Tearing The Skies New Horizons At Dusk Pale me i..

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Tearing The Skies New Horizons At Dusk Pale me in deaths-shroud Unearthly indeed for My rivers run red for The fruits of a Queen Lost to distant dominions that no man hath seen, This bastard Earth knows none of she Silent we fly Through the vast far flung Nebula, Reaping red trails through the thick of the night, Blinding the eyes and the faith of the innocent, Tearing the Skies new horizons at Dusk

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I'm rather unsure what to make of this; these stanzas being my last ones written preceding an emotional breakdown followed by something of an incidental period of dire 'writers block' (a concept I'm not at all satisfied with, however there beyond lies another tale to be told). I sometimes like to keep stock stanzas and/or lines for those times when ones mind is in too severe a mess of distress to utter anything worthy of simple site, so I may shelve them away to quell the swell of my pain from no doubt many a rainy day due.

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Reamonn if you want me to write a review for the one of your poems I can do it this week

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@octopuss I would adore it if you could do that for me The material I'm currently working on is far superior than what is presently posted and will be posted as i finish it - but yes absolutely by all means please do!

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God, I think Gushing from the Rush of Lust Within wad written when I was almost 17...time is of the essence...so much to do.

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@thedeadpoet great! I will wait for your new poem)

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This is great. You have a talent sir

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