by using the door knocker that was a unicorn head. "Come in!" Yuna called out. Arthur and the others stepped in to the room to find Yuna the pure white unicorn lying on her golden carpet also greeting them were Slither, Grizzly, Sandy, Zebajin, Rose, Sid with Dash and Snowy, Ragz and Bogz. "Princess Yuna, I've arrived." "I see and you've also brought some children from your place. Why?" "Please Princess it's not his fault we followed because I wanted to see what a princess looks like. I want to become a princess someday just like Jasmine," Alice explained. "Young child, this is not some child's game. Jasmine noticed that when she travelled here and fought the Dark Demon eye to eye. If you want to be a Princess you need to be brave." Zebajin stepped forward, "The children would need these weapons if they're going to help us." Zebajin handed Tod a glistening blade made from blue crystal and Alice was given two long blades called a Fallkniven and a long bow for long range. "Alice, you need to protect your team at all cost with long range attacks with the bow and arrows and if the enemy comes in too close draw your blades. You read me?" Zebajin explained. Alice nodded. Bogz then strolled over and handed their clothing, Tod had heavy armour that took him off his feet because of the weight. "You'll get used to it in no time hahahaha," Grizzly laughed. Then Alice had light armour and a bag of arrows, "I've gave you more arrows just in case you run out," Bogz explained. "Now go and get changed down the corridor then I'll tell you about why you're here," Yuna said. Alice and Tod left the room and strolled down the narrow hallway looking at all the pictures that were on the wall. "Tod stop!" "What is it?" "This person he looks like..," "Don't be silly. It doesn't look like anyone. It says, a summoner who protected the fourth war." "It looks like Arthur's father look closer Tod!" Footsteps came closer towards them as Tod stared at the picture and Alice spotted another picture of a girl. "Your right that's my father, he was a summoner too like my sister Jasmine. They both risked their lives in the war but some reason my father survived. He still hasn't told me since this day. I always think maybe Jasmine would come back but of course she's gone forever. Just remember Tod, protect your sister. I was just concentrating on the Demon instead of protecting the summoner. It was my fault why she passed away. I was too cocky always thought I was right but instead my sister was always right." In front of Arthur's eyes a flash of light shone down from the picture, there stood Jasmine in a red glittery dress and glittery shoes. "Please don't blame yourself Arthur, we all fought the battle to our best and you were never in the way. We worked in a team back there. Alright you did rush in at the start but you shouldn't blame yourself. I was the one who rushed in when he threw you through the skulls eye. I was angry that the Demon can control anyone and boss them around. Now it's up to you to stop Tina before she revives the Demon." "Alright Jasmine, I will and I will do this for you and for Pandora." Tod and Alice glanced over to find Arthur talking to himself. They looked at each other but where confused by what they just saw. Jasmine smiled and gave him a hug even though they couldn't touch each other and vanished back inside the picture. Tod and Alice just rolled their eyes and went to get changed and then the three returned to Yuna for information. "Now young heroes, there is a young sorcerer who's the Dark Demon's niece, her name's Tina. She is trying to gain the Protection Forces for her Uncle and also finding her Uncle's graveyard. We need to stop her at once before this happens and also protect the Protection Forces. The Animal Tamers are also split up protecting their brothers and sisters." "We've already faced her and she's very tricky princess, she's even stronger than the Dark Demon itself. She vanished into thin air but ended up by Alice. We nearly lost another person until our Majesty fired his rifle," Rupert squeaked. "I see so you've encountered Tina already, so you know this young girl by eye. So your mission is to find her and defeat her before she revives the Dark Lord." "I want to come too, Arthur please. Jasmine was my best friend and she always was there for me. Back in the forest I was going to kill her team because I thought they were sent from the Dark Demon but then I realised how caring she could be. So please I need to find some information about my parents too," Rose asked politely. "Of course, it's great to see you three again, couldn't believe that I'll be stepping into this world again," Arthur said, while smiling with joy. "Well it's great to see you too Arthur," Braxton and Sparrow greeted. Soon the palace began to shiver and shake, they all rushed outside to find Tina on top of a pillar, attacking the palace with a purple dragon that swiftly came down from the clouds and breathed blazing hot purple flames at the palace entrance. The dragon had scaly skin and had three horns like a triceratops. Everyone jumped for their lives dodging the purple flame. Sandy and Bogz drew their bow and launched some arrows into the air at the dragon. Tina casted a spell that made the arrows come back at them. Grizzly, Ragz, Arthur and Sid drew out their weapons and struck the arrows slicing them in half. Tina chuckled, "You're too weak for my liking but maybe I'll test you with a creature of mine." Tina called the dragon back by holding an orb up into the air. The dragon vanished inside the orb that turned a dark purple. It had a sort of misty look to it but then Tina held a lime green orb that sparkled in the sunlight. "I call forth Raptor!" Raptor was a medium sized dinosaur with long pointy claws on its feet and arms, razor sharp teeth to slice open human flesh, sharp eyes that stare s down at the prey and also it uses its legs to leap at its prey. "Ha one dino, is that it," Zebajin said being all brave. Zebajin lifted his hammer off the ground and charged at the dinosaur. He then brought the hammer back down but the dino leaped backwards making Zebajin slam the hammer into the soil, cracking it open. The raptors began to call out. The orb glowed brighter sending out hundreds of raptors at once. Zebajin looked startled and began to hurry back to the team but one of the raptors leaped onto him and began to tear away his skin. He cried out in anger, while blood poured out onto the soil. The raptors had then surrounded and Tina just cackled, while watching the team come to their death. Oh no, Tina has the team surrounded and Zebajin is in danger but slowly dying. They're against the time to save the troll's #life. Will they eventually save him or is it all over?

