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My way of writing seems to bring everyone I know to an ease in some way of the meaning, however, I feel very few unbiased remarks because I'm asking the closest and best of friends. I'd like a broader and more critical response to my writing about it's deepness or opinions that can better my style of writing. I am all ears and willing to accept any and all criticism. A appreciated thanks will be in my response. Thank you. - Ray

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Translate   11 years ago

This Succulent It's unmistakably #life changing once seen up close, for its right to be bared is unmatched by any other growing, although through simple implications this can only reveal nothing more than jinx and folly by the one whom receives such a truth through word, unforced of its realness by the the consumer himself, no need to gloat or greedy entitlement when the owner seeks and finds and holds onto it forever, a delicate rarity, but when found, so edible and pleasant to the taste, it's pure in perpetuation, leads to a guided light which burst from the seams, cavities of light empale the eater with bliss to a jovial atrophy, no longer is impatience, various uncomfortable distorted and dissolved into this eminence of graceful beauty in the form of a passive gleam surrounding the user, all that is unnatural dusts away with no remembrance of such disgusting feelings, but only the provider knows this, as the consumption originates there and nowhere before shared with the rest, so until another can share the beautification of such an organic spore to blossom to fruits in glory, sharing is the only source for visible energy to be spread amongst the world.

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    Translate   11 years ago

    Hardest Bargain You weren't my friend, weren't my neighbor, but now you're gone and people said nice things about you, I just wish I could have helped, thinking to myself why you made the decision to harm us all with your absence now, and still maybe we, those who never knew what was really going on around your body, will never know why this was ever the hardest bargain.

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      Translate   11 years ago

      Barrage "I want that one", as she pointed in jest to his direction, and it was instant infatuation of her needs, desires, but he was no man to be of clandestine temperaments, something him alone knew, so the charade began..

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        Translate   11 years ago

        Idealists It's unattractive perhaps how much I think of you and no one else, my mind grows shutters and flutters pics of you to myself, from what information I do contain may bring light to the way of involving me in your directions, but will I forget this love and has it come to a change when I know you better enough to struggle with your pains, these dire procedures kept in thoughts with my plans of becoming the one to which you chose for dance.

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          Translate   11 years ago

          Let Me Know Sometimes I think about you or always, But you're the long term view so I'm stalling, I'm trying to keep you for the great times we will know, If I say you're worth a million breaths is that what you want, Let me know.

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