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Translate   12 years ago

The Real Ebony, honey we had to leave my boss promoted me and we have to move to River Stone.” My dad said looking at me closely to see my reaction. I rolled my eyes and tucked my brown long hair behind my ear. “You could have just stayed with your old job we were doing just fine.” “Well we are going to do even better there. And it was a chance of a #life time Ebony; you know that I have always wanted this.” Dad said with excitement. I huff “Yeah I know dad you have been talking about it ever since you started this job.” Dad gives me a grin. “It’s time to get packing we are leaving in four days.” I walk up to my room not wanting to hear any more of this so called river stone place. Why couldn’t dad just be happy here in Ashford? It’s a nice small town everyone knew everyone. It was nice and quiet with really good gardens. I sit on my window seat and look out the window. I can see the really big gardens, its breath taking. My bedroom has the best view in the house. There’s a knock at the door I don’t answer because I want my parents to leave me alone I am so upset that we have to move I have to leave all my friends. My mum walks in with a box; she puts the box down and comes over to me. I turn mu head back to the window looking at my reflection in the glass. My green eyes looking really sad, my brown hair doesn’t have any shine to it. My mum sits down next to me and touches my shoulder. “Honey, I know you’re upset, I am too. I don’t want to leave here either but we have to make your father happy. I will help you pack ok we will start after dinner.” My mum kisses my forehead. I turn to her and smile slightly happy that I’m not the only one getting upset about this. “Thanks mum.” She smiles back and leaves the room. I walk out the back door and yell to my parents that I’m going for a walk and I will be back for dinner. I walk to where the gardens start near the corner shop just to blocks away from my house. I walk in amongst the trees with the wind slightly blowing. Touching every trunk I go past to feel the energy that is there. I close my eyes just letting the sounds and smells over take me. I open my eyes again, there’s a boy in front of me. He has short spiky black hair with green eyes just like mine. He smiles lightly knowing that I am checking him out. `` “Hi.” He says softly. I bit my lip. “Hi.” He’s eyes started glowing light green. My mouth drops open and I just stare at them. He smile brightly and moves closer so I can see it easier. I step back. “Why do your eyes glow like that?” “I have a gift and you have the same. I have been searching for you for a while now.” He tilts his head to the side. “Who are you?” He looks around. I look around to trying to see what he is looking for. “I can’t tell you now meet me here tomorrow same time ok.” He starts walking backwards. “Oh ok, sure.” He smiles then walks away.

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    Translate   12 years ago

    Alex Chapter 4 I woke again in the same room but this time I had no chains on my wrist. I got up to stretch my legs and oh my god it felt amazing. I walked around for a bit longer stretching out my legs more. After about five minutes i heard someone walking towards the door. There was three loud bangs on the door, then smoke came out from the sides of the walls. I covered my mouth with my top trying to keep out the smoke from getting into my lounges. The smoke was so think that it went through my shirt. About half a second I breathed it in I blacked out. I’m really starting to get sick of being knocked out. This time when I woke again my hands were behind my back and I couldn’t see a thing. Someone took the cover off my face and I could see. I looked beside me and there was a girl with short red hair she was really short and a boy with dark brown hair and was just a bit taller than me was in the same state as me. I then look in front of me and there was this big man looking down on us. He was really talk and had really short blonde hair. He had a scar on his left cheek and if u could see closely his blue dark eyes had a red ring around them. He walked over to a box next to him and opened it. He pulled out a big strip of meat; it was dripping red blood eww. Beside me the girl started throwing herself wildly. She looked like she was having a spas attack. She got free of the rope that had her arms tied together. Her back lifted up and she started growing hair and her joints were cracking and getting bigger. I moved over a bit scared she was going to hide me. Then all of a sudden she was on four feet and she was growling. She had turned into a werewolf!!!! I looked at the guy that was holding the meat and he was smiling. What’s going on?!?! The wolf licked its lips and the guy throws the meat at it. In a flash the wolf chopped on the meat and swallowed it. The guy pulled out two more bits of meat. Like look really yummy now than before. I felt something change in me. Then I felt burning hot fire I screamed from the pain. Then it was over, I was standing on four legs looking down at the man. He was smiling huge now. He throws the meat at me and the boy that also changed when I did and we at them quick. Then the man started changing is well. Once he was in is form I could hear someone talking in my mind “Now that you guy have turned I can tell you what’s happening. Well I am Stan and I am the pack leader. I needed to get more members in my back because all of mine have died from a war. And you guys seem to be god enough to be those people. For the next couple of days I’m going to teach you how to fight in your wolf for and human form. And also teach you how to survive in the wild.”

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      Translate   12 years ago

      Alex Chapter 3 I woke up in a cold, dark room. There's a lot of dust in the air it's kinda hard to breathe. I try and sit up but there was a chain on my wrist. I look around and all I could see was at the top of the roof a bit of light coming through the window. I could see slightly in the room. I was sitting up on a ripped up old bed. Why am I here?? What happened when I blacked out?? I got so freaked out that tears were streaming down my face. Oh god what's going to happen to me? There was movement coming from outside the room. It sounded like foot steps. Oh my god oh my god!!! This can't be happening!!! I heard the door unlock, I lay back down and closed my eyes pretending I was still knocked out. Big heavy steps came towards me. I had to try so hard not to scream. All of a sudden i was lifted up into the air and it bites my neck hard. I screamed so loud that it hurt my ears. When it let go and put me back down on the bed I felt dizzy. "You are apart of my pack now." It whispered in my ear. What pack??? What does that mean?? A minute later I past out.

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        Alex chapter 2 The girls smirked at each other then looked towards me. What's going on I wonder. Then all of a sudden they started running at me. I turned around but only made about two steps before they were on top of me. I got dirt in my eyes when they pushed me to the ground and I couldn't see a thing. One of the girls grabbed both my wrists and the other grabs my ankles. Everything goes silent for a second then a fist crashes into my thigh. I close my eyes tight, the pain killed but it only stung for a minute. After a minute a hand slapped across my face almost blacking me out. I kick with my legs trying to get free. The hands on my ankles let go, I stood up and pulled my wrists in hard against my chest till they were lose. When they were I got up and ran as fast as I could. I still couldn't see but I didn't care. I ran for a bit but then I tripped over something on the ground and banged my head on something hard. I heard laughter before I blacked out.

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        Cant wait ill chapter three!!!!!!
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          Alex Chapter One "Alex, take those ear phones out and pay attention." Mr Gold said looking down at me. I'm in history and I wanted to block everything out like most days. I've been teased ever since I moved to Kate high and that was only a couple of months ago. These blond popular girls Samantha, jasmine and Casey have been teasing me since day one. They teas me because I am the new girl and just recently everyone's heard about my parents. My parents are different from other people, they can see the dead sometimes. But now it's gotten worse they can see them all the time now. They both had to stop working because it was freaking them out so much. I lost track of time by day dreaming that the bell went to go home. I pull my hoody over my head got my stuff and walked out of class. I walked slower then other people because I don't want to catch up to anyone while walking home. I rather be on my own then with someone that will tease me all the way home. When I was just at the dirt path just up from my house, Samantha and her crew were in front of me. "Go away I just want to go home." I stare at them

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