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        The Legend of Pandora the Dark Demon Returns Chapter 5 Panic Attack A tentacle swung forward wrapping around Alice. Alice started to scream as she was being pulled towards the octopus. Rupert leaped off Arthur's shoulder and drew out his Jambiya and made a clean cut through the octopus's tentacle. This made the creature screech out loud and was out of control, swinging all eight tentacles around the cave. One of the tentacles got behind Arthur by surprise and knocked him into the lake. Arthur's bag slipped out of his hand and landed on the murky ground in a large puddle. Everyone started to panic, while the creature was torpedoing through the water chasing after Arthur. Arthur clenched his blade tightly in the palm of his hand ready to strike. The octopus sprayed thick black ink that's very poisonous and it covered the whole lake. Arthur couldn't see a thing but also he needed to reach the surface because he couldn't hold his breath any longer. The octopus wrapped its tentacles around Arthur's neck, trapping his windpipe. He wrestled his way out but the octopus just tightened its grip . Tod knew he had to do something but what? Then something sparkled in the distance. It was Arthur's rifle. Tod sprinted over and picked up the rifle with care. He pulled on the barrier to check if there is any bullets. There was one silver bullet left. Arthur forced the blade into the octopus's left eye. This made the creature loosen so that Arthur could escape. When he reached the surface, he gasped, breathing in pure oxygen. Tod rushed over and pulled Arthur to safety. It wasn't long until the creature returned. Tod aimed but then froze by how huge the creature was nearby. "Tod shoot! Snap out of it," Arthur shouted. The octopus opened its mouth wide. Tod breathed slowly and placed his finger by the trigger. The octopus torpedoed towards the edge crashing its body against it that caused the cave to crumble. Boulders started to drop from the ceiling making giant waves. The waves rolled over Tod, Arthur, Alice and Rupert pulling them towards the octopus, who had its mouth ready to eat them alive. "Tod fire!" Everyone yelled. Tod placed the rifle against his shoulders and nervously tried to get a steady aim. Tod pulled the trigger and the silver bullet rapidly sped through the air, piercing the octopus's thick skin. The octopus roared in terror smashing the cave with its tentacles. Boulder after boulder fell on top of the octopus but also the cave was caving in. "Rupert, what to do? There's no way out," Arthur asked. "This sounds crazy but we might have to swim." "What!" Tod gasped "I said." "I know, I mean with that creature." "Yes, so swim fast. Quickly, while we have a chance." Alice held onto Tod's hand and they all took a deep breath, then dived into the lake and swam for their lives. Soon the octopus rocket through the water searching for the children. The Children were taking passage after passage but couldn't find the way out. Soon they were losing their breath and needed to find surface right away. Alice began to blow bubbles from her mouth and her face began to turn bright red. The bubbles soon attracted the octopus, which swerved in front of them stopping their track. Arthur scanned the area but there was no more passage ways and not even a way to the surface. The octopus reached out to choke the children that were exhausted. Arthur swung his blade but missed and the tentacle smashed him against the wall. Alice called out to Arthur but forgot about the water, she started to choke and her vision was becoming blurry. Then out of nowhere a giant rainbow fish swallowed up the children and Rupert, then barged pass the octopus by head butting it against the wall. The fish took them back to shore and then flapped its flipper as it dived back under the sea. "Wow what a beautiful fish," Alice said. "Yeah that's Lucky, he's one of the Protection Forces." Arthur looked back to find that Lucky had brought them to the palace. So Rupert, Arthur, Tod and Alice made their way towards the palace to meet with Princess Yuna. What a relief, safe and sound. Thank god Lucky came to the rescue of it would have been the end of the heroes. Would Tod and Alice find their confidence to help Arthur in battle?

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        Nice chapter! Tag me in the next!
