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Im 14 years old and i write poems, im from belfast, northern ireland :) and all the poems i post are written by me <3

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Translate   13 years ago

She Was Perfect She is beautiful but she wont believe , Most times she wishes she couldnt breath. She is perfectly skinny but its not enough , Shes gave up food and trying to love. She refuses compliments but takes all the shit , How skinny do people want her to get? She looks in the mirror but all she sees , Is how much thinner she could be. She spends her nights on the bathroom floor, Head in the toilet and lock on the door. No one knows how shes losing the weight , And they wont know until its too late....

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    Translate   13 years ago

    Somewhere, somebody is thinking about the tremendous impact you've made on their #life . Not me , I think you're a cunt 

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      Translate   13 years ago

      Screw The Haters, Kittens  Dear Opuss haters, Why are you so mean? Is being supportive nowadays just far too mainstream? Is respecting others feelings too much of a deed. Is collecting fallen tears your fetish filled with greed? Is hiding behind your phone a game you like to play? Making fun of someones words or just because they're gay? So as you type your jealous enraged words, I hope you know that each of your comments are as valuable as turds . 

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      Teddy

      When did that happen?
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      Naomi

      What happen??@Burrfoot
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      brodie

      did u post this because u think i hate ur poem deveils deal?
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        Translate   13 years ago

        Girl In The Mirror Looking in the mirror , shes staring back at me. I dont know who she is , this monster that can see . A wicked cunning smile, Her eyes so full of pain . Me and this girl are so different but yet were so the same, Her lips are red , her skin so pale , Something about this girl just seems so surreal. I put my palm up to and slowly touch her hand, But as i do so she begins to turn to sand , The closer i get she just begins to fall. All thats left is a pile of dust to the right a antique doll, Pressed inside its hand a key , What door,gate,or portel it opens we'll have to wait and see...

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        Sienna Williamson

        Really like this it's left me intrigued ☺
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        Naomi

        Thanks 😊 @sjw
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        brodie

        nice
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          Translate   13 years ago

          Devils Deal The clock echoed my dark room, The street lights from outside provided enough light for me to see him standing there.He glaced at my hand then vanished , his shadow remained still. I could no longer hear the clock that had kept me up to this late hour , it was like time itself had been frozen. I rolled over in my red blankets as i cuddled my face into my pillow i felt a hand grab my hair fiercely , draggin me down the back of the bed , kicking and struggling the grip tightened pulling my hair out strand by strand bringing pieces of my scalp off aswell. Blood trickled down my face, the hand holding my hair began to move onto my face latching its palm onto the bridge of my nise and pressing down hard, my nose cracked and began to bleed and pain filled my face.suddlenly something was crawling up my arm, thousands if spiders as the hand held my mouth open the spiders scurried inside choking me as they went down my throat, i gagged and tried to fight but this is what happens when you make a deal with the devil.... - my first mystery horror let me know what you think  

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          MΘΣ

          Great work.
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          Naomi

          Thank you 💗
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          brodie

          .... stupid.
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