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Russian. Parawhore. Lovatic. Follow me on Instagram: kallys Follow me on Twitter: tweet_alice

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Traducciones   13 años

Jenny Loo: Chapter 11(finally!) Awakened. So dark. I feel like I'm in the coffin. Something is on my face. I took it. It's a cloth. Something is really wrong. I thought, I'll awake in the hell. So. Where I am? I was lying on the old bed. Covered with dirty white cloth. In my mental clinic clothes. In the middle of my chest I've seen a big bloody hole. How can I be alive? Only after this I've noticed several bodies in the room. They're on beds and covered with cloth like me. I heard the footsteps. I was pretending that I'm sleeping. "New day!" "Haha, Rob, shut up or you gonna wake these corpses!" "Haha, they're all dead!*smooch*" What? Am I dead? Or they just didn't kill me? So I'm gonna pretend that I'm dead. "Leana, how do you think? Should I take his heart? Cause he stinks like death! It's duisgusting!" "Oh, dear! Really bad! But we need his heart for researching! So go on! Haha!" Leana? Hm, I heard that name before... Oh, yes, isn't it Leana Jenkins and her husband Robert Jenkins? They're experts in strange anomalies. They research the bodies of the underworld citizens. Dead bodies. Ok. But how they do it... It's duisgusting. "Hey, Rob, am I wrong saying that this guy was moving?" "No, I've noticed him too. Let's talk with him." Omg, is it me? "Yes, it's you! Hi, I'm Leana and this is my hubby Robert! Why are you still alive?" "Um... Can you say... Where am I?" "A morgue. Our personal morgue." Jeez. I'm in trouble, if these guys want to kill me again. Oh, and I just remembered that I have nothing to remember. Where's my memory? Oh my god.

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Ok, this isn't like another chapters, cause Ryan doesn't know that he was a murderer and that's why he behaves very.... Good ok, say me what you think about it
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Wait huh ? I'm really confused can u explain the whole Jenny loo in shorthand ?
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@Dj_Mac actually, no. Cause there are so many scenes... You can read them all, they're not so long
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    Traducciones   13 años

    Sorry, Guys: I absolutely forgot about Opuss... Now I need to get myself to work. I will continue the "Jenny Loo" chapters. And also I would like to write something new. Not a scary story, you know? But I have some old stories from the past, which I can upload here! they are have this scary thing. So be ready! Kallys, love~

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    Cool
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      Jenny Loo: Chapter 10 When I meet unknown. "You."- she said. My eyes closed. Keep yourself steady. No, why I must suffer all this?! "You Little Liar!!!" I punched Jenny Loo. She banged against the leather wall and fell on the floor. That was hurt. Her eyes were open. I saw a nosebleed. "She's dead"- I thought. Then three people came into the room and tied my arms. I didn't object. Yes, kill me. I earn this. Yes, I'm going crazy. The world is running around me. My mind is blown. What do you want from me?! I woke up in the metal room. "What..?!" "Shut up and listen. You are true murderer. Don't lie that this girl was guilty. Her death is on your conscience. Keep your mouth shut. You deserve only cruel execution now." "Who's talking?"- I asked. "That is no matter." "I need to know!!" "Shut up, ok? You irritates me." "I won't shut my mouth! Who are you?! I'll kill myself if you won't tell me!" "Go on. I don't give a damn about this." "Urgh!" "You're pretty stupid. Aren't you?" "Shut up." "Ok, I'm obedient unlike you." Silence. "Ok, now."- I said. "What now?" "Death coming." "I said I don't give a damn about this." Next moment what I remember is ... "BANG!!!!" Crush and I'm almost dead.

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      Lotte

      Great. I may be stupid 2 ask this but is this the last chapter
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      Kallys

      @TheStory no, it is almost last chapter I think 10 chapters are not enough. I'll write more, I think about the continuation
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      Lotte

      Good your story are AMAZING
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        Jenny Loo: Chapter 9 When I see the truth. "Ugh.." - I thought. Policemen took me to the mental clinic. Yeah, that sounds strange, but they said that I killed Alexandra. White walls. White floor. People in white uniform. Me in white uniform with tied arms. They said I'm crazy. Ok, let's think. I was standing in front of Alexandra. I saw that Jenny Loo was behind her. Then I saw Jenny Loo killed Alexandra with a knife. That's all. BUT. I realized that something's wrong. If Jenny Loo is in mental clinic, how could she appear near my house? My mind was like cracked. The people in white uniform brought me to the white room with leather walls. And I saw HER. " No!!! Are you kidding?! " I must live there with Jenny Loo. "Hi, uncle. Long time no see." People in white uniform closed the door. "Jenny, please, die..."-I whispered. "No, uncle. I don't want to. I must tell you all. I'm not a murderer. I'm a victim." "What are you saying?!" "I'm not a murderer!"- she cried. "So who's the murderer, if that's not you?!" Again. Silence. Jenny Loo looked at me. "You." Sorry for short chapter. I'm so busy right now, but I wrote this little piece

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        Привет))) а ты общаться не хочешь?))) я кстати понимаю, если нет, сам тут только с англичанами кручусь)
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        Lotte

        Plz write the next 1 soon
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        Kallys

        @octopuss в каком смысле общаться?
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          Jenny Loo Chapter 8 When you doing something bad. I was lying on the bed, when someone knocked in my door. Everything was great. I hid Emily's body. I swear, police won't find her. I wiped up the floor from blood. Everything will be alright. I opened the door. "Hello, I'm Alexandra Blue. Do you know me?" Her eyes were light grey. And hair was dark blond with curly endings. "Um... Hello, I'm Ryan... Ryan Jeston. Yeah, I know you." "Ok, can I come in?" "What do you want?" "Hm. Do you really know me?" "Yeah, I just don't trust you." "Ha, ok, let's talk here. But then I need to come in." "Let's talk." She was angry, I saw. I smiled in my mind. "Do you know about the crimes in the city?" "Of course." "Well, do you know something about the murderer?" And in that moment I decided to tell her everything. And don't blame myself. I became the worst person in the world. "Yeah. The murderer is my niece. Do you know that terrible girl with red braids and green dress?" "Oh... Are you sure? Because... We just caught her last night." These words punched me in my head. "Can you show me her?"- Alexandra felt worries in my voice. "Sorry, but no. She's ready to go at the mental clinic." "What? She's crazy?" "Yep. She killed our detective. And then I began to work instead of him." "She killed all the people." "What are you saying?" "You need to kill her before she escape." Everywhere was silence. I began to breath deeply. "What's going on?"- Alexandra asked. Then I saw Jenny Loo behind her. And the policemen that were sitting in the car, began to run to Alexandra. Jenny Loo in one moment became a monster. Her face was all in blood. Dress was all in blood. Teeth were all in blood. Eyes were all in blood. She held a knife that was all in blood. Around her was ALL IN BLOOD. My eyes were widely open. "DIE!!!" - I screamed. In next moment Alexandra's head fell to my feet.

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          Lotte

          Plz continue soon ; great
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          @TheStory aw thanks! I'll write... But I have no time, cause of school
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          It's fine
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