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          The Legend of Pandora the Dark Demon Returns Chapter 4 Flesh and Bone Rupert lead the team through the welted meadow making their way towards a deep gloomy cave that smelt like rotten guts. Tod could smell the power of the scent from afar causing him to heave, "You're joking right, we've got to go through there?" "Of course where else," Rupert answered back. "But it's putrid I can't handle the smell I'm going to," at that moment he vomited bringing his tea back up. "Here you go Tod, I also have one for you too Alice." Arthur handed over two plain cloths' from his pouch. Tod, Alice and Arthur wrapped the cloths' around their face trapping the scent away from their nose. "You two need to strengthen up, you can't be scared for ever. There are creatures out in this world that would just crush your bones such as the orcs. The scariest thing that you should be afraid of is the Dark Demon. This Demon is someone you wouldn't want to mess with. The Demon breathes down your neck forcing you to give up. I need to become stronger like Jasmine, who defeated this Demon. I need to put my fears behind me," Arthur explained. "But the Demon's gone right! You said that Jasmine sacrificed her #life taking the Demon down," Tod said confused because he thought that Arthur is brave but inside he blames himself for what happened. "Yes but that's why Tina's here. She's came back to Pandora to find her Uncle and revive him from the graveyard. We need to stop her before that happens." When they were near the cave, there was a wooden sign it said, Restricted Area. "Oh well, we better turn around and find another way to this palace," Tod quickly said, while hurrying back where they came from. Arthur held his hand out and gripped on tight to Tod's clothing pulling him into the cave by the scruff of his neck, "You're coming with us. You have to look after your sister Remember you're the one who brought you two here." "We'll I thought you were playing a game, I didn't know this was a real place!" Tod shouted. "Please you two stop arguing," Alice sobbed. "I didn't ask for you to come but no, you had to follow behind like lost sheep," Arthur said sarcastically. Tod rugby tackled Arthur knocking them both down a bank. Tossing and turning, while smacking their backs against some large boulders. When they reached the bottom Tod was above Arthur ready to pelt his face in. A mighty roar echoed through the cave making the cave walls tremble. Tod's knees also started to shiver that raised his blood level that caused his heart to race. Arthur shoved him against the wall and peered around the corner, while Alice with Rupert on her shoulders took her time coming down the steep bank. The mighty roar came from a group of giants that hurdled around a pile of juicy meat that's attached to a thick white bone. There muscular arms and legs were like tree trunks that could easily crush a human in two, they had greasy hair and a wide mouth that had saliva drawling down their face with every bite they took out of the juicy meat. Arthur whispered to the others to follow, taking their time skimming rock to rock. A giant caught a strong scent of human flesh that travelled up his hairy nostrils. The giant reached out and caught Tod with his bare sticky hands. "Help!" Tod yelled. Tod could feel his bones were going to shatter by the giants grip also the other giants were licking their lips as they strolled over. The giant began to laugh. Tod could see left overs in between the giants stained teeth that made his breath smell of rotten guts. The giant opened up wide and lowered Tod into his mouth. Tod began to panic trying to release himself free. Meanwhile, Arthur was searching through his pouch looking for some items. He pulled out a brown circular bottle and filled it with chemicals, then tightly screwed on the lid. When Arthur threw the bottle, the chemicals fizzed within side and made the lid burst off spraying the acid into the giants eyes. The giant flung Tod across the cave, making him crash land on the hard surface. Tod went to stand up but he had twisted his ankle. Arthur flipped Tod onto his back and hurried towards the passage while dodging the giant's feet and fists. The passage lead to a beautiful lake. Arthur looked back but some reason the giants wasn't following them. Arthur placed Tod gently onto a soft flat boulder then foolery checked his leg for any damage. Arthur could feel that a bone was out of portion so he placed the bag and rummaged through to find the things that could come in handy. He pulled out two planks of wood and some string that he wrapped around Tod's leg to secure it in place. Arthur told Tod to hold his breath. When Tod held his breath, Arthur snapped the bone back in. "Ah! Thank you Arthur, You're really good at this maybe you should become a doctor," Tod explained. "A doctor, what's that?" Rupert asked. "They help our people by using medicines. Just like the healers Rupert," replied Arthur. "I see, so do you have battles to battle, your majesty." "I don't battle, other people do who's joined the army. They fight for their lives to protect their country and to make peace but war never stops, just like here,"Arthur explained. Soon the floor began to quiver making a loud growling noise. "Was that any of your stomachs, Alice asked the others. "No!" They all answered at the same time." They all stared at the lake, it looked like it was about to erupt by how many bubbles were coming to the surface. Then a large beige creature came to the surface, eight long tentacles swaying from side to side and two bright golden eyes stared at the three children. They all sprinted back through the passage but the octopus blocked the passage by using its tentacles to smash the passage so that the boulders collapse. They all turned to find that they were trapped, no passage to escape just a hungry octopus ready to eat them alive. First giants now an octopus, would this be the end of their journey or is someone going to come up with an idea?

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