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Hey...I love to read and write romance stories, I also like witty comments from different movies...If you like what I write let me know, comment and please give any suggestions, I would really appreciate them, Lots of Love, Millie xxx

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One To Remember...Chapter5 I ran towards her crying as Luke called an ambulance. I cradled her in my arms and she just fell, if I picked up her arm, as soon as I let go it fell to the floor instantly. After Luke made the call he came and helped me position Lucy so she was safe and checked she was still breathing etc. I was too panicky to check if she was still alive and if she was okay, it all became too much. There were people all around us staring and there he was standing over me. Joe. Why did he have to come back?! What is he doing targeting all of us. First, Chloe, break her heart, then Lucy, make her unconscious, who's next, me!! Before I got a chance to think too far ahead we heard the sirens of the ambulance pull up outside the house. Within a second the medics were rushing in with a stretcher and pulling Lucy onto it and then suddenly she was gone and back in the ambulance on the way to the hospital. I needed to get there, she couldn't be there on her own. But I wasn't old enough to drive and Chloe was, just, but she was to much of an emotional wreck, who had also had too much to drink to be able to drive. So I was stuck here, leaving Lucy at the hospital on her own. That's not fair. I rushed upstairs, back to Chloe to tell her what was happening and that we both needed to go. Luke stayed downstairs and made sure everyone was evacuating the building, Joe last. Once everyone had gone, he punched the idiot, breaking his nose. But he could sort that out for himself no one wanted anything more to do with him. After everyone had left, Luke came upstairs to find us. He had a car parked out the front, and neither him or Jake had much to drink, so they were sober enough to drive us to the hospital. They drove manically through several red lights but this was an emergency we needed to get to the hospital for Lucy, what if she never woke up?! No, we couldn't think like that, but that thought was in the back of my mind. Luke pulled up to the entrance so the rest of us could jump out and run in while he found somewhere to park. I headed straight for the receptionists desk and was just able to mutter why and who I was here for. She led us through many long corridors to a room at the end of the last corridor in the building. The walls were white and it was spooky, it didn’t seem right down here, I could tell something was wrong. She showed us into the waiting room that appeared empty at the time and the three of us sat down waiting for Luke to enter and Lucy's doctor to return. It seemed like forever before anyone came in and then when Luke finally came in, he sat down next to me, I felt reassured. Until I saw the doctor heading towards the door...

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    One To Remember...Chapter4 I'm sorry, I really am, Chloe I didn’t mean to hurt you' Jenna whispered 'You didn’t mean to hurt me?! How did you think I was going to react?! Did you really expect me to give you my blessing and just let you two be happy together' she screamed. Jenna just stood there she had nothing to say, and all she could do was feel sorry for herself, but she was the only one who did 'He was my boyfriend!! You know how much I love him!! You, Lucy and Abby have always known, I told you long before we got together. And now you go and do this!!' the words came out stuttered, she couldn't help it as she was crying so much 'I…' 'It all makes sense now, the whole reason you've been asking how me and Joe have been lately, you have just been waiting for something to go wrong so you could worm your way in and take him away from me!! Well, well done, you've succeeded only there were no problems before so thanks a lot!!' she butted in screaming before Jenna could talk 'I wouldn't be so sure, if there were no problems why would he always come to me complaining that you were a pain, you were too clingy he couldn’t have a #life, you always talked about yourself, you were horrible to him, you didn’t like his mates so you always tried stopping him meeting up with them and took him for yourself' she screamed 'That’s the biggest load of rubbish I have heard, you know that’s not true, I have spent as much time with you girls as I always have, so in that time he could see his mates who all of which I get on with, that's why there here tonight, and you often took my phone and read texts or were there when we were talking, it was more about him than me and you know it. That was an obvious excuse so don’t even bother trying to come up with another one because we all know it’s a lie. Now just get out, I don't want to look at you, you’re a skank and I can't believe we were ever friends. We were we never will be again. Leave!!' Chloe cried with everything she had left 'What about us, we can still be friends can’t we?' Jenna asked Lucy and I, 'What do you think?!' I shouted 'I'll take that as a no?!' She said sarcastically 'What about us Lucy?!' Lucy never answered, she just let Jenna walk out the room on her own as we turned to see her walking down the stairs and out of the door, Chloe fell to the floor and cried. I ran to her and cuddled her in my arms, she was my best friend and I hated seeing her upset. With that we heard a voice, it was a boys voice, there were two of them and neither of them seemed recognisable. We thought it might have been Joe, but it wasn’t, it was Chloe's brother and his best mate, Luke and Jake. They walked towards us and asked, 'Are you okay, we heard what happened?! I swear we didn’t know and I can promise you that neither of them will ever come near you again, we'll make sure of it. It's probably not the right time but need to tell you Chloe.' Jake was comforting her but no one expected what he was about to say. Apart from Luke, who had come to stand next to me, and started to hold my hand. I had spent a lot of time with him as he was Chloe's brothers. Whenever I stayed at hers, he was there and the two of us would start talking and joking. I had even been on holiday with him because of Chloe. There was a connection between us but nothing had ever happened. Then suddenly I heard what Jake was saying to Chloe 'I love you. I always have, I know your not in the right frame of mind at the moment but I needed to tell you' he said slowly Chloe turned to look at him and kissed him before cuddling into him and crying. As she did that Luke looked at me and kissed me. While Lucy had gone downstairs to tell everyone the party was over and they had to leave. We all thought Joe had gone, but obviously he came back and there was blood everywhere. Lucy walked downstairs to find Joe in a punch up with Luke's mates. She tried running in to stop it when we heard a scream, as Joe punched Lucy for telling Chloe about him and Jenna. Luke and I ran downstairs to see what had happened and we found Lucy laying on the floor, unconscious...

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    @bubblegum next ones up, just for you :P xxxxx
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      All Worth It In The End...Chapter14 I had a nice soothing shower and then got out and automatically looked in the mirror to check I looked okay before Connor saw me. It was all so weird I wasn't used to this, I had only ever stayed at Luis' once and even then, he was too drunk to see what I looked like so I didn't have to make an effort. There was no point, but with Connor, I was sure he had girls drooling all over him, here and back home. I had to look good otherwise he would get rid of me in a flash and find another girl who loved him, one that was prettier and one that he could show off as beautiful at every minute of the day. And that sure wasn't me. Everything I needed was outside of the bathroom; my clothes, my hairdryer, hair brush, straighteners, make up...The list was endless, I couldn’t do anything inside the bathroom, but brush my teeth, so I did that before walking out so my breath didn’t stink. No boy had ever seen me change before, and I wasn't sure about changing in front of Connor, he had already seen me in my bikini, that's the equivalent of my underwear but I had just got out of the shower so had to get changed, completely. I was hoping Connor wasn’t in the room so I could sneak out and get changed before seeing him then do my hair and make up afterwards. I pushed the door out slightly so I could just peak round to see I he was there, and there he was sitting perfectly on the bed waiting for me. He only had his boxers on and seemed to be falling asleep. His eyes shot towards me and caught hold of my glance, we were looking into each others eyes when he walked over towards me. There was no point me trying to hide any longer so I walked out of the room towards him too. I felt his warm arms wrap tightly around my waist and he kissed me, firstly on my forehead, and then gradually moved down to my lips. He kept kissing me until I finally pulled away playfully and walked to get my clothes. That was it, I was going to have to get over myself and just change in front of him, it was no big deal, after all he was my boyfriend. First I had to find what to wear, I had already worn my lace baby pink dress, so I thought instead today I would wear my playsuit. It was lime green, turquoise, white and, lilac all splattered neatly with small green buttons down the front and a belt matching the rest of it. I would then wear my wedges, white with a purple tint in the light, that had a bow on the top of them. Hopefully, he would like it. Thankfully, it was laying at the top of my suitcase as I had got it out the other night to choose whether to wear that or the dress I ended up wearing. That was it. I let go of the towel that was covering me, and let it drop to the floor, I had my back to Connor, but when it fell I could hear him take in a breath. I quickly made myself decent again, and put the playsuit on, zipped it up at the side and tied up the belt, then started to do my hair and make up, but that didn’t take long. When I was finally ready, I turned around and saw Connor standing there, ready to leave all handsome in his jeans and pale blue shirt. He took my hand and the two of us walked out of our room, towards the hotel restaurant...

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        One To Remember...Chapter3 We walked towards them trying not to draw any attention to ourselves so when we took them outside no one noticed that we had gone. Lucy and I scurried over like a mouse and asked to speak to the two of them alone. Joe knew what was coming by the anger in our voices and obviously he knew we both knew what had been going on as we caught him red handed there was no denying it. He looked worried and everyone but Chloe could see the excuses running through his head, he was trying to come up with something quickly before she found out so she didn’t punish him for it. We got outside and you could still hear the music blaring from inside and my ears were still buzzing from the sounds, however far in the background it was. Jenna was still up in Chloe's room, when I looked up I saw her staring out the window at us, knowing the conversation we were about to have. I was going to break the news as I was closest to Chloe and wanted to be there for her as I could tell her nicely and that way it was a friend telling her the truth, and not him changing the story and speaking lies. Just as I was about to start talking, Joe jumped in before I could start. 'I need to tell you something' he blurted out 'Okay babe, what's wrong?' Chloe replied timidly 'It's about Jenna, she has a thing for me and she just came onto me upstairs…' 'You pig!!' Lucy couldn’t help herself, she had seen everything and Jenna didn’t start this it was all him 'What?! What is going on, someone start talking NOW!!' she screamed with tears running down her face 'Chloe, he cheated on you with Jenna. They have been talking and leading each other on as if they were going to start something and Lucy walked in on them just as Joe kissed Jenna. Neither of them stopped each other they just carried on without a care in the world. I am so sorry, we have just found out. You know we are here for you…' I said apologetically. It hurt so much having to break her heart She fell to the floor in a heap and was crying, a lot. 'It's not what it sounds like!' Joe said frantically 'Get out!! Just, get out and don’t come back you're disgusting!!' she cried 'I'm sorry, let me explain, please, baby?' 'I said get out!!' she screamed while standing up and staring at him He stormed back inside and pushed past everyone that was in there. Chloe followed after the anger and pain showing on her face not caring what people saw. Someone standing close the CD player turned the music off as they thought it would mean people could find out what was going on and that it would be more tense. Joe went straight to the door and left slamming it behind him. Chloe then turned and charged up the stairs, straight for her bedroom 'You bitch!!'...

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        Very well written. by the way wat happened 2 ur other story All Worth it In the End? R u gonna carry on with it? I need the next chapter of this now it's too amazing!!! Is Joe going to start dating Jenna???? Can't wait!!!
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        @bubblegum it hasn't ended I have just been busy lately and writing this one they will both carry on soon xxxx
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          One To Remember...Chapter2 Lucy stormed out of the room and saw me standing there. She gave me a sorry look and went downstairs. Jenna was just sitting on the bed trying to redeem herself from the embarrassment, she had no idea I was standing there as her back was me. I walked in trying not to let her realise I was there, and once I had reached her she turned around to walk out as if nothing had happened. I slapped her. I had no idea where it came from but she had just wrecked my best friends relationship and what made It worse was the fact that she was meant to be our best friend too! The four of us together, we had been best friends since we were 3, we met in play school and were friends instantly, all the other girls at the play school wanted to come and play with us but we wouldn’t let them, it was us four and that was the way we liked it. Every weekend since the age of 7 we would stay over each others houses taking it in turns who's house. We did the lot make overs, movies, junk food, gossip, talk about the guys we liked and the rest of us would rate them, who we thought made good couples and who didn't. And when one of us needed it we would look after them. Last year, Lucy's mum was diagnosed with cancer and Lucy was devastated, we had never been closer and we all looked after both her and her mum and did whatever we could to help them through it. When she recovered and had won her battle we through a little party for her mum, because she was like a second mum to us. We had grown up living in her house as well as our own and she knew just as much about me and the other girls as our mums did. To think after all that Jenna could still go and do this to Chloe. She knew along with the rest of us how much Chloe liked Joe!! At the sleepovers every week we would talk about it, for months Joe's name would always pop up in conversation about who one of fancied and of course Chloe did. When they finally got together, she made sure he didn’t take over her time and she still stayed over every week but she had spent the day with him and often text him during the night. We didn't mind, we were happy for her, she was happy. Jenna was always asking what they had been up to and if they had gone any further than the past week, she always seemed to be interested in their love #life. Looking back she might have been too interested. She had just told Lucy how she had been instigating an affair to start and that's probably why she wanted to know how things were. If they were having any problems that would make Joe quite open for another relationship on the side. Poor Chloe, how were we going to tell her. I walked out of the room leaving Jenna on the bed with a red hand print on her cheek from the slap but I didn't care. I no longer wanted anything to do with her. In that one moment she had completely ruined our friendship, and her friendship with Lucy and most of all Chloe, over a boy!! I went to the bathroom to wash my face, to check I looked okay and not worried otherwise Chloe would know something was up. As I walked in, I saw Lucy standing by the sink doing exactly the same, 'What are we going to do?!' She wailed 'I have no idea' I said trying not to cry The two of us decided to walk back downstairs together and talk to Joe and Chloe, she deserved to know and he wasn't going to tell her any time soon, but there was no need to make a scene of it and let everyone else find out at the same time as Chloe did. So we left the bathroom and trudged towards the stairs looking over the banister trying to find them both and we soon saw them, making out in the corner. That scumbag showing no remorse…

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          Write more this is brilliant!!xxx
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          @bubblegum aww thanks will do xxxx